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Member Since: 10 Feb 2012 07:25pm

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I'm a writer here on witty. I really want people to read my stories so try to get other wittians to read them! THANKS!
-oncloudnine
  1. oncloudnine oncloudnine
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    October 30, 2012 6:46pm UTC
    should i contnue? i know it has been months but i just reread my story and i love it!

  2. oncloudnine oncloudnine
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    February 26, 2012 1:49pm UTC
    I am only getting two faves a chapter..I think i'm gonna stop the story. I might write another one in a few days... idk...i just feel like i am writing for nobody to read...it really sux. its a bad feeling.

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    February 20, 2012 10:38pm UTC
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    February 12, 2012 9:09pm UTC
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  7. oncloudnine oncloudnine
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    February 11, 2012 4:26pm UTC
    Is anybody even reading?!?!?!? Should I just stop writing this story. I poured my heart out into this and I am getting like no responses and advice/feedback :o..

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    February 11, 2012 1:54pm UTC
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  9. oncloudnine oncloudnine
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    February 10, 2012 11:07pm UTC
    Song brings love
    Chapter 4
    We end up on the bed. It is only the second date so I don't really want to go that far, but it is Jack, like my best friend. We end up kissing and it gets very intense. I start to get sweaty but I don't want to take off my pants or shirt because I don't want to be the reason of my first time. I want it to be a group decision. So we are kissing, and kissing and kissing. Suddenly, Jack says "Can't kiss anymore.. Need more of you."
    I don't want to do anything just yet so I tell him to stand up and we walk to the center of the room. Sure enough, he is completely erec. ted. I just need to ask him one question before my plan starts. I turn on the lights. Hi babe, I say. He greets me with a kiss. I ask him if he is a virgin and he promises yes. he said he was waiting for me. After, I give him a hug and tell him I love him. We go back in bed and he starts rubbing my thighs. His hand reaches to take off my pants but I stop them and then go to sleep. We cuddle for the rest of the night.
    It is Saturday night and my track meet was cancelled. I am a serious runner and I have a runners body(long legs, thin, fit ect) . Jack tells me that there is a huge party going on and he wants me to be his guest. I put on a crop top that says love (http://www.forever21.com/Product/Product.aspx?BR=f21&Category=top_graphict&ProductID=2087532274&VariantID=) and jean shorts. I arrive at the party and it is crazy.
    There are drinks everywhere and people grinding and kissing. I find myself an empty room so i cantext Jack and tell him that I am here. I tell Siri to text him while I freshen up. Then, when I get back in the room to get my phone, I feel hands grab my waist. It is Josh, my ex-boyfriend.
    *sorry that this is a short chapter* I needed a clipphanger!! I'll write more tomorrow! And thanks for the 3
    faves!!!!
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    February 10, 2012 9:21pm UTC
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  11. oncloudnine oncloudnine
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    February 10, 2012 9:16pm UTC
    Song brings love
    Chapter 2
    It is Friday. I have about to hours till I meet Jack. We decided that we would have dinner by the town center because school ended late. My best friends, Ana and Allie come to my house. "YAY, you finally get a date with Jack!" "Its not a date", I remind Ana. "Whatever," Says Allie, "At least you can kiss...and maybe even more.. if you know what I me-" "Allie!!" I scream. "I have less than two hours to look good! Now help!" Allie and Ana go through my under drawers and pull out my pushup and a blue lace thongs. "Gosh guys," I say, "I am 16, and it is my first date." They just shrug and told me that they would make me look stunning. I pick up white short ripped denim shorts and put on a colorful sort-of cropped top to match. (http://www.forever21.com/Product/Product.aspx?BR=f21&Category=top_graphict&ProductID=2000034708&VariantID=) I make it so that the cropped top doesn't make me look to slu tty. Anyway, I put on flipflpops and do my eyes with mascara, eyeliner and teal eyeshadow. I got my money and go.
    The doorbell rigns so I get it. While I am running, my shirt goes up exposing my bra. I quickly pull it down when I see an amused look on Jack's face when he sees me openning the door. "Sorry!! I didn't mean to." I say. "It's fine." he says, "Now I owe you no shirt." I blush, then he stops and says "Sorry. I know you just want to be friends." I reply with a okay then and we set out for dinner.
    We end up eating at the Italian place near the beach. It is really nice. At the end of dinner, I get out my wallet but Jack insists on paying. We walk along the beach and he brings out two note cards and tells us each to write what we are feelings. I feel bold and brave, so I decide to write how I feel about Jack. I write it down and we show eachother our cards. Jack's says...
    "We have the same card!" We both lean in for a kiss. The kiss is magical. I have had lots of sleepovers with Jack before so we go to his house to spend the night. I text my family and tell them. Suddenly, out phones both beep.
    It is a email from the music head. She realized that the 9th grade really wanted to do the musical so it is cancelled. Oh well, at least Jack and I are together. Then Jack says, "You know, that song from the musical, the Song brings love to us."
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  12. oncloudnine oncloudnine
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    February 10, 2012 7:39pm UTC
    Song brings love
    Chapter 1
    "Pick me up at 3:30", is what I tell my dad. I go to school and end up being about 10 minutes early. I go see my friends and then go put my things away. There he is. I see him again. Right before the test. "Hi Alex." I joke around and say "where were you yesterday..class was GREAT without you..haha!" (a bit flirty) He replies, "I had the stomach bug.." Me "Ewww Jack! That is gross!" Jack "okayy then dont come to close." Then we take the test.
    It is a Thursday afternoone. For some weird reason my whole class has to do a musical. I admit I like to sing, but I really don't want to be it. I audition for one of the leads because there is this really mean person that keeps on saying that she will get the part. I want to get the part just to make her mad. Long story short, I end up getting the part.
    It is time for a big duet that me and Jack sing together. We end up kissing at the end but the teacher said that we should practice the song a bit more. By the end of the song, the teacher, Ms. Noone said that she likes our chemestry. She wants more...
    *After School waiting to be picked up*
    Jack stops me. His brown hair covers his beutiful brown eyes. "Hey Alex. I was thinking that we could..umm..you know...maybe get lunch tomorrow..."
    I give him a confused look, because who would want to have lunch with me?
    "You know...just to go over things for the musical..."
    My face drops with hope. Oh well. Who would want to go out with me?
    "Sure. Tomorrow after school."
    I better look hot tomorrow.
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