niki12354
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1 decade ago
you dont need to follow me.. but ill def follow you back if ya do :) reply
Full_Of_Secrets_And_Lies
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1 decade ago
I think you need to slow down the story and maybe add more dialouge. It's just my opinion. Other than that I think the story line is pretty good. It just needs to be more descriptive and stuff reply
lala1234 · 1 decade ago
Haha true @emily1534
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emily1534 · 1 decade ago
probably how we feel when we log on and see 4.
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confessionsbyanonymous · 1 decade ago
c:
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lala1234 · 1 decade ago
Haha soo true @abbygrace101
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abbygrace101 · 1 decade ago
Worse when you see them buying bras at victoria's secret..lol (:
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Belladixie17 · 1 decade ago
Codyy ♥
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albaniangurl123 · 1 decade ago
:D
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lala1234 · 1 decade ago
sent request :D
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xxkaufman3xx · 1 decade ago
xkaufman31x
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xnevershoutshwilly · 1 decade ago
Comment(:
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lala1234 · 1 decade ago
Okay thanks! I'll check them out!
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nicolenoel97 · 1 decade ago
I think some of my quotes are good:)
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lala1234 · 1 decade ago
I will :)
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niki12354 · 1 decade ago
you dont need to follow me.. but ill def follow you back if ya do :)
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Full_Of_Secrets_And_Lies · 1 decade ago
I think you need to slow down the story and maybe add more dialouge. It's just my opinion. Other than that I think the story line is pretty good. It just needs to be more descriptive and stuff
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lala1234 · 1 decade ago
LOOL :p
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_walkingdisaster · 1 decade ago
this legit just happened to me five minutes ago .. i yelled at me sister to stop reading what i was typing !
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lala1234 · 1 decade ago
thank you all for the favourites :)
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Nlibby7 · 1 decade ago
Still Do That<33
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chelsadels · 1 decade ago
uh, i still do that.
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