XoXoLaLaLaXoXo · 1 decade ago
honestly i believe you could of said that a little nicer, i take constructive critisism alot, and ive never gotton that much before. did you read the whole story? i appreciate you trying to help, maybe next time you could be slightly niccer. this website was made for people to have fun and i came on it to practice my writing. thank you for your comment, but some wording you used was not needed. thanks. youu dont need to follow up on my stories if they dont intrest you :) have a nicee day. happy writingg
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1Danielle2 · 1 decade ago
k.
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