grownsimba · 1 year ago
hey! you wrote this in 2013, it's 2013. I don't particularly like amnesiafics, but I'm enjoying this one.

did you keep up writing?
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you made it til' 2015* · 1 decade ago
12! (:

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BeautifulLove09 · 1 decade ago
hmmm.....I think you should do one that's sort of....scary? I guess. Idk. I don't know what to tell you considering you've made amazing stories on your own. But i think it should be something that has to do with like suicide awarness. You know.... Have it be about a girl that harms herself, whether it be an eating disorder, or like cutting, and at the end make it have a lesson on not harming yourself. But if thats too strong, I recomend making it about a new girl starting a new life in the beginning, then add a "twist" to it :)
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keep_on_smiling · 1 decade ago
This story could have been longer buy the climax came too quickly, you should learn to make stories longer by making more events happen first but I liked this a lot :)
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*Eternally lost...** · 1 decade ago
I really liked this, mainly because my name is Olivia and I go by Liv!!!!!
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dancingismylife213 · 1 decade ago
ASDFGHJKL MY BIRTHDAY IS FEBRUARY 13 OMG. NO ONE EVER USES MY BIRTHDAY FOR ANYTHING
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its_just_kaitlin · 1 decade ago
I really liked this! U should definatelyyy keep writing... Your good at love stories! (; idk mayb somthig bout a cheater? Idkkk
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wizard4238 · 1 decade ago
SO AWESOME, and sad to see it end :'(
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SplendidJenni · 1 decade ago
keepp writting pleasee !
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sbona123 · 1 decade ago
please keep writing ! this story is amazing. Avery should start to get death threats & hate from that guy who she dated afew chapters ago for one day.
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crustacea0305 · 1 decade ago
please keep writing. uhhhhhhhhh maybe they should have a big fight and break up but then get back together and get married. . . ? I DONT KNOW. just pleaseeeee keep writing
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gracegreene · 1 decade ago
casually on my personal account_ BUT I AM DYING AHSHFKAKD MY STORY MY STORY. MYYY STORY IS ON THE FIRST PAGE OF TOP QUOTES THEY GROW UP SO FAST ASDFGHJKL
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wizard4238 · 1 decade ago
love this, love this story, <3 :)
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wizard4238 · 1 decade ago
O.O watching for next chapter, anyyyy day now
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InnerMe · 1 decade ago
i CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT Chapter!!!
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00justxaxperson00 · 1 decade ago
will you post agin tonight please?
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countrygirl123 · 1 decade ago
I love this chapterrr!
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loserbitch* · 1 decade ago
69th faver, just saying c;
Btw love the story cant wait to see what happens ;D
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finding_nemo · 1 decade ago
You have a gym midterm? What the h.ell is it about?
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theexpressfulsideofme · 1 decade ago
Favorite Chapter!! ;)
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