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i write stories. I want you to tell me what you think for reall.
 
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My stories:
[Alice's Nightmare]
(You have my heart...Until Unless you break it)
  1. illbeyourherox3 illbeyourherox3
    posted a quote
    February 28, 2010 1:17pm UTC
    Alice's Nightmare
    Chapter 6: Thats the dress!
    We got to the plaza and met up with with Drake and Sal. Wierd, Sal's jaw dropped when Sara turned the corner. She didnt dress special or anything. Hm. She had black leggings and a purple dress. Mmk?
    Drake came up to me and kissed me on the forehead. Of course, still no I love you or real kiss. We went to Lord&Taylor. And there it was! The blue-green dress, that would bring out my eyes, it would make my eyes look like the ocean. I know your probably like doesnt she have green eyes? Yes, but they change haha. Depending on lighting and what I wear. When I saw the dress my mind went blind and I went into a blank stare. Drake thought I saw another guy so he looked around angerly, saw the dress than was fine. I snapped out of it when I heard a slapping sound. I turned around to see Sal being slapped by the stranger he was just making out with. Than I saw him ask Sara for the money. Maybe they were playing Truth or Dare? idontknoww. He must be desperate . :D ... I call Sara over to the dressing room, and asked Sara to hold my stuff. Of course, she said yes.
    I walk out in the dress. And Sara screamed, than said "Drake HAS too see you." She ran and dragged Drak in. His jaw dropped. The dress wasnt long, or too short. It was just above the knee, the bottom was puffy, the top was tight, and strappless. He came up to me. He looked like he couldnt speak. Until finally he whispered, "I love you" in my ear. I was about to saw it back, but he started to kiss me before I could say anything. His lips were so soft and smooth. The kiss seamed to last forever. And I was happy that way. In between kisses I said "iloveyoutoo" than we stopped kissing and smiled, with our foreheads leaning against each other. I never wanted this moment to end. I was so happy, and I could tell he was too. Than I saw Sara, she was giggling and texting? Uhm, okay? So than Drake said he had to go find an outfit to match mine. He kissed my cheeck, and walked away. When he left I couldnt stop smiling.
    Than my cell phone rang. My stuff was with Sara so I grabbed my phone. Read the text. "SOMEONE HAD THEIR FIRST KISS IN LORD AND TAYLOR!-Sara(: " wow. really? Than my phone started beepingg. I was getting a picture. "Sara?" I asked, knowing she took a picture. She just giggled. I ran to the dressing room and mouthed out "thank you"
    I had a dress I just needed shoes. OH, the cutest pair of heels over there, just $50, yay!
    Okay so I was in the line to pay. I waited for awhile. When I got to the front of the line, put my stuff down and was waiting for her to ring it up so I can pay, someone from behind me covered my eyes. "Drake" i laughed. He kissed me and paid. It was almost $1000 I got soo mad at him. I wanted to pay. I asked him why he paid. He hugged me started to kiss me and say "Thats the dress!"

  2. illbeyourherox3 illbeyourherox3
    posted a quote
    February 28, 2010 12:47pm UTC
    Alice's Nightmare
    Chapter 5: Wow!
    They let us go with a warning. I texted my neighbor: Can you get us now?"
    Reply: I'm outside, there is so much traffic I didn't even get to leave.
    Ten minutes later: We are home. Sara and I sit and watch todays recorded All My Children. Since we are in school, its set to record Mon-Fri at 1PM on channel 5. I love that show.
    All of a sudden its 7:30. The house phone rings. We jump so high, lol.
    "Hya"
    "hey, its Gabby"
    I didnt saw anything, what was I supposed to say?
    "Thanks for inviting me to you party tomorrow, it'll be fun since your parents aren't home. Jane and Danny are coming too!"
    Before I can say anything they hang up. Well,if there is gonna be a party than I'll have to clean up. First my room, than the living room. Now its 10:19PM and we are exhuasted. We lay down and pass out withing 2 minutes.
    I wake up to the smell of pancakes and toast. "morning!" Sara yelled.
    "mmmmm hi" I say while I wipe the sneepy-ness out of my eyes, I check my phone, its 10:22AM, 3 missed calls, 20 texts. UGH!
    20 new texts:
    krissy: PARTY! be there at 6
    drake: Why didnt you invite me to your party, babe?
    unknown: PARTYYYY! ;)
    sophie: woohoo! Party!
    The rest, I decided not to readm because I already know what they are about. Instead, I hit erase inbox.
    Than I got another text: "What are you gonna wear, I want our colors to match. ;)" I read the name: Drake<3. haha. He's so darn cute and perfect in every SINGLE way. I love him, no we have not said it yet. We didnt have our first kiss either. I pictured it. I dreamed about it. I told you one of my dreams, HORRIBLE!
    Anyway, I wasn't sure what to wear so I texted: 'hmmm, I have nothing, so I will go shopping, want to come?"
    "sure"
    "yayy! but Sara's with me, as usual"
    "okay, i'll bring Sal."
    "Ugh! Fine."
    When I saw "Sal" I got sick. Something about him set me off... Hmm. Oh yeah, he broke Jill's heart. But now, what does it matter, right?

  3. illbeyourherox3 illbeyourherox3
    posted a quote
    February 26, 2010 1:55pm UTC
    Alice's Nightmare
    Chapter 4: Movies are supposed to be fun
    Sara was the first to arrive. It only took five minutes for her to pack and come over, that doesnt surprise me because she only lives 3 houses down. When she came she wasn't in her pajamas. Good, I wanted to go to the mall. We waited 1 hour and 45 minutes for Jill and Kaylyn. They are always together so they had to go to both house, which took longer. So when they got here it was 4:50PM. We wanted to see a movie so we got ready.
    Kaylyn's brother, Tim is 18 with a license, yay! That was our ride. Shoot he lives 2 hours away. Ughh! I'll ask my neighbor. Tess, my neighbor, said yes. So, we were on our way.
    Finally we get our tickets and pick our seat. I had to go to the bathroom, and Jill wanted snacks. So we both went. First we went to the bathroom, because there was no line. Than we started walking to the snack line.
    Is that? IT IS! Ugh, and we see little miss popular. Gabby with her strawberry-blonde hair in a frenchbraid. She was wearing a sparkly shirt with skinny jeans and boots. Who dresses to see a movie? Than I see her "sidekick": Daniella. She has her blonde curly hair in a loose side ponytail. To make it worse, Jill screamed "GABS" ran and hugged her. I was in shock. I just stood there. Than when they started walking towards me, I ran back to theather 2.
    "Pshhtt Saraa!"
    "What?"
    "Gabby is here!"
    "no way!"
    "mhm, Jill ran up and hugged her!"
    "mmk weird much?"
    "Daniella was there too."
    "watch, shes gonna be with Kaylyn."
    Next I see Daniella walk in and Kaylyn got up and screamed "DANNY!" Sara's and my jaw dropped.
    Next thing you know, security comes to take me and Sara because we "slapped" the othe other girls. Jill or Kaylyn didn't say anything. They let the buff security guys take us away.

  4. illbeyourherox3 illbeyourherox3
    posted a quote
    February 26, 2010 9:33am UTC
    Alice's Nightmare
    Chapter 3: Weird...? (continued)
    I quickly put on a cute outfit: aeropostale tank and sweater, abercrombie skirt, and flats. Good thing its Friday. I start walking down the stairs, WAIT why are there suitcases? "Mom!" I scream.
    "yes?"
    "are you leaving"
    "Ben and I are going down the shore."
    "for how long?"
    "since you have next week off.--"
    "I do?" I cut her off. :D
    "yes. yes." She said as she started walking out.
    "WAIT, can Sara, Jill, and Kaylyn come over?"
    "mhm, just make sure to clean up"
    "thanks" i whispered as she slammed the door in my face. "thanks" I mumbled again.
    I ran to school, it was only down the block. Today was fun, I guess. I have all classes with Sara and three (1st, 5th, 8th) with Jill and Kaylyn. Today in 2nd period someone wrote a note about the teacher Mrs. Guerra, the Spanish teacher. The teachers pet Angie told her. And the writer, Jeff, had to read it out loud. It was hilarious, because it was saying how hot he thought she was, and how he couldn't pay attention because "her beauty" got in the way(lmao!). For lunch I had a hamburger with fries and a lemon Snapple. Surprisingly there was no drama at the lunch table (4th period). Okay, so its 8th period with five minutes left, and they have a fire-drill. I grab everything, and so does Sara. While we are outside, we just ditch and walk home.
    I hear my cell phone and run to go get it. Sara's calling, great I can invite her now.
    "Sar!"
    "AL!"
    "I HAVE TO TELL YOU SOMETHING!"
    "okay, go."
    "My parents are.. Let's get Jill and Kaylyn on the phone."
    "they are"
    "oh hey guys"
    "ha, hiiiiii!" they scream.
    "Guys my parents are out for the weekend, they said you can come over."
    "cool" Jill said
    "yippie" Kaylyn screached
    "be right there" said Sara

  5. illbeyourherox3 illbeyourherox3
    posted a quote
    February 25, 2010 9:43pm UTC
    Alice's Nightmare
    Chapter 3: Weird...?
    I ran to the poster and ripped it off the wall. It was a picture of my singing to my stuffed animals! How did Gabby get this? Why would she do this... DRAKE! I quickly texted him: where is your camera?
    No reply /:
    "seriously?"
    "with my gf"
    "i dont have it?"
    "your not my gf, Gabby is"
    I started screaming. Yesterday we were so happy. We had our first real kiss. He finally said "I love you, bab"
    Than I hear my mom scream "WAKE UP, YOU ARE HAVING A BAD DREAM! I quickly sat up, rubbed my eyes and checked my phone. No texts. My life was back to normal!!(:
    (to be continued. im kinda tired.. sorry!)

  6. illbeyourherox3 illbeyourherox3
    posted a quote
    February 23, 2010 4:11pm UTC
    Alice's Nightmare
    Chapter 2: Friends/Enemies
    I have always had many friends. My bestfriends are Sara, Jill, and Kaylyn.
    I met Sara in second grade. We fought over the glue sticks and the purple crayon, ironically we hate purple now. Later we laughed about it and became as close as sisters. SHe has brown wavy hair that lays just above her hips.
    Jill and Kaylyn I met at camp, two years ago. THey think Drake is cute, I don't blame them. :D Jill has oin-straight black hair above her shoulders, she has dark red highlights. Kaylyn has extremely curly (long) red hair.
    I trust Sara the most, we hang out all the time. My mom said that since I'm an only child, like Sara, we are always together, like sisters. Sara is the one I trust most I tell her EVERYTHING! From who bumped into me to all my problems.
    Just like I have friends, I have enemies. Gabby, she's the popular one who hates everyone, except Jane and Daniella. (even though i have a popular boyfriend, i am NOT popular) She especially hates me because Drake is her crush. Oops, ahha.
    I called Sara to tell her what happened yesterday.
    "Okay, so yesterday Gabby pushed me into a locker and said 'if you don't stay away from my man, I'll make your life even WORSE!' I just laughed in her face."
    I'm worried for today, what if she does something?
    I go to school and everyone was starting to laugh and was staring at me? I'm like what is going on? Than I see what all the commotion was about...
    there is more coming soon. I have Chapters 3&4 done. but i have to go now. sorry this one is short. tell me what you think. (:

  7. illbeyourherox3 illbeyourherox3
    posted a quote
    February 22, 2010 7:27pm UTC
    tell me what you thinkk..... my friend encouraged me to write this she said i was good, i'm not sure. i need your opinion. Be harshh. Thanks :D
    this started as an English essay, but i added more and edited it alot... please tell me the truthh.
    Alice's Nightmare
    Chapter 1: Drake.
    I'm Alice, I'm fifteen. I have dirty-blonde hair like my mom (Lisa) and green eyes like my dad (Ben). I have the perfect life. Good grades, popular boyfriend, and great looks/style. My boyfriends name is Drake. We have been going out since we were twelve, of course back then that ment nothing. It was just like being friends. How we met was ironic and kind of cute.
    It was July, I was at the park with mom. She went to the bathroom and I started walking around. I saw the icecream truck, reached into my pocket and found $5. As I was walking up, the car started pulling away. My eyes started tearing up, it was hot out and I had nothing to drink or nothing cold to eat. I sat on the bench and waited for my mom. I noticed someone sitting next to me.
    "Hello! I'm Drake" the kid yelled.
    "Hi I'm Alice"
    "I saw you wanted icecream" he licked his icecream, I noticed the icecream and got upset, but said nothing. "I'm so sorry you never got some" *lick*
    "yeah I--" he cut me off
    "you want mine?"
    "uhmm. Sure" how could I say no? I was super hot and needed something cold before I passed out.
    "Hey, can I have your number?"
    I saw my mom from the corner of my eye. I wrote down my cell number fast, but neat and threw the paper at him. I said text me s o o n!
    The paper looked like this:
    Alice: 555-2497 ♥
    My mom kept asking about the icecream. I told her I had $7, even though it was a lie. I think she believed me. Later I was texting Drake. I gave him my aim, its easier. This was a month later, over aim.
    alicexo: hey!
    drake1: hi
    alicexo: how have you been?
    drake1: i have something more important to ask you.
    alicexo: like?
    drake1: wanna be my girl?
    alicexo: sure. (:
    That was the best day ever. Or so I thought.
    As we got older we began to act more like boyfriend and girlfriend. There is one time when we were fourteen, last year, we walked aound the park, holding hand. When it got dark, it also got cold. I was shivering, Drake gave me his hoodie. I knew he was cold, I can tell. I told him to take it back, he said "No, I'd rather you be warm" and kissed me on the forehead. I was happy, felt like I was in heaven.
    tell me what you think please. Should i stop this one? Or keep making the series?

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