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Hello beautiful <3
My names Ariane and this is my writing account :)
right now I'm writing Rough, Unknown, Waters
Please check it out :)
 


  1. daretodreamm daretodreamm
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    July 16, 2012 11:13am UTC
    rough,unknown,waters
    chapter two~ ***
    Cameron's P.O.V.
    Oh god, it's all my fault. I'm the one who let her do this, I should have tried to stop her better. She could be dead and it would be all my fault, I started pacing around her hospital room, "It wasn't your fault," Sofia said putting her hand on my shoulder. I breathed in deeply, "Yeah it is," I said basically in a whisper. A nurse came in, "Is she okay?", I immediately said, she looked at me narrowing her eyes, "Are you her boyfriend?" she asked, I shook my head, "Just friends, but is she okay?", I asked again. "We're starting to get her heart beating and she should wake up in a couple of hours." I signed, a smile planted on my face, "See, I told you she would be okay, "Sofia said, "She was in a coma for 3 days, she could have died 'cause of me." She opened her arms and gave me a hug.
    I looked around her room, her siblings and mom were sitting in it, and some people from school were outside. We sat there for about 30 more minutes until one of nurses said that no one could come in. Once we came into the waiting room, I came up to her mother, she was crying alot, "Don't worry she's going to be okay, "I said to her. She looked up to me, "I already lost my h-husband and I almost l-lost her, " she said stuttering. I breathed in deeply and gave her a hug, "Well we're lucky that she's okay."
    Jade's P.O.V.
    I opened my eyes, where was I? It looked like a hospital, why was I in a hospital? All I remember was I went surfboarding this morning with Cameron. My head hurts so much, I put my hand onto my head. I looked around the room, it had alot of stuffed animals and flowers around it. I looked down at myself, I was wearing one of those dresses they make you wear at the hospital, and I had a huge cast on my right arm and many thick, white bandages on both of my legs. A doctor came in right then, "Hello Jade, I hope you're feeling better," he said and grabbed a chair and brought it up to my bed, "What happened?", I asked confused. "Well, you went surfing this morning, for some crazy idea you went at 6:00 am, well anyway. You ended up breaking your right arm, getting cuts on your legs, and a temporary head trauma, that may last a week or so."
    "I think you have some visitors, "he said and right before he opened the door he added, "I didn't know you were so popular." What was he talking about? Me, popular?
    I was wondering about that, until he opened the door, and there was about 20 people from school at the door.
    Sofia came in first, "OMG are you okay?", she asked hugging me, "did I hurt you?", she tried to fix my pillows. "I'm fine, " I assured her, than my family came in. My mom, as normal, was mad at me, after everyone left the doctors said I could go home tomorrow morning. Everyone went into the waiting room, or left, but Sofia came into my room, "Hello." She smiled at me, "So guess what?" she said sitting next to me on a chair, "What?" "All of the kids from school were like freaking out 'cause they thought you had died, even Sarah (the bully) was saying how she wished she never hurt you, and she kept on saying it was her fault, " she said smiling, but quickly her smile turned into a frown, " I don't want to sound like your mom or anything, but, what you did was very irresponsible, like seriously, you could have gotten killed, you were in a come for 3 days! Not 1, not 2, but 3!, " she said. "I'm sorry, " I said laughing, " It's not funny!" She grabbed a marker out of her bag and grabbed my arm with the cast on it, and signed her name with a bunch of hearts, " I wanted to be the first one to sign it, " she said, than hugged me.
    *** Okay so to understand this chapter more, read the prologue, it will make SO much more sense
    And it's still boring right? I'm sooooo sorry if it's still boring, it may be still boring in the next chapter, but after that, it shall be more interesting
    And I will start doing teasers for the next chapter, but I'm going to do it by faves, so this time if I get 5 faves the next chapter will have a teaser!
    Love my readers <3 fave/comment/feedback/all of the above

  2. daretodreamm daretodreamm
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    July 12, 2012 3:08pm UTC
    rough,unknown,waters
    chapter one~
    "C'mon Jade, you'll be late for school, " my mom said her back to me, she was doing the dishes from breakfast. "Okay mom" , I said grabbing my lunch and hugging my dad, "Don't forget that after school you have to help me with my work when I get home, "he said, I nodded and grabbed my brothers arm and dragged him into my car. My brother was a year younger than me, 10th grade, and his name's Connor. I slipped my sunglasses on and started the car, it was always sunny here in California, and hot. Once we got to school my brother got straight out of the car, so much for family.
    "Hey, " Sofia said, she was my best friend, and had been since 2nd grade, "Hi," I said smiling and grabbing my bag as I got out of the car.
    We walked into the school and I saw people pointing and laughing at me, I just ignored them, anyway it was normal since I got bullied about everyday.
    "Hey guys, " Cameron said, he was my other best friend, he came up from behind us and went next to Sofia. The thing was that Sofia liked Cameron, and he liked her back, but neither of them wanted to make the first move, and neither knew the other one liked them.
    I went to my locker and got my books for my next class, History, we were learning about the Civil War, fun.
    I came into the classroom, it was the only class I had with none of my friends, I sat down in the back of the class. My teacher, Mrs.Smith came around the class to give us our grades from yesterdays test, "Many of you did great but some of you need to try working better for the test next week, remember it counts for 30% of your grades average, "she said handing me my paper, I got a D+.
    My mom is going to kill me.
    Mrs. Smith started talking about how the solders families lived, I looked outside the window, and my mind just went to him, my crush, his names Kevin, I looked around to see where he was, I guess he skipped today.
    I opened my notebook and started doodling some flowers when the door opened, "Sorry I'm late Mrs. Smith, " Kevin said, I couldn't stop a smile that crept onto my face, then I noticed, the only open spot was next to me.
    "Hey, "he said to me as he sat down, I felt the butterflies in my stomach, I smiled then got back to my doodling, even though I was freaking out inside.
    ~~~~
    "See ya' later, " Sofia said as I got into my car, Connor slipped in right after that, "We gotta go pick up Stacy (my little 11 year old sister), " I said and started the car. We went and picked up Stacy, and after that we went home.
    Once we got home I saw that there was about 4 cars in our driveway, weird.
    I got out of the car and we went inside and I saw that all of our relatives were here, and my mom was sitting in the living room crying, "What happened, " I asked, my grandmother came to me and said a soft voice, "Your father was in a car crash, and the doctors did all they could do, " she pulled me into a hug, I felt my eyes water.
    Stacy ran into my moms arms crying and Connor just sat down and looked shocked. How could my dad die? He never did anything to deserve this.
    I started crying, when the door opened, "Hello, " someone said, and I couldn't believe who it was, it was my uncle, uncle Thomas. He was my dads brother, and he tried ra/ping me when I was 13.
    I shivered as he came and gave me a hug, "I am so sorry, "he said looking me in the eye, I looked away.
    "Thomas, "my mom said, he came over and gave her a hug, "Hello Hanna, "he said, "I am so sorry, he didn't deserve to pass away."
    People kept on coming, I went upstairs to my room and started crying but my mom called me back downstairs. By that time some people had left, "-I have to, I know that Frank would have wanted me to do this, "Uncle Thomas said as I came down, he was talking to my mom, "Hi", I said sitting down next to my mom, she started talking, "Jade, uncle Thomas has kindly offered to stay here awhile to help us. " I nodded but I felt like screaming, no he couldn't be staying here, he tryed to hurt me. "So Stacy is going to stay in your room and he will take Stacy's room. "
    I ran upstairs and locked my door, I just sat there on my bed crying, I opened my drawer and found something sharp, how badly I wanted to cut more than I already did, I was about to, when my phone rang, it was Sofia. I grabbed it quickly, "Please come over now," I said crying into the phone, "Okay, I heard what happened and I'm coming, "she said.
    I sat down and I heard a knock at my door, "Jade," Stacy said, I unlocked my door and let her come in, she ran into my arms and started crying.
    "It's going to be okay," I said, even though I wasn't so sure myself.
    Sorry if it may seem really sad now but it'll get happier later on, i promise :)
    How do you guys like it? Comment for notifications and tell me if you want them for the whole story
    Sofia- http://weheartit.com/entry/30384740
    Grade- 11th
    Age-16 1/2
    Best Friends- Cameron and jade
    Relationship- single, but crushing on Cameron
    Cameron- http://weheartit.com/entry/32499567
    Grade- 11th
    Age- 17
    best Friends- Sofia and jade
    Relationship- single, but crushing on Sofia

  3. daretodreamm daretodreamm
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    July 7, 2012 4:41pm UTC
    rough,unknown,waters
    prologue~
    I felt the water with my hand, i walked into the water, it was a cold/fresh kind of feeling. I shivered but Cameron put his warm hand on my shoulder, I looked back and he shook his head, "Don't do it," he said in basically a whisper. I looked up at the sky, it was just lightening up, they say the best waves here are at this time in the morning, I breathed in deeply and kept on walking till i was waist deep, then i got on my board and started kicking until i got to a point where good waves were coming, "Don't risk it," Cameron yelled from the shallower waters as he was walking to me, his face was filled with shock, disappointment, and fright. "I've been living in a life full of sh/t and I can't deal with it unless i do something that my dad would be proud of," I yelled back as I turned against the waves again and I saw a huge wave coming, this is the one. I got up on my board and got on the wave, the wind went through my hair and the ocean spray felt so great. I looked into the water and before I knew it I was pulled by a force, the last thing I saw was the water than everything went black.
    ~~~~~~
    16 year old Jade is a normal girl, she's insecure, she's crazy about one guy who will never lover her, and she gets bullied. But once her dad dies her whole family turns upside down, before she knows it, her mom is taking night shifts at work, her 11 year old sister is cutting, and her uncle who tried to r/ape her is moving into their house to help with money and helping them get over their fathers death. Before her father died he was teaching Jade how to surf and once he dies she takes on the challenge of taking on the biggest waves in their little town in California, but she gets in an accident and gets shown reasons why leaving this town is her only chance to freedom.
    hey guys, how do you like it?
    Please, please, please give me feedback... It's gets much better once we get more into it :)
    character profiles and pictures will be up as their mentioned in the story :)
    and comment for notifications :)
    Jade- http://weheartit.com/entry/30385655
    Grade- 11th
    Age- 16 turning 17 in June
    Best friends- Sofia and Cameron (you'll meet them later in the story)
    Relationship- Single
    anything else you want to know about her just comment and I'll answer in the next chapter :)

  4. daretodreamm daretodreamm
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    April 20, 2012 4:48pm UTC
    Worth it
    "Never live life in fear of death"
    Prologue
    To everyone Kelsie looked like she had a perfect life, a cool car, great friends, an amazing reputation, a rich family, a big house, and most of all a cute and popular boyfriend. Everyone thought that their realtionship was like a fairytale, nothing could ruin it. But, theres a twist to this so-called fairy-tale, it's not a happily ever after. He abuses her. Everything she does is counted, all by him, anything she does or says. And she can never break up with him or she'll lose anthing that ever mattered to her because he has power. Kelsie thinks she'll never find true love. But she's wrong... The only person who knows how he treats her is her bestfriend, Ryan, he's always with her making sure she's okay. One day Kelsie relizes how much she loves Ryan and how much he loves her back. She can't be with him though, because of her boyfriend. Kelsie will have to choose between true love and, fake love and everything that has ever mattered to her.
    ~~~~~~~~~~
    Should I write this story?
    fave/comment/feedback/all of the above
    nmf

  5. daretodreamm daretodreamm
    posted a quote
    March 24, 2012 5:16pm UTC
    Hey anyone who is reading Just A Litlle Love Game, I was writing this on another account so here are all of the chapters to where I am today and their links :)
    chapter 1: http://www.wittyprofiles.com/q/4962414
    chapter 2: http://www.wittyprofiles.com/q/4968292
    chapter 3: http://www.wittyprofiles.com/q/4983179
    chapter 4 part 1: http://www.wittyprofiles.com/q/5019193
    chapter 4 part 2: http://www.wittyprofiles.com/q/5057974
    chapter 5: http://www.wittyprofiles.com/q/5061669
    chapter 6: http://www.wittyprofiles.com/q/5071021
    chapter 7: http://www.wittyprofiles.com/q/5105823
    chapter 8: http://www.wittyprofiles.com/q/5122204
    chapter 9: http://www.wittyprofiles.com/q/5145585
    chapter 10: http://www.wittyprofiles.com/q/5150186
    chapter 11: http://www.wittyprofiles.com/q/5165356
    chapter 12: http://www.wittyprofiles.com/q/5226089
    chapter 13: http://www.wittyprofiles.com/q/5265772
    chapter 14: http://www.wittyprofiles.com/q/5328355
    chapter 15: http://www.wittyprofiles.com/q/5365133
    chapter 16: http://www.wittyprofiles.com/q/5396195
    Female Characters
    nicole- http://weheartit.com/entry/23178222/via/johanaheart
    hailey- http://weheartit.com/entry/9970277
    sophia- http://weheartit.com/entry/23418926

  6. daretodreamm daretodreamm
    posted a quote
    March 24, 2012 1:27pm UTC
    Just a Little Love Game
    Prologue
    Finally summer break. I'm done with school, with detention, with homework, and with embarrassment. Now that school is over for three months. No one can embarrass me,
    I can finally have a happy normal summer... or that is what I thought.
    ~~~~~
    When a mysterious boy moves into town Hailey has no interest in meeting him. She see's him as just a normal guy; but what she doesn't know is that he is hiding an ugly secret. When Hailey finds out about his past all she wants to do is help, but in the mean time ends up falling in a little love game.
    ~~~~~
    authors note-
    how do you like it? should I write this story?

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