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  1. captivated_by_the_undefined captivated_by_the_undefined
    posted a quote
    September 28, 2011 8:01pm UTC
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    Chapter 2
    I lied down the floor next to the door, and pushed it open. Immediately, the room tipped, and I rolled right through. I landed on the hard wet grass of the ground. I sprung up, but the door had already disappeared.
    The air was warm, and it smelt strongly of sweet lilacs. The grass was bright and long, the trees were bright purples and pinks and blues, and they looked very strange. They were extremely tall, and the trunk twisted and turned unnaturally.
    I started walking slowly; I needed to find my way out of here. I’m not sure how long I walked, all I knew was that I seemed to be going in circles. Any direction that I went, for however long, anytime I checked to see where I was, I always wound up at the same spot. It was the fifth time I came to the same clearing, and I was so mad, I almost didn’t see the little man sitting on a rock.
    He was small, with a round belly, and short legs. His fingers were pudgy, and had three rings each. His eyes were a bright blue that stood out against his pale face. He wore suspenders over a crisp button up shirt, and bright yellow clogs on his stubby feet.
    “Who are you?” I asked, keeping a large distance between us.
    “Why dear, do you really think I can talk to you when you are that far away?” Suddenly, it seemed like there was an entire ocean sized field in-between us.
    “What the?” I said under my breath as I started forward. I stopped after I reached where my original place was.
    “Okay… now who are you?” I asked slowly, afraid that another field might separate us again.
    “Well, I think the question is rather who I am not. For a fact, I am not a queen, or a king, or a knight, or any one important. Who are you not?”
    “Umm…. I AM Naveah. Naveah Raine.”
    “I’m afraid I have never heard of her. Good day.” With hat he hopped off the rock and started to hobble away.
    “Wait!” I cried, starting after him, “Can you tell me where I am?”
    “No.”
    “Can you give me a hint?”
    “No.”
    “Can you tell me where I am not?”
    He stopped, and turned back towards me, a huge grin growing on his pale face.
    “Why of course dear, I can say, for a fact, that you are no longer in the place you called home.”
    “Can you tell me where to go- wait, where NOT to go to get back?” I asked.
    “ Hmm, follow me.”
    So I walked with this strange man, who I did not know, trusting him to bring me home. We walked in the same direction I thought for sure I had already covered, but yet, when we stopped, we were in front of to large doors, that surely weren’t there before.
    “One of these doors will lead you to your home, and one, well, I’m not really sure. I just know it is not your home.” And with that, he vanished behind a nearby tree.
    I was sitting, staring at the doors, wondering what to do, when I heard a voice.
    “Are you going to choose, or sit there all day?”
    “Whoa! Who are you! Show yourself!”
    “I am already here.” It said.
    “And so am I.” Another voice said.
    how do you like it?It's my first story and it's not all romanticy and stuff like a lot of the stories on here are.... I hopeyoulikeit!!!
    Comment with feedback please!
    btw if you have any idea for the title please comment!!! i'm clueless!

  2. captivated_by_the_undefined captivated_by_the_undefined
    posted a quote
    September 27, 2011 9:12pm UTC
    No title yet
    Chapter 1
    “YOU IDIOT! IT’S ALWAYS ABOUT YOU!
    My parents were fighting again. And I sat in my chair, waiting for them to notice if I was there, like all the other times. I stood up, they never did.
    I walked back to my room calmly, closing my door as quietly as possible, and winced as the locked caught and popped.
    I threw myself down onto my soft bed, and buried my face into the black comforter, waiting for the tears to come. But this time, they never did. I sat up, bringing my knees up to my chest as I looked around my room. The walls were white, even though you couldn’t tell. I had plastered all my photography and drawings in every blank space. Faces stared back at me from the pictures, some of them my friends, some of them my own.
    The small white desk was shoved in a corner, cluttered with pencils and papers, rolls of film, magazines, and notebooks. Besides it stood my trashcan, overflowing with crumpled papers full of doodles or drawings gone wrong, or poem and story ideas that just didn’t work.
    My dads voice suddenly broke though my tightly shut door, screaming curse words and insults. I slammed my hands against my ears, desperate for it to stop.
    When it didn’t, I shot up, putting on my trusty black converse and my warm leather jacket lined with fake fur. I grabbed my camera and my ipod, and with one last glance to my room, I was out the window.
    I climbed down the fire ladder, and as soon as feet hit the damp grass, I was running. I didn’t know where to, but as far away from my parents as possible. My black wavy hair flew out behind me, as I shot into the woods, the light slowly fading as the sun went down.
    I didn’t stop for a while, until I tripped over a root sticking out of the ground. I fell hard, not sticking my arms out in time, as my face hit the crisp leaves, and the hard, cold, ground.
    And I stayed there, for I don’t know how long, crying, into the leaves, just breaking down.
    When I finished, I wiped the tears from my icy blue eyes with my fist, and pushed myself up. It had gotten really dark, and the brisk fall air had become even colder. I zipped up my jacked and drew hugged myself as I started to walk again. I couldn’t go back, not now.
    So I walked for a while, trying to ignore the crushing darkness, and the strange sounds coming from the shadows.
    I had been walking for a while when the ground gave way beneath my feet.
    I was falling, plunging, certainly to my death, but I didn’t have the energy to scream. When I hit the ground, I expected pain, or just to black out, to be gone. But instead, I landed on a soft mattress.
    Slowing getting up, I looked up, trying to see if I could possible climb back up. But there was no hole. Just a ceiling. A typical, white ceiling. I looked around, there seemed to be no way out of this room. No windows, or doors, just big white walls. Then I looked down on my feet. I was standing right in the middle of a bright red door. The thing was, there was no door when I got off the mattress.
    how do you like it?It's my first story and it's not all romanticy and stuff like alot of the stories on here are.... I hopeyoulikeit!!!
    Comment with feedback please!

  3. captivated_by_the_undefined captivated_by_the_undefined
    posted a quote
    September 27, 2011 9:12pm UTC
    No title yet
    Chapter 1
    “YOU IDIOT! IT’S ALWAYS ABOUT YOU!
    My parents were fighting again. And I sat in my chair, waiting for them to notice if I was there, like all the other times. I stood up, they never did.
    I walked back to my room calmly, closing my door as quietly as possible, and winced as the locked caught and popped.
    I threw myself down onto my soft bed, and buried my face into the black comforter, waiting for the tears to come. But this time, they never did. I sat up, bringing my knees up to my chest as I looked around my room. The walls were white, even though you couldn’t tell. I had plastered all my photography and drawings in every blank space. Faces stared back at me from the pictures, some of them my friends, some of them my own.
    The small white desk was shoved in a corner, cluttered with pencils and papers, rolls of film, magazines, and notebooks. Besides it stood my trashcan, overflowing with crumpled papers full of doodles or drawings gone wrong, or poem and story ideas that just didn’t work.
    My dads voice suddenly broke though my tightly shut door, screaming curse words and insults. I slammed my hands against my ears, desperate for it to stop.
    When it didn’t, I shot up, putting on my trusty black converse and my warm leather jacket lined with fake fur. I grabbed my camera and my ipod, and with one last glance to my room, I was out the window.
    I climbed down the fire ladder, and as soon as feet hit the damp grass, I was running. I didn’t know where to, but as far away from my parents as possible. My black wavy hair flew out behind me, as I shot into the woods, the light slowly fading as the sun went down.
    I didn’t stop for a while, until I tripped over a root sticking out of the ground. I fell hard, not sticking my arms out in time, as my face hit the crisp leaves, and the hard, cold, ground.
    And I stayed there, for I don’t know how long, crying, into the leaves, just breaking down.
    When I finished, I wiped the tears from my icy blue eyes with my fist, and pushed myself up. It had gotten really dark, and the brisk fall air had become even colder. I zipped up my jacked and drew hugged myself as I started to walk again. I couldn’t go back, not now.
    So I walked for a while, trying to ignore the crushing darkness, and the strange sounds coming from the shadows.
    I had been walking for a while when the ground gave way beneath my feet.
    I was falling, plunging, certainly to my death, but I didn’t have the energy to scream. When I hit the ground, I expected pain, or just to black out, to be gone. But instead, I landed on a soft mattress.
    Slowing getting up, I looked up, trying to see if I could possible climb back up. But there was no hole. Just a ceiling. A typical, white ceiling. I looked around, there seemed to be no way out of this room. No windows, or doors, just big white walls. Then I looked down on my feet. I was standing right in the middle of a bright red door. The thing was, there was no door when I got off the mattress.
    how do you like it?It's my first story and it's not all romanticy and stuff like alot of the stories on here are.... I hopeyoulikeit!!!
    Comment with feedback please!

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