TayaElizabeth12
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1 decade ago
Stay strong , everything will be okay. Try to look on the bright side. You are beautiful. Don't be afraid. I promise you will be okay. I'm here if you ever need to talk! reply
LoveeLaughhLivee
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1 decade ago
i like both of them! the second one sounds quite different to other writers on witty, so it might get more response:L, maybe do the second one first and the first one second (haha) ;D reply
LoveeLaughhLivee
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1 decade ago
well, i think for characters you should have a different range; like have a , have a really sweet girl, a jerk, and an amazing guy..
personally i like love storys but if you want to be different, maybe you could do something to do with family, or something you have experienced before:)
hope i helped;) if you liked my advice you can just ask for more<3 reply
iwritesinsnottragities
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1 decade ago
do both, first one first, second one second. im likin the first one. reminds me of that movie that is coming out soon, Vow, with Channing Tatum reply
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1 decade ago
You seem to be getting a lot of suggestions, which is great, but can be confusing haha(: I'll try to stick to general stuff. I've always been toying with the idea of a hospital. There's kind of a whole society going on in there, and you could have the main character be a sick patient, a nurse, a surgeon, or anything. I always find rotating POVs interesting too, to show different voices and reveal info in a way that keeps you curious. Some generic characters: Linda, a flighty, happy-go-lucky type who hates being tied down; Sully, the youngest of a big family who hates being babied; Charlie, a cocky guy with a little sister he cares about more than anything; Wendy, a runaway who bolted when pressure got to her. Hope this helped(: reply
karlascaramel
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1 decade ago
what do you want the story to be about. Make interesting and exiting. :D reply
eminem23
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1 decade ago
My opinion, don't write a sappy love story. Of corse, having an underlying love triangle or issue is always good, but base the story around something like family based drama (i.e. divorce, old rich family member dying, sibling involved with drugs, someone gets sick, etc) or maybe something interesting like a person's life through the eyes of their pet dog or fish or something.
Setting: probably something in an urban area so there's more going on, rural areas can get boring.
Names: don't use common names like John, Elizabeth, Ryan, Taylor, etc. Unique names add fun to the story and people are more apt to remember them. I like names like Avery, Ryder, Ashlynn, or Landon. (if you need any others, I'm happy to help because I love unique names) the named should also have something to do with the character's personality. If a girl in naive, you would want a name like Mary-Grace over something like Lennox. You know what I mean? Any questions, just comment only profile or something. I'd love to help if you like my ideas :) reply
YOUMAKEMYWORLDSTOPx
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1 decade ago
thank you so much! I'll try and write the first chapter of each and see which one comes easier to me (: reply
cujo*
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1 decade ago
THE SECOND ONE. It's unusual to see a story on witty that isn't about teenagers going all lovey dovey in the cliches. Also, I absolutely adore stories that are out of the box (contradictory to the story much?). Well, whichever you start writing first, I'd be happy as long as you write the second one sometime. :) reply
hobowithasticker
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1 decade ago
I like the number one(: they are both cool! reply
YOUMAKEMYWORLDSTOPx
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1 decade ago
I might write the first one first and the second one second? So by the time I've finished the first, I won't want to write anything realistic ever (: reply
life_makes_love_look_hard
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1 decade ago
i think you should write the second one.it will keep people wondering. its also different, i'm getting sick of all the boyfriend girlfriend and and drinking stories. soo.... THE SECOND ONE reply
YOUMAKEMYWORLDSTOPx
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1 decade ago
Thanks, I'll try to work on both so I can elaborate on them? (: reply
gymnastics_gal123
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1 decade ago
i like the first one better, but theyre both reallllly good, you should do the second one after you finish the first one :) reply
iwritesinsnottragities
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1 decade ago
happy to help, please let me know when have started the story (: reply
YOUMAKEMYWORLDSTOPx
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1 decade ago
That sounds interesting! That opens up room for a lot of sub plots / character breaks so I'll look into it! Thank you (: reply
iwritesinsnottragities
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1 decade ago
u could do something about girl who's boyfriend or husband is in the army or something. or her dad could be a teacher/sargent at an army school and the daughter is forced to stay there and ends up liking a guy or something like that. idk, im kind of on an armed forces kick right now haha reply
YOUMAKEMYWORLDSTOPx · 1 decade ago
thank you. this made my day <3
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TayaElizabeth12 · 1 decade ago
Stay strong , everything will be okay. Try to look on the bright side. You are beautiful. Don't be afraid. I promise you will be okay. I'm here if you ever need to talk!
reply
LoveeLaughhLivee · 1 decade ago
i like both of them! the second one sounds quite different to other writers on witty, so it might get more response:L, maybe do the second one first and the first one second (haha) ;D
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LoveeLaughhLivee · 1 decade ago
well, i think for characters you should have a different range; like have a , have a really sweet girl, a jerk, and an amazing guy..
personally i like love storys but if you want to be different, maybe you could do something to do with family, or something you have experienced before:)
hope i helped;) if you liked my advice you can just ask for more<3
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cassiejeanne · 1 decade ago
FIRST!
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iwritesinsnottragities · 1 decade ago
do both, first one first, second one second. im likin the first one. reminds me of that movie that is coming out soon, Vow, with Channing Tatum
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* · 1 decade ago
You seem to be getting a lot of suggestions, which is great, but can be confusing haha(: I'll try to stick to general stuff. I've always been toying with the idea of a hospital. There's kind of a whole society going on in there, and you could have the main character be a sick patient, a nurse, a surgeon, or anything. I always find rotating POVs interesting too, to show different voices and reveal info in a way that keeps you curious. Some generic characters: Linda, a flighty, happy-go-lucky type who hates being tied down; Sully, the youngest of a big family who hates being babied; Charlie, a cocky guy with a little sister he cares about more than anything; Wendy, a runaway who bolted when pressure got to her. Hope this helped(:
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karlascaramel · 1 decade ago
what do you want the story to be about. Make interesting and exiting. :D
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eminem23 · 1 decade ago
My opinion, don't write a sappy love story. Of corse, having an underlying love triangle or issue is always good, but base the story around something like family based drama (i.e. divorce, old rich family member dying, sibling involved with drugs, someone gets sick, etc) or maybe something interesting like a person's life through the eyes of their pet dog or fish or something.
Setting: probably something in an urban area so there's more going on, rural areas can get boring.
Names: don't use common names like John, Elizabeth, Ryan, Taylor, etc. Unique names add fun to the story and people are more apt to remember them. I like names like Avery, Ryder, Ashlynn, or Landon. (if you need any others, I'm happy to help because I love unique names) the named should also have something to do with the character's personality. If a girl in naive, you would want a name like Mary-Grace over something like Lennox. You know what I mean? Any questions, just comment only profile or something. I'd love to help if you like my ideas :)
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YOUMAKEMYWORLDSTOPx · 1 decade ago
thank you so much! I'll try and write the first chapter of each and see which one comes easier to me (:
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cujo* · 1 decade ago
THE SECOND ONE. It's unusual to see a story on witty that isn't about teenagers going all lovey dovey in the cliches. Also, I absolutely adore stories that are out of the box (contradictory to the story much?). Well, whichever you start writing first, I'd be happy as long as you write the second one sometime. :)
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hobowithasticker · 1 decade ago
I like the number one(: they are both cool!
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YOUMAKEMYWORLDSTOPx · 1 decade ago
I might write the first one first and the second one second? So by the time I've finished the first, I won't want to write anything realistic ever (:
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life_makes_love_look_hard · 1 decade ago
i think you should write the second one.it will keep people wondering. its also different, i'm getting sick of all the boyfriend girlfriend and and drinking stories. soo.... THE SECOND ONE
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YOUMAKEMYWORLDSTOPx · 1 decade ago
Thanks, I'll try to work on both so I can elaborate on them? (:
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gymnastics_gal123 · 1 decade ago
i like the first one better, but theyre both reallllly good, you should do the second one after you finish the first one :)
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YOUMAKEMYWORLDSTOPx · 1 decade ago
thank you !
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iwritesinsnottragities · 1 decade ago
happy to help, please let me know when have started the story (:
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YOUMAKEMYWORLDSTOPx · 1 decade ago
That sounds interesting! That opens up room for a lot of sub plots / character breaks so I'll look into it! Thank you (:
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iwritesinsnottragities · 1 decade ago
u could do something about girl who's boyfriend or husband is in the army or something. or her dad could be a teacher/sargent at an army school and the daughter is forced to stay there and ends up liking a guy or something like that. idk, im kind of on an armed forces kick right now haha
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