thebong
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1 decade ago
alright, to be completely honest with you the context is all there and well, but instead of having so much dialect, you can build this up by adding some more description. Go into the four senses, sight, touch etc and what you have there should be enough. reply
Dreamergirl111
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1 decade ago
Sorry 'bout that. :\ reply
Dreamergirl111
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1 decade ago
You're not alone Becca! I'm here for you! So is your witty family! If you need to talk, I'm all ears. reply
Mouselover990
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1 decade ago
Don't worry. I'm far beyond the point of breaking. reply
cupcakegirl101
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1 decade ago
It will be fine when you go back. Just ignore those girls and focus on your school work. Stay close with your friends and they will support you. reply
cupcakegirl101
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1 decade ago
rascals?! wtf! *people reply
cupcakegirl101
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1 decade ago
No it doesn't! Listen to me! do something that makes you happy! Text your bestfriend! She/He will be there for you...and if they aren't....make them! You are beautiful! Don't let some stupid ruin it! Take pride! And if people bully you! Stand up tall and say "look in the mirror" If you start considering suicide and cutting..they will know that what they are doing works. So hold your head up high and prove to them that you have dignity! reply
cupcakegirl101
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1 decade ago
You really shouldn't cut!! I know that you don't know me..but i care!! Please.its not right! reply
Dreamergirl111
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1 decade ago
No Becca, don't do it. reply
Dreamergirl111
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1 decade ago
Hi Becca, my best friend was a cutter, but one day she cut too deep, and lost a lot of blood... I don't want this to happen to you. Sure it relives pain for a few seconds, but after you are left with scars, and all the scars will do is remind you of the pain, the heartbreak, and the sadness. reply
Dreamergirl111
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1 decade ago
Becca, I don't know you that well, but I know that you are stronger than this. Sure when the times get tough, and those people who you called friends bail on you but that's all a part of life. I bet that you are an extremely nice person. And nice people aren't very common on this world, so if we lose just one angel on this earth then all he'll could break loose. If we loose you, then it's kinda like throwing one of gods gifts away. We all love you Becca, sincerely your family on witty. <3 reply
HippoLove
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1 decade ago
oh that one line didnt sound right! i meant its not true that youre unwanted. reply
HippoLove
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1 decade ago
Please dont do it. please. i know how hard it can be but things will get better. i know it can be super hard to believe, but trust me, everything will be better. maybe tomorrow is the day everything changes. and in a few years time youll look back and say "i am so glad i didnt do it" i promise you someday you will be so glad you didnt do it. maybe soon, maybe not soon, but it will come. and think about all of the good things in life. the things that make you happy. watch a disney movie. eat ice cream. or chocolate, or whatever food that makes you feel good. then once your done eating, and once your movie is over, go in your room. and just cry. it helps. it's helps tremendously. once your done. throw your hair in a messy bun, put on a head band, walk in front of the mirror, look at your scars, and say "I am beautiful, inside and out. and I am better than this. I am not this person. and I don't want to be". even if you dont believe it, its true, and the more you tell yourself youre beautiful, the more youll believe it. ive read your quotes, you are a wonderful person. you are beautiful. and you are loved. and you are wanted. so don't get wrapped up into those nasty habits like self-harm. i know how tempting it can be, ive done it myself, but that short moment of relief it gives you comes with some regret, regret that you don't need to have on your shoulders. I love you. and life will get better. I promise. Please please dont do it. ive come close to suicide before, so i know how you feel. and i know how it feels to think youre unwanted. even though its not true. you ARE wanted. imagine how devastated your family and friends would be to see that youre gone. A part of them would be missing. please dont do it. you are loved. and i promise you, it may not be soon, but i promise, things will get better. stay strong <3 reply
rissalynn
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1 decade ago
I'm right there with you this week. reply
Dreamergirl111
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1 decade ago
wow. so i guess your not the happiest of people this week. We should talk, i know how you feel, i've been there before, just do what you said to "Keep your head up and your middle finger up higher i may not know you that much but i know that you are a fighter. stay strong my friend, stay strong. <3 reply
Dreamergirl111
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1 decade ago
Hey! Hows life? Cuz mine is like URRGG cuz my best friend is all mad at me for like no reason and I really thought that I trusted her so im really mad. U? reply
thebong · 1 decade ago
alright, to be completely honest with you the context is all there and well, but instead of having so much dialect, you can build this up by adding some more description. Go into the four senses, sight, touch etc and what you have there should be enough.
reply
Dreamergirl111 · 1 decade ago
Sorry 'bout that. :\
reply
Dreamergirl111 · 1 decade ago
You're not alone Becca! I'm here for you! So is your witty family! If you need to talk, I'm all ears.
reply
Mouselover990 · 1 decade ago
Don't worry. I'm far beyond the point of breaking.
reply
cupcakegirl101 · 1 decade ago
It will be fine when you go back. Just ignore those girls and focus on your school work. Stay close with your friends and they will support you.
reply
cupcakegirl101 · 1 decade ago
rascals?! wtf! *people
reply
cupcakegirl101 · 1 decade ago
No it doesn't! Listen to me! do something that makes you happy! Text your bestfriend! She/He will be there for you...and if they aren't....make them! You are beautiful! Don't let some stupid ruin it! Take pride! And if people bully you! Stand up tall and say "look in the mirror" If you start considering suicide and cutting..they will know that what they are doing works. So hold your head up high and prove to them that you have dignity!
reply
cupcakegirl101 · 1 decade ago
You really shouldn't cut!! I know that you don't know me..but i care!! Please.its not right!
reply
Dreamergirl111 · 1 decade ago
No Becca, don't do it.
reply
Dreamergirl111 · 1 decade ago
Hi Becca, my best friend was a cutter, but one day she cut too deep, and lost a lot of blood... I don't want this to happen to you. Sure it relives pain for a few seconds, but after you are left with scars, and all the scars will do is remind you of the pain, the heartbreak, and the sadness.
reply
Dreamergirl111 · 1 decade ago
*hell
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Dreamergirl111 · 1 decade ago
Becca, I don't know you that well, but I know that you are stronger than this. Sure when the times get tough, and those people who you called friends bail on you but that's all a part of life. I bet that you are an extremely nice person. And nice people aren't very common on this world, so if we lose just one angel on this earth then all he'll could break loose. If we loose you, then it's kinda like throwing one of gods gifts away. We all love you Becca, sincerely your family on witty. <3
reply
HippoLove · 1 decade ago
oh that one line didnt sound right! i meant its not true that youre unwanted.
reply
HippoLove · 1 decade ago
Please dont do it. please. i know how hard it can be but things will get better. i know it can be super hard to believe, but trust me, everything will be better. maybe tomorrow is the day everything changes. and in a few years time youll look back and say "i am so glad i didnt do it" i promise you someday you will be so glad you didnt do it. maybe soon, maybe not soon, but it will come. and think about all of the good things in life. the things that make you happy. watch a disney movie. eat ice cream. or chocolate, or whatever food that makes you feel good. then once your done eating, and once your movie is over, go in your room. and just cry. it helps. it's helps tremendously. once your done. throw your hair in a messy bun, put on a head band, walk in front of the mirror, look at your scars, and say "I am beautiful, inside and out. and I am better than this. I am not this person. and I don't want to be". even if you dont believe it, its true, and the more you tell yourself youre beautiful, the more youll believe it. ive read your quotes, you are a wonderful person. you are beautiful. and you are loved. and you are wanted. so don't get wrapped up into those nasty habits like self-harm. i know how tempting it can be, ive done it myself, but that short moment of relief it gives you comes with some regret, regret that you don't need to have on your shoulders. I love you. and life will get better. I promise. Please please dont do it. ive come close to suicide before, so i know how you feel. and i know how it feels to think youre unwanted. even though its not true. you ARE wanted. imagine how devastated your family and friends would be to see that youre gone. A part of them would be missing. please dont do it. you are loved. and i promise you, it may not be soon, but i promise, things will get better. stay strong <3
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rarasissboombaaaahhhhhh* · 1 decade ago
i dont hate you c;
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rarasissboombaaaahhhhhh* · 1 decade ago
NO BECCA NO.
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rissalynn · 1 decade ago
I'm right there with you this week.
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Dreamergirl111 · 1 decade ago
wow. so i guess your not the happiest of people this week. We should talk, i know how you feel, i've been there before, just do what you said to "Keep your head up and your middle finger up higher i may not know you that much but i know that you are a fighter. stay strong my friend, stay strong. <3
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Supergirl99 · 1 decade ago
*wasnt goddarnit
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Dreamergirl111 · 1 decade ago
Hey! Hows life? Cuz mine is like URRGG cuz my best friend is all mad at me for like no reason and I really thought that I trusted her so im really mad. U?
reply