Live_life98 · 1 decade ago
nice chapter!
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InMyDreams · 1 decade ago
Oops, I forgot to change the author note. Sorry!
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Live_life98 · 1 decade ago
Im really liking the story!! Do you by any chance notify?
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MoniBird · 1 decade ago
:D i like this better than your first ending, though it would be sososososo cool if you could write more. i like the way you write :)

and i can't wait for your next one c:
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ZoeBoe · 1 decade ago
AWESOME!!
i love this story :D
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Igaf · 1 decade ago
Its pretty good! Did you write this all by yourself? But i must say there's some errors, other than that it sounds interesting.
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MoniBird · 1 decade ago
plleeeaaassseee make the story longer, thats such a cliche short ending D:
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ZoeBoe · 1 decade ago
i love your story!!
it shouldn't end there!!
extend the story cuz it'll be a great story!!!
PLEASE!!!
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ZoeBoe · 1 decade ago
Can you please notify me i looooooove the story!!!!!!
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darkeyeangel · 1 decade ago
Scary!!!!
Very good :)
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darkeyeangel · 1 decade ago
Only thing I have to say is longer please!
Love the plot twist!
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darkeyeangel · 1 decade ago
Interesting...notify me please!
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pandabear13 · 1 decade ago
Can you notify me please
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