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  1. BetterVersion BetterVersion
    posted a quote
    November 7, 2011 2:31pm UTC
    Girl: I think I may have found a boyfriend! :)
    Him: who?
    Girl: Look in the mirror real quick.
    Him: okay?
    Girl: kay.
    Him: I'm back.
    Girl: Did you see him?
    Jock and you die. :)

  2. BetterVersion BetterVersion
    posted a quote
    November 3, 2011 5:15pm UTC
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    Missing
    Chapter 2
    I woke up to the sound of Aaron crying. I attempted to stand but Jordan stopped me.
    "No Chels. I'll get him. You stay here." He kissed my forhead and hurried off to Aaron's room. I heard Jordan's soft soothing voice and within a few minutes, Aaron stopped crying.
    Jordan walked back into the living room and sat back down beside me on the couch. He pulled me over and layed down with his back against the couch and me against his chest.
    He turned up the volume loud enough for us to hear, but low enough where we could fall asleep.
    Just as I was dozing off, a huge crash came from the back of the house near Aaron's room. He started crying and Jordan and I jumped up, running down the hallway, and flipping on the light as we went. We ran into Aaron's bedroom and saw a leg slip back through the broken window.
    The tears streaming down my face, I reached into his crib and pulled him out. I looked through my tears at him, making sure he was okay. I backed against the wall, cradling Aaron against my chest, trying to calm him as Jordan looked out the window.
    He turned back towards me, and grabbed my elbow, leading me into the living room. He grabbed the phone and dialed a number. I rocked back and forth on the couch and didnt stop until Jordan sat down beside me and wrapped his arms tight around my shoulders.
    "The police are on their way. Just calm down. You're fine. Aaron's fine. I'm fine. We're all okay, just calm down." Comforted by Jordan's words and his touch, I buried my head in his chest and willed myself to stop crying.
    what do you think?
    nmf
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  3. BetterVersion BetterVersion
    posted a quote
    November 1, 2011 6:12pm UTC
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    Missing
    Chapter 1
    I smiled down at Aaron in my arms. He wrapped his little fingers around the index finger on my right hand. He opened his eyes then, and I stared into their sky blue depths. Aaron's eyes looked so much like his father's.
    "Pretty baby boy." I cooed in a soft voice. Aaron giggled and played with my finger. From behind me I heard a chuckle. I turned to see Jordan walking towards me. Once he reached me, he wrapped his arms around me and peered over my shoulder at the laughing baby in my arms.
    "Did you just call my son pretty?" Jordan teased. "You know that's not very manly." I looked at him.
    "He's 11 months old. Don't even joke like that. He won't be a man for a long long time. Not until I give him my permission."
    "Hate to break it to you, but he's going to be a man with or without your permission." I scowled at the thought.
    "Not for a while." I said stubbornly. Aaron yawned and closed his eyes sleepily. I layed him down in his crib and covered him up. I looked at him as he fell asleep, just wishing he could stay a baby forever.
    Jordan slipped his hand into mine then, and pulled me gently away. He led me to the living room and sat on the couch. Jordan pulled me down on his lap. Still holding my hand, he played with the silver diamond encrusted wedding band on my left finger. He bent his head and kissed it.
    "I love you." He said when he raised his head to look into my eyes. He grinned his crooked grin. The one he knew I loved so much, and leaned into kiss me. I smiled against his lips and mumbled an "I love you, too."
    I pulled away and layed my head against his shoulder, taking in his scent of Axe Fever.
    Are we ever gonna have any more kids?" Jordan asked suddenly. I looked up at him, confused at his question.
    "I don't know. Maybe. Why?"
    "I really want a daughter." He said. I smiled at him.
    "Well, then you will get a daughter. Jordan grinned again and hugged me. Burying his face in my hair.
    what do ya think?
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  4. BetterVersion BetterVersion
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    October 31, 2011 9:21pm UTC
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    Missing
    Prologue
    The red and blue sirens cut through the dark night. The police officers swarmed the yard and the house looking for clues as to who it was. The one who took him. My baby was gone. My son, my baby, my only child. His little sister kicked in my stomach, reminding me that he wouldn't be an only child for very much longer.
    what do ya think?
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