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1. BehindTheFakeSmile
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   July 10, 2012 2:58pm UTC
   H i m or H i m.
   Chapter 5.
   The next day I got up at 7:31.
   “Why am I up so early!!” I thought.
   I check my phone to see if anyone texted me.
   Nope.
   I couldn’t go back to sleep so I went outside and cleaned out the pool since there were a lot of leaves and sticks in it.
   I see a piece of paper under a chair, so I picked it up and read it.
   “Hey cutie, go to the front of your house”
   I jogged to the front of my house, to see another piece of paper taped to the stairs.
   “Now go to the end of your street”
   I jogged to the end of my street and looked around for any notes.
   Then I noticed arrows drawn on the street with chalk directing me somewhere.
   I followed them hoping the arrows were for me.
   They led me to my school, and I was SO confused.
   I looked around and then out of nowhere I feel someone come up behind me and hug me around my waist.
   It was Eddie.
   HOW AMAZING CAN HE BE.
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2. BehindTheFakeSmile
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   July 8, 2012 12:18am UTC
   H i m or H i m.
   Chapter 4.
   Eventually I had nothing else to say and had no more tears left.
   Eddie got to the point where he was screaming for help because I talked so much.
   Since I saw that Eddie was getting a little bored I suggested us to go in the pool in my backyard with our clothes on.
   We hopped right in and started to swim around in the cool water.
   He splashed me and I splashed him.
   We played like little kids, like best friends, like brother and sister.
   We had an amazing time, and right before we were going to get out, he told me that we should have a breathing contest; whoever can stay under the longest wins.
   Well, I went underwater, and 3 seconds later I felt Eddie kiss me.
   I opened my eyes and there he was.
   Of course, I kissed back; it was amazing.
   It was all I could ever ask for.
   He was just amazing.
   Later we got out and it was getting dark.
   He said he still wanted to hang out with me so we walked to the high school in our soaking clothes.
   We talked and talker and I got to know him A LOT better than I did before he came over.
   He was such a sweet guy, unlike Travis.
   I think I was kinda, sorta, starting to like him; uh-oh.
   sorry I didn't post any new chapters! I was on vacaayy :D
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3. BehindTheFakeSmile
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   June 28, 2012 12:59pm UTC
   H i m or H i m.
   Chapter 3.
   Valery stared at me as I rushed down the stairs.
   She gave me this I’m sorry my brother’s a jerk look.
   I ran to my house with tears streaming down my face.
   I didn’t see anyone until I got to Eddie’s house.
   He was outside mowing his lawn as he spotted me.
   I tried to look away but as soon as I turned my head and hid my face Eddie was right behind me.
   “Aww cutie what’s wrong?” he said in a flirtatious way.
   “Nothing, Eddie. Just leave me alone.”
   “Brookie, I’ll beat up who ever made you cry, I don’t want to see you like this.”
   “You surely wouldn’t want to beat up your best friend.” I walked away.
   Boys these days, they’re a pain in the a*s.
   I got home and sat on my bed.
   I checked my phone to see if Travis texted me to see how I was doing.
   ‘Wow, haha. I can’t believe Travis could be such a jerk. He doesn’t even text me to say he’s sorry. But of course Eddie texted me 4 times to see how I was doing, what a gentleman,’ I thought to myself.
   I flopped on my bed and closed my eyes.
   A couple of minutes later I heard thumping at my window, like pebbles or something being thrown at it.
   I opened my window to see Eddie standing outside with a sign that read “Come outside cutie (;”
   I smiled at him, and he smiled at me.
   I ran downstairs to see Eddie with my favorite chocolate in his hand.
   (Reeses)
   We talked about Travis and how he said he liked Gabbi more than me.
   “You know he could of just said it from the start, he had to make me fall in love with him and then
   break my heart.”
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4. BehindTheFakeSmile
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   June 27, 2012 10:47am UTC
   H i m or H i m.
   Chapter 2.
   “Hey Trav, uhhm… I was wondering, if I’m bothering you, or if you are just tired of me.”
   “What?! Noooo, Brooklyn, you are so funny and sweet I’m not talking to you like we used to cause Eddie… he likes you… a lot. And he’s one of my best friends and I don’t want to break his heart. I don’t want him to see you falling head over heels for me, and I don’t want him to see me liking you back. Brooke, I’m sorry.”
   “But Travis!” I added, “I don’t like him, I like you. I love you. You are so sweet and put a smile on my face, even when I’m in the worst moods. How can I get over you? I thought you liked me too.”
   “I do like you Brooke, but there’s another girl too that I’m starting to like someone else; Gabbi. I’ve just met you… three months ago. We don’t have any classes together, the only way we talk is over the phone and Facebook. Me and Gabbi are in all of the same classes, we just bond more.”
   I stared at him, giving him this nasty look.
   He knew I was mad.
   That I was jealous.
   I stormed out of him room, with tears streaming down my face.
   He likes Gabbi more than me.
   He does.
   I know it.
   I have to stop liking him.
   I do.
   Very fast so my heart doesn’t break more than it already has.
   So Eddie likes me, huh…(;
   don't worry this story gets better :b sorry this chapter is kind of short.
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5. BehindTheFakeSmile
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   June 25, 2012 11:05pm UTC
   H i m or H i m.
   Chapter 1.
   It’s been quite a few days now; and we haven’t had a full, long conversation that we always used to have.
   I texted him, wondering if I’m annoying him.
   “Hey you wanna chill today?”
   He didn’t respond.
   I got used to it now, him not responding to my texts, him not texting me first, him plain out not talking to me.
   It broke my heart, to know he doesn’t love me the way he used to.
   We used to be perfect.
   He used to hug me randomly in school, he always texted me first, us having these long conversations on the phone at night.
   And most of all, him saying he loved me, and complimenting me every day.
   Days passed, and I still haven’t talked to Travis, I missed him.
   In school he didn’t even look at me when we passed in the halls.
   I couldn’t take it anymore, things needed to be done.
   After school I walked to his house, hoping he’ll be home.
   I rang the doorbell and no one answered.
   I called his younger sister Valery to see if they were home.
   “Hello?”
   “Hey Val, you home?”
   “Yup, just come on in.”
   I hung up as I opened the door.
   “I’m here!” I yelled from the door.
   Valery ran up to me and I gave her a big hug; she’s so cute.
   I talked to her for a little bit, then asked about Travis.
   She said nothing was really going on with him.
   I walked up to his room with Valery, and when I opened his door he was so surprised.
   Valery left to leave us alone.
   I plopped on his bed and stared into his perfect blue/yellow/green eyes.
   My stomach fluttered with butterflies.
   Oh boy do I like him.
   hey guys so I really didn't feel like finishing my other story. and this one is about boys and drama and stuff like that and i can relate to that alot more(:
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6. BehindTheFakeSmile
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   June 12, 2012 7:16pm UTC
   Indescribable Me♥
   Chapter 8.
   My mom and I got into this huge fight on the way there so I was crying for the whole ride to our new house. I was texting Hunter the whole thing, telling him once I get to the house I'll find something sharp and cut again. He told me not to do it, that it was bad; but I didn't care. I couldn't take it anymore.
   Finally we got to my new house. We left everything in our car because it was very late when we got there. The best part is, we live up above my grandparents, since we live in a two-family house! lol, jk, that's retarded. I did'nt want to live there at all! At least my mom let me miss two days of school so I didn't have to go till Monday.
   I kept e-mailing Mike, ugh. I miss my best friend so much!
   It was the first day of school, and I was scared crap. I decided to straighten my hair, just incase the girls here we're all prim and proper.
   I had to get to school 1O minutes early to get my schedule and to find my buddy who walks me around. I walked in with my mom, right behind her, ready to run bac to my hometown. A girl named Courtney was my buddy, she was really pretty, I wonder if she was nice. I didn't talk to her, and she didn't talk to me. We marched up the stairs into homeroom. I was already confused.
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7. BehindTheFakeSmile
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   June 9, 2012 4:16pm UTC
   Indescribable Me♥
   Chapter 7.
   The last bell of the day rung, that’s it… my last day was officially over. I won’t ever be going back to that school ever again. Oh my god this is terrible. I ran and found my social studies teacher, and I told him I’ll miss him very much, and he said he’ll miss me too. Then I walked down to my locker with Amber. When I got to my locker there was a huge crowd of people standing around it. I gave them each a hug, and as a matter of fact, there were so many people there to hug I almost missed my bus home! I probably hugged about 100 different people before I even opened my locker. I packed away everything from my locker into my bag; I had so much to carry.
   When I got home to my empty house, I sat down on the floor, and took out my phone. 13 new text messages, already! I texted one of my best friends, Billy, to see if he wanted to hang out. I left my phone on the floor and walked around my spacious house.
   “I’m actually moving.”
   I cried as loud as I could until Billy got to my house. Once he got here I ran up to him and gave him the biggest hug, getting tears all over his sweatshirt.
   “After today, I- I’m gone!” I sobbed.
   “Oh Kaylurp, everything’s going to be okay, as long as you keep in touch with the friends you have here. You’ll eventually be back,” he said as he put him arm around me.
   We walked around town and just talked. We went to his old house that got flooded from a hurricane. He had a swing tied to one of the trees right by the river in his backyard. We both went on it and I was actually smiling, it was really fun. Eventually I had to go to my house to pack up the last things left and leave. Billy walked me to my house, and gave me a huge hug goodbye.
   “I’ll miss you!” I shouted as I jogged to my front door.
   My mom got to the house and we packed the rest of the boxes into my mom’s car. I brought everything to the front door so my mom didn’t have to lug everything from upstairs and around the house. We both got into the car, to get my brother, which couldn’t hold anything else since it was piled with boxes. When we got my brother he had to squeeze in the car, he could barely fit. And of course, I technically had most of the boxes of my lap surrounding me where I could barely breathe and my brother had to hold 2 small ones. I could tell this is going to be a long drive.
   this is all true too, except i didn't help my mom:b Tell me what you think or what I should improve on!(: thanks ♥
   
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8. BehindTheFakeSmile
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   June 4, 2012 10:19pm UTC
   Indescribable Me♥
   Chapter 6.
   My friend Kate noticed I was sad and ran up to me. SHe was one of the new kids that came in the beginning of the year. She comforted me as we both walked to math, she told me everything was going to be alright, and being the new kid isn't s bad after all. That tear rolling down my face and my blood shot eyes made it look like I was crying, and I couldn't hide it; people knew once I walked in. Ugh! I forgot my textbook at home! Well that's another thing to put on my "Stress List."
   The ninth period bell rung while I was walking to class. I really didn't care if I was late since I hated my French teacher. One of my elementary school crushes, Jon, was waiting outside the classroom for me. He told me I couldn't walk in, and that one of my friends wanted me at the other end of the hallway. But I didn't fall for it, I knew something was up. To stall he took me for a walk around the school. As we were walking I saw one of my little sixth grade basketball buddies! (Since I did the boy's basketball STATS) I gave him a huge hug and didn't let go, even though I only knew him since basketball season started, he was like a little brother to me. He said he'll miss me a lot when I'm gone, and I'm gunna miss him too. So eventually it was just me and Jon roaming the halls. Jon said that French is never going to be the same without me, and that we got a lot more closer this year even though we only had one class together. We were probably alking around the school for 1O minutes, then we finally went in the class. I noticed the white board had drawings on it. Everyone from the class wrote on the board either saying "we'll miss you" or "good luck when you move" and in huge capital letters it said "GOOD LUCK IN YOUR NEW TOWN!" I aslo got a card, that everyone signed as well. It was the seetest thing. I really didn't know people cared about me that much.
   This is exactly what happened when it was my last day too, it was a time I'll never forget♥ Tell me what you think or what I should improve on!(: thanks ♥
   
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9. BehindTheFakeSmile
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   June 4, 2012 2:36pm UTC
   Indescribable Me♥
   Chapter 5.
   Now Mike wasn’t the cutest of all guys, but he had a big heart. I’ve been crushing on him since the beginning of the year and he never knew, and I could tell he liked me too. He always flirted with me, even if I was going out with someone. He always knew how to make me laugh, and did everything he can to make me smile. I need him in my life to survive, but now since I’m moving we can’t keep in touch that much since he only has a Gmail, no phone or Facebook account. I was very scared to leave, what if me and him just never talked at all, and lost our amazing friendship we have?
   I worry too much.
   Eventually 7th period came, and I was walking down the hall way alone. I looked down at my “release” paper, and realized it was my last day going to that school FOREVER. It was so depressing, knowing I’d probably lose all of my friends that I didn’t talk to much, but still had a good time with. Also knowing that you’d probably never see your teachers again was pretty sad, my teachers were my friends, and they were all so nice! Especially my hot social studies teacher, he didn’t want me to go at all, he won’t even sign my release papers to let me out of the school! I was thinking about too much, and I started to cry; yep, right in the middle of the hallway, right behind my old crush Jon, hopefully he didn’t hear or see me.
   This isn't that long but I haven't had the time to type a lot of it up. I have too much homework/: sorry. Tell me what you think or what I should improve on!(: thanks ♥
   
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10. BehindTheFakeSmile
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    June 3, 2012 7:20pm UTC
    I m p e r f e c t i o n i s h e r B e a u t y♥
    Chapter 2.
    They also hated how she didn’t eat, she wasn’t fat, but she wasn’t a twig either; her weight was perfect. DJ and Brooklyn wanted to say something to Cassie because they thought eventually people will start to tease her, so it isn’t worth changing. Cassie didn’t listen to them though, because she wasn’t bullied as much and actually felt good about herself.
    A week later things were getting back to normal, people started to bully Cassie again. They were saying she was wearing too much makeup, and that she’s not fitting in, and she’s trying too hard to feel popular. Cassie couldn’t take it, all she was trying to do was please people but they gave her horrible comments in return.
    When Cassie got home from school she logged into her Facebook account, she saw she had four friend requests. She accepted them even though she didn’t look at the names to see if she knew them; she just wanted to have a ton of friends like all the popular people did. She looked at her messages se got from people, they were mostly mean comments, saying she was annoying and ugly. But then she saw one from DJ, it said he wanted to see the old her, with no makeup covering her face, and he wanted to see her with the clothes she had on before she turned into a different person. She didn’t feel so confident about herself, even though she had her expensive things on. Cassie was tired of people always teasing her.
    That evening Cassie went up to her room and took her Barbie out.
    “I just don’t get it!” she said, “Why does everyone hate me? Everyone lovesyou, and now we look alike,” Cassie put her Barbie down, but then it magically came to life!
    “Sweetheart, don’t you worry, stop trying to please people and be yourself! People will say some mean things, but brush it off like it doesn’t bother you; they only tease you a lot because they want to see you sad and mad. Don’t try to be flawless like me, because I’m not. If I was a real human, I would be five feet and nine inches tall, weighing 110 pounds, and have a BMI of 16.24. I would have anorexia if I was real. So stop looking like a Barbie and be you! And hun, when people make fun of you for whatever reason, don’t take it to heart, they’re just jealous,” Barbie explained as she turned into a doll again.
    After Barbie explained that you don’t have to wear a lot of makeup or be skinny to feel beautiful, Cassie turned into the old her. She thought since Barbie, the flawless thing in the world, was telling her this; then she should stop changing into someone she’s not. She threw away all of her makeup she bought, and returned most of her new clothes. The school days went by, and DJ and Brooklyn were so happy she changed back to the old her. People stilled bullied her, but whenever someone did make fun of Cassie, it didn’t get to her head, because she knows she is beautiful, inside and out.
    this story is not part of "Indescribable Me" i just wanted to post this short story cause i might forget to post it later. and i will be continuing "Indescribable Me"
    i made this for school (:
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11. BehindTheFakeSmile
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    June 3, 2012 7:17pm UTC
    I m p e r f e c t i o n i s h e r B e a u t y♥
    Chapter 1.
    "Cassie, get up! You’re going to be late to school,” Cassie’s mom shouted from downstairs.
    Cassie really didn’t like school, since she always got bullied and didn’t have many friends. Her two good friends were Brooklyn and DJ, and they always stuck up for her when people made fun of her. People used to call her horrible names like fat, elephant ears, pimple face, and rolls. That made Cassie really insecure.
    Cassie wasn’t the richest of all people, but she wasn’t the poorest either. She didn’t buy name brand clothes like all of the popular people did. She didn’t wear a lot of makeup to think she was pretty. She was an original her.
    One day Cassie came home from school with tears in her eyes; it was the worst of all days. Her friend Brooklyn didn’t go to school because she was sick and DJ didn’t go because he was on vacation. She had no one by her side when she got bullied. Everyone took advantage of Cassie since no one was there to stick of for her. People were being so mean to her, everywhere she went people were always making fun of her. Cassie was afraid to speak up and stick of for herself because she knew people would bully her for that, too.
    “Oh boo-hoo, is Cassie going to cry because her friends aren’t here to save the day?” a girl from the crowd teased.
    Cassie just looked away and hid her tears; she never wanted to go to school again. When she got home, she took out her Barbie doll and sat on her bed.
    “Why can’t I look like you?” Cassie cried.
    She wanted to be skinny, have straight blonde hair, she wanted to be flawless. Cassie felt ugly since everyone teased her at school, so she wanted to change how she looked. She didn’t like being on the chubby side, and having pimples on her face. She wanted to have that clear skin everyone loved, and she wanted to be skinny like the people she sees on the computer.
    Cassie went downstairs and asked her mom if she can bring her to the mall. Later on, Cassie’s mom brought her shopping, and Cassie went right into the most expensive, popular store that everyone shopped at. She roamed around, looking for some cute clothes that would look good on her. She picked out different pairs of jeans, and a couple of shirts. Then, she got make up such as: foundation, blush, eyeliner, eye shadow, and lip gloss. Her mother didn’t bother to ask why she wanted all of that; she assumed it was a teenage phase.
    The next morning Cassie put on her new clothes, straightened her hair and applied every kind of makeup she bought.
    “Now I look like you… right?” Cassie muttered to Barbie.
    At school, everyone stared at Cassie, like she was this whole different person. Nobody commented on how she looked, but they were dying to say something mean. At lunch, Cassie didn’t eat much, because she claimed she was fat.
    The next couple of days Cassie wore a ton of makeup, and her expensive clothes, and barely ate. She loved the new her, but everybody else didn’t. Even at lunch DJ and Brooklyn told her to eat more and to stop changing. They hated how Cassie kept wearing lots of makeup; she looked like this fake girl, like a Barbie!
    this story is not part of "Indescribable Me" i just wanted to post this short story cause i might forget to post it later. and i will be continuing "Indescribable Me"
    i made this for school (:
    
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12. BehindTheFakeSmile
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    June 3, 2012 3:10pm UTC
    Indescribable Me♥
    Chapter 4.
    Finally the bus came, and I sat in a seat by myself, but talked to my friends: Jasmine and Abby. They were telling me that they will miss me so much when I’m gone. Later my best friend Amber came on the bus, and sat right next to me. Amber had a teddy bear and a yellow rose in her hand, holding them out to me. I love that girl so much; she’s always been there for me.
    When I walked into school I felt like this whole different person. I had so much popularity that one, and last day at that school. Even the really popular girls I used to hang out with came up to me and hugged me like three times throughout the day. Legit everyone came up to me giving me hugs and cards. After everyone finally got off of me, I sat down at the table with all of my closest guy friends.
    Third period came, which was band for me, and I wanted to cry. It has been an amazing 1 ½ in the middle school band, meeting tons of new friends. My teacher, who was like the father I never had gave a short speech about me.
    “So we have this amazing band member, and I think she’s been part of the band ever since 4th grade… and sadly, she’s leaving us today. This band class would probably be A LOT more quieter, and we will probably go through A LOT of things faster without anyone intur-“
    “Don’t forget about me! I always talk a lot too!” Ben interrupted.
    “Well as I was saying we are going to miss Valery a lot, being the amazing low brass-“
    “Flute!” I added.
    “Flute player! Hahaa, I was just kidding Val. Well I just hope Valery will keep playing her flute and never stop. She was one of the best players we have, and now we’re losing her. I’ll miss you a lot” my band teacher said.
    “Val, I’m going to miss you a lot, nothing’s ever going to be the same without you. I love you,” Mike said as he leaned over to me putting his arms on my shoulders. He was being all firty like he always was.
    And when he said he loved me, my stomach filled with butterflys, cause I loved him back.
    So technically this story is about me now, except I exaderate on many of the things to make the story better. Tell me what you think or what I should improve on!(: thanks ♥
    
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    Indescribable Me♥
    Chapter 3.
    “I-I didn’t mean to… well I did, but not to end up in the hospital. Iwasn’t thinking, I-I’m sorry!” I quivered.
    “Ahh! Valery you got me worried sick about you when your mom called me saying something bad happened to you, that I should go to the hospital. You could have died Val! You’re… you’re too young to die.”
    I saw the tears in Hunter’s eyes. I gave him the biggest, tightest hug, I’m so glad I have a friend like him. He’s like my brother/therapist, I could tell him anything and everything and he won’t tell a soul. I could trust him with my life. I felt a little dizzy, so I sat back down and dozed off.
    When I woke up, Hunter was still right there, holding my hand with the bandage around it. I stared at the clock; wow, I’ve been asleep for three hours and he’s still here! What a good friend.
    I left the next day around 11 o’clock, and went back to my house.
    “Only one more day, then we’re outta here’” I sighed.
    I woke up at 5:45 to get ready for the last day at school, for me at least. I flopped out of my inflatable mattress, and tip-toed into my bathroom so I wouldn’t wake anyone up. I grabbed my curling iron from underneath the sink, plugged it into the wall and let it heat up. I put on my nicest, cutest clothes, and did my makeup really good for a girl who never really uses it. Then, I went downstairs. Oh my god! It was 7:00! I had 10 minutes to get to my bus stop, so I skipped breakfast and ran a couple of blocks to my bus stop.
    Figures, my mom set the clock 10 minutes early, so I actually got to my bus stop at 6:57. I was sitting there alone with my puffed up curly hair and a bandage tied around my wrist. I was standing there forever, and the bus was running late too. I could tell my last day would be one of my worst days.
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14. BehindTheFakeSmile
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    June 1, 2012 5:00pm UTC
    Indescribable Me♥
    Chapter 2.
    How am I going to tell my mom I cut? What's going to happen to me when she finds out? I screamed the loudest I can to get my mom's attention, and soon enough I heard footsteps thumping up the stairs. I held out my cut up wrist, dripping with blood. There were tears in my eyes, and my mom almost fainted. She ran downstairs, and dialed 9-1-1, I heard her crying with fear. I was dissapointed in myself, how am I going to explain this to my mom?
    Eventually, I was riding in the back of an ambulence with a rag tied around my wrist, and a doctor putting pressure on my cuts. Everyone was so worried, but now I wasn't, I thought people wouldn't care if i died. They always made fun of me and judged me even though they don't know how much crap I've been through. I was zoning out whenever someone was asking me questions, like, "What exactly happened?" and, "Do you know what you could of done to yourself?"
    All I was think about was Hunter ever texting me back. Oh, I'll tell him all about this adventure. He was my best friend, better than everyone else. He made me feel special, like I have a reason to live.
    When I wake up I see I have a couple of stitches in my wrist. My eyes are all foggy, but I think I see Hunter and my mom outside my room. I call out my mom's name and she lets Hunter in.
    "What were you trying to do? Kill yourself?" Hunter shouted.
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    May 31, 2012 10:54pm UTC
    Indescribable Me♥
    Chapter 1.
    "Don't you understand?"
    "I do! But I just don't understand why you do it to yourself," my friend explained.
    I hung up the phone, I didn't feel like talking to anyone at the moment. I picked up my blade and headed to the shower. The water spilled out of the spout, and I lifted the plug with my boney hand.
    I stood in the shower, and put the blade down on the shelf next to me. The water was tapping my back, ever so gentally. Then it got harder, and soon enough it was hitting my back where the belt marks were left. I took the blade and slid it across my wrist. This time, I cut the main vain in my arm. It only took three cuts and the blood was all over my wrist, dripping down the drain. It was amazing, there was this big rush going through my body. Cutting just made me feel so alive, but no one gets it.
    I got out of the shower, and the blood is still pooring from my wrist. I see I got a new text message, from Hunter. It said "Uggh, can't believe it's only two more days! Then you're gone!! ):" I replied "Ew, don't even remind me. I don't want to move at all. Gunna miss you lots!<3" My hand was so shakey, I couldn't even text without using all of my might. Blood dripped onto my phone; I wiped it off with a towel, then tied it around my wrist. I saw the blood wasn't stopping, not even slowing down a bit. This time, i actually got scared. Most of the time I'm usually like "Oh forget life," or "Ahh, I could care less." But this time, I feel too young to die. A 12 year old, dying of cutting her main vain?
    It's my first story guys! Tell me what you think or what I should improve on!(: thanks ♥
    
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