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  1. iShake iShake
    posted a quote
    October 3, 2012 12:14pm UTC
    Hey guys, sorry for spamming,
    (ew I hate doing it myself, I'm such a hypocrite)
    but can you check out my fanfic? It's called Testing Fate and its about Tom Daley... Yeah I love him, he's my bby.
    But yeah, lemme know if you do like it and respond!
    Love you lots,
    Maisha.xoxoxo
    http://dancingwiththedaley.tumblr.com/
    the link^^
    Sorry for the spam, I hate doing it myself, I'm just being a total hypocrite right now.

  2. iShake iShake
    posted a quote
    September 1, 2012 11:24am UTC
    Hey guise, this is for the readers of my story 'Sparking Secrets'.
    So as you might have recently seen, I haven't been writing because I've been EXTREMELY busy, and because of this I'm gonna have to stop writing. I'm so sorry, but it just had to be done. I don't want to leave you all hanging, but yaknow it happens? So instead of completely cutting you all off, I'm going to start writing a new story, and the first chapter will be up very soon. Thankyou so much for reading my story, and I hope you enjoyed it! Hopefully you'll be reading my next story too, and please lemme know what you think of it:') I love you guys so much, and I cannot apologise more!!
    Lots of love,
    Maisha xoxoxo

  3. iShake iShake
    posted a quote
    July 14, 2012 7:48am UTC
    sparkingSECRETS;♥
    chapterTWENTY.
    If you want a reminder, please fave and/or comments, because then I know who to let know when the next chapter is up.
    Guys, check out this website! Its MY website! YAYAYAYAYAYAYYAYA check it out maaan, you might like it:D Its not completely done, it is under construction. Hope you like it, and let me know what could be improved (apart from the fact that it needs to be finished.)
    www.wittystories-ishake.weebly.com
    Alyssia's P.O.V.
    "I'm not leaving," I refused after Mum and Dad tried persuading me tearfully, "I need to see if my sister will survive." They looked at each other, finally giving up. They'd been trying for nearly thirty minutes now, because they didn't want me here if the results were bad. Charlie had come to take care of Tee, who was trying to hide her choking sobs in the corner. "Don't, you're upsetting the baby." he kept telling her, rubbing his hands on her stomach. She held him tight, not letting go. Mum and Dad were holding hands as well, and I was cuddled in Jacob's arms. I didn't want to go home because there would be another letter waiting there as well, something I just couldn't deal with. To suit the occasion, it started pouring down with rain, lightning flashing occasionally. This was just how we felt; sodden and miserable.
    After another hour of waiting - even though we could have gotten results nearly two hours ago - a doctor came in looking like he was carrying bad news. "Could the immediate family of Jayah and Bethany Jade please follow me?" Me, Tee, Mum and Dad stood up, leaving Jacob and Charlie standing next to each other. They were whispering about something, but I had no idea what. The doctor led us into what seemed like another waiting room, and gestured that we sit down. Me and Tee clung onto each other, tears spilling down our cheeks. I'd managed to only go down to sniffling, but Tiana was in a full-blown crying session. Mum was as well, and Dad was stroking her hair in an attempt to calm her down. "Sir, could you please calm your wife down?" Dad gave him a dirty look, and sarcastically said "Mate what do you think I'm doing now, feeding my pet unicorn?" The doctor apologized, and then looked at me and Tee. "I think now that everyone has calmed down considerably, I can tell you all the news." Whatever he was about to tell us was going to change our lives forever, for good or bad... Images flashed through my mind, like of when Jayah and Beth were newborns, when Jayah started crawling, when she said her first word ("Beffy!" she screamed whilst slapping Beth around the face with a teddy, delighted to finally be able to say something), and when she and Beth started acting cheeky. I blinked to keep the tear from dropping down my cheek, trying to keep a brave face for Mum. The doctor looked around the room, then down at his feet, which he kepy shuffling. He put his hands behind his back, looked at us, and said in a sad tone "I'm afraid Jayah didn't make it."
    This couldn't be happening, could it? This could all be a sick, twisted dream, where nothing was actually real. Everything was made-up, and the dream was just caused by worries of what could happen to the people you loved. But it wasn't. It was true, it was happening right now. Me and Tee had just been told our sister died. Mum and Dad just got told their daughter died. And it was all real.
    Jacob's P.O.V.
    What could be happening in there? Were they told good news, and that Jayah had survived and was slowly recovering? Or was it the unthinkable, that they had just lost one of their most charismatic, beautiful, and amazing people in their family? Was it true that Bethany had just lost her twin sister, and would have to face life's struggles without what was pretty much her bestfriend? All of these thoughts swirled through my mind, endless possibilities constantly popping up. I would be there for every single one of them if... the bad thing... happened, and would never leave their sides. But it couldn't be that Jayah really had left us, she still had to be her breathing self didn't she?
    Alyssia's P.O.V.
    We were forced out of the room, bawling. Jacob ran out of his seat, along with Charlie, and embraced me. Charlie went straight to Tee, telling her it was alright. But was it really alright? We'd just lost our youngest sister, and how would Beth react? She'd just lost her twin, her bestfriend, someone that she could tell everything. She'd lost the person she was closest to. And just watch, when I get home and open the next envelope, I'll be losing someone I'm closest to.
    MY DAD CAME HOME FROM HOSPITAL TODAY, TIME TO CELEBRATE:D I might treat you all to two chapters today...;)
    Guys I think I'm losing readers:O Its like, depressing times. I bet the reason why is because I haven't been writing regularly enough. Nice. So I need you all to do me a favour; PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE tell people about my story, it would make me so happy! iloveyouu.♥

  4. iShake iShake
    posted a quote
    July 8, 2012 10:12am UTC
    sparkingSECRETS;♥
    chapterNINETEEN.
    If you want a reminder, please fave and/or comments, because then I know who to let know when the next chapter is up.
    I haven't been writing properly reasontly because..
    1. I've been running back and forth from a freaking hospital to see my dad and
    2. I'm bloomin' well tired. So yeah, leave me alone, I'm not feeling well now either:/
    Guys, check out this website! Its MY website! YAYAYAYAYAYAYYAYA check it out maaan, you might like it:D Its not completely done, it is under construction. Hope you like it, and let me know what could be improved (apart from the fact that it needs to be finished.)
    www.wittystories-ishake.weebly.com
    Alyssia's P.O.V.
    I just don't understand why all the bad things happen to the people I love. Yeah, this was my fault, but how am I going to live with it? Next week is Christmas, and we still have no idea whether or not Jayah and Beth are going to survive. Mum is sitting in A&E with dad and Tee, barely able to breath thanks to her tears, and then there's me here, helplessly, the one who caused it all. Today is the day that yet another letter will come through the post, ready to rip my life into smaller shreds, if that's even possible. First Lizah is left pretty much paralysed and in a wheelchair, and my youngest sisters could lose their lives.
    Why me?
    Jacob's P.O.V.
    Trying to comfort all of your girlfriend's family is a pretty hard job, especially when your trying not to cry yourself. Seeing Jayah and Beth lying there, completely drained of their life, brings tears to my eyes; if it affects me so much, how much must it be affecting Alyssia and her family? I clasped her hand as we sat on the grey metal benches, and we were being stared at by other patients. A teenager with a giant cast on her leg holds her mum's hand, an older man with his wife laying her head on his shoulder, a little boy crying his eyes out on his dad's lap. All of these people have done something, or had something done to them, for them to come here. Something was inflicted upon them, just like us. All of us had a hint of bad luck that elevated into something worse - the whole reason we were sitting here. Just as I was thinking about that, a masked man came into the room and looked at us. "Charlotte Jade, James Reid, Tiana Jade and Alyssia Jade?" They stood up, and he continued. "We need you to come in."
    Alyssia's P.O.V.
    The man led us into the room where Jayah and Beth were, but there was only one bed there. This couldn't be happening... We couldn't have lost one of them? "As you can see," the man said, "we only have one bed here." Mum looked at him, and sternly said "Well you think we can't see that? WHERE IS MY OTHER DAUGHTER?!" The man looked at us, and asked her to calm down. "Please, let me explain Mrs. Jade." Mum calmed down a bit, and let him explain. "Here, we have Bethany Jade, and Jayah was taken into the operating theatre. There, our surgeons are trying to save her life. In another 10 minutes, we will know whether or not she will survive." Mum and Dad burst into tears, while me and Tee stood shaking.. "Bethany was so close to death, but our amazing doctors managed to save her life. Jayah is extremely weak." Mum looked at Beth's unconcious body, and put her hands on her face. "My beautiful babies," she whispered, kissing Beth's cheek, "why you?" We stood near Beth for a bit, when a surgeon ran inton the room from a set of doors on the left of the room. "Doctor, something's happened."
    Sorry guys, was a bit short, but next chapter is gonna be WHOA:O
    Guys I think I'm losing readers:O Its like, depressing times. I bet the reason why is because I haven't been writing regularly enough. Nice. So I need you all to do me a favour; PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE tell people about my story, it would make me so happy! iloveyouu.♥

  5. iShake iShake
    posted a quote
    July 5, 2012 12:44pm UTC
    sparkingSECRETS;♥
    chapterEIGHTEEN;part'two.
    If you want a reminder, please fave and/or comments, because then I know who to let know when the next chapter is up.
    I haven't been writing properly reasontly because..
    1. I've been running back and forth from a freaking hospital to see my dad and
    2. I'm bloomin' well tired. So yeah, leave me alone, I'm not feeling well now either:/
    Guys, check out this website! Its MY website! YAYAYAYAYAYAYYAYA check it out maaan, you might like it:D Its not completely done, it is under construction. Hope you like it, and let me know what could be improved (apart from the fact that it needs to be finished.)
    www.wittystories-ishake.weebly.com
    Beth's P.O.V. continued
    I knocked on the door and was met by Jamie and Cam's oldest sister, Renee. She was holding her aby daughter, and greeted me warmly. I'd never met Renee before, because she lived in Spain with her fiancee, but judging by what Lizah and Alyssia had gushed about her being the 'ultimate beauty', they were right. Her soft brown hair was straigtened to her elbow, going from a light brown at the top to a more chocolatey colour. She had piercing blue eyes like Jamie, and was amazingly tall. She let me into the house, to be met with the gleeful squeeling of Jamie and the soft laugh of Cameron to Jamie's reaction."Haallooo, Beth! Alyssia told me you'd be here." I laughed, and looked at Cameron. Je understood, nodded, and we both ran up the stairs to his room. The familiar smell of deodorant clung to the air, as Jamie went into his room everyday and sprayed it with Lynx so it wouldn't stink. "Right, here. Dial this number." He handed me their house phone, a slip of paper and a pen. The paper had two numbers on it, and the name 'Chase Zachariah' scribbled on. "Directory Enquiries, who can we find for you today?" said a bubbly young lady on the other end. "Err, Chase Zachariah please." I mumbled. "Okay, in what area?" "Mayfield." I said shakily. I could then hear the tapping of a keyboard, and then she said "Ooh your in luck! We got one result. Would you like his address and phone number?" "Yes please." She recited them both to me, and I told Cam what they were. He wrote them down, and then we hung up. We exchanged a look, and went downstairs again. "Reneee," Cam trilled from the bottom of the stairs, "me and Beth are going to the park." Jamie came from the main room, and said "Alright, Ren said have fun and don't get in trouble. See you Bethy!" She hugged me, and opened the door for us. We walked in the direction of Mayfield Park, which we passed on the way to the house. When we finally got there, we took a deep breath and looked into each others eyes. "We can do this." Cameron breathed. He then knocked on the door, and out of nowhere we were pulled into the dark.
    Cameron screamed in protest, trying to kick the captor where the sun don't shine. He groaned in pain when Cameron finally succeeded, and said "Right that's it, your dead." I gaped in horror at what they did to Cam; the hooded figure threw him onto the floor only for him to be dragged along it by another, talled figure. He then opened one of the three doors at the bottom of the stairs, and threw him into it. Then he opened the bottom one; presumably the one he wanted ME to get into. I saw a little shadow in the corner of the room...Jayah! It was JAYAH! I kicked the man that gripped my arm so I could go and free her, but he just got his 'friend' to pick me up again and take me down. He struggled with me, because I kept trying to punch, kick, pinch and bite him, but he just threw me into the cellar. He said a few words, and locked the door.
    What have I just gotten myself into...?
    Guys I think I'm losing readers:O Its like, depressing times. I bet the reason why is because I haven't been writing regularly enough. Nice. So I need you all to do me a favour; PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE tell people about my story, it would make me so happy! iloveyouu.♥

  6. iShake iShake
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    July 5, 2012 12:29pm UTC
    sparkingSECRETS;♥
    chapterEIGHTEEN;partone.
    If you want a reminder, please fave and/or comments, because then I know who to let know when the next chapter is up.
    I haven't been writing properly reasontly because..
    1. I've been running back and forth from a freaking hospital to see my dad and
    2. I'm bloomin' well tired. So yeah, leave me alone, I'm not feeling well now either:/
    Guys, check out this website! Its MY website! YAYAYAYAYAYAYYAYA check it out maaan, you might like it:D Its not completely done, it is under construction. Hope you like it, and let me know what could be improved (apart from the fact that it needs to be finished.)
    www.wittystories-ishake.weebly.com
    Five days earlier
    Beth's P.O.V.
    I knew I had to save Jayah - I mean obviously, she's my twin sister - but I had no idea how to track her down. I then had an idea; surely our friends saw where she went after school, because I was doing after school classes. They were compulsery, but Jayah didn't come because she felt sick and went home with our friends. She didn't turn up at home... Strange thing was, Jay texted me saying she was going home and geytting picked up 'cos she was in the sick room, but I saw her going back to our classroom looking dazed and totally freaked out. I couldn't put my finger on why, though, seeing as we'd been joking around before we left for school. I decided to ring Jamie's brother Cameron, to see if he'd talked to her on the day she went missing. Camern and Jayah were really good friends, if not bestfriends, so he probably had. Sadly enough, I'd have to leave my bedroom to get hold of someone's phone, so I snuck over to Joe's room to ask him if I could use his. His room was next door to mine, and he blasted his music pretty loud, so we had to fight over who did their music loudest. Bad thing is, Joe listens to rock and heavy-metal music, and damn that goes LOUD. As always, Joe had Paramore pounding out of his speakers, and I knocked on his door. "Tee go away, I already told you you're not using my laptop!" "Its not Tee, its Beth." I heard the music come to a sudden stop, and he opened his door. "Watch out for the pizza," he warned as I walked in. I stepped over the mankey box and he gestured that I sit on his bed; unmade, of course. His wall was plastered with posters of Paramore, Black Veil Brides and a bunch of others I couldn't recognise. The main posters were of Hayley Williams, he was OBSESSED with her because he met her when he was 12. "What's up little one?" "I need to call Cameron. Can I use your phone?" He nodded, and handed me his navy blue Blackberry. "You have half an hour, I need to ring Chanel." He winked, then went downstairs to grab a Magnum. Chanel was Joe's gorgeous girlfriend ("No idea how he managed to bag her," said Alyssia, gaping in awe at Chanel and her curves), and she is so sweet. She's fifteen, and I saw her picking up her little brothers Dustin and Kalum at school today, and she greeted me with a show-stopping smile. Snapping back to the task at hand, I took my credit-less phone out of my pocke, and looked for Cameron's number. I then dialled it on Joe's phone and called him. "Hey its Cameron, who's this?" "Heey Cam, its Beth." "Oh hey Bethany, what's up?" he said, seeming happy to hear from me. "Oh nothing much, but can I ask you something? Its about Jayah." There was a slight silence, and then he came back to earth. "Oh right. Yeaah. Go on?" I had no idea how to word my question, so quickly blurted "When did you last see Jayah on the day she went missing?" He thought for a moment, then remembered. "I know! She said her cousins were picking her up. Someone you nickname Jewel, or something...?" Well, the police never got that information. "We-we don't have a cousin we call Jewel, though.." Silence. "Ohmygod. The kidnappers were in front of me the whole time!" Cam realised, suddenly freaking out. "But...They looked so normal.. One was a girl called Rubie, and her boyfriend Ch- Oh God, Rubie was your 'cousin' wasn't she?" I shook my head in disbelief. It couldn't be my cousin Rubie, she was at my house when the whole thing happened; I found her there when I got home. Mum said' she'd been there since 12, which is obviously way to early for anyone to go and get us from school. "Cam, what did 'Rubie's' boyfriend look like?" I asked, trying to get deeper into the depths of my curiosity. "Erm. Tall. Wore a purple hoodie. Brown hair and eyes. He looked as if... He was hiding something." That didn't sound like James. He had dirty blonde hair and hazel eyes, although he was tall. The description of Rubie was even less identical. Apparently, she had blue eyes, dyed blonde hair that was cut into a bob, and looked really short. That was nothing like Rubie. Rubie had dark, cherry red hair that tumbled down in luscious curls to around her waist, and she had bewitching grey eyes with flecks of green in them. She had the perfect supermodel figure, just like her sister Cheyanne (Chey for short) who actually IS a model; curvy and tall as hell. "There's something not right here." I expained my theory to him, and he went 'mm' and 'aah' at all the parts he agreed with. "I was with Jayah when they came to get her. The guy introduced himself as Chase Zachariah." Then, an idea popped into my head. "I'm coming to yours in a bit. Be prepared."
    When the journalists came around later that day, I had the perfect chance to escape. I put on my blue hoodie, a pair of jeggings and the Converses me and Jayah had designed about three weeks earlier. Alyssia saw me outside, and waved her arms around like a mad woman. I was guessing she wanted me to get out of sight pronto, so I ran to Cam's house.
    Guys I think I'm losing readers:O Its like, depressing times. I bet the reason why is because I haven't been writing regularly enough. Nice. So I need you all to do me a favour; PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE tell people about my story, it would make me so happy! iloveyouu. ♥
    I have to do it in two parts because this chapter is too longg.

  7. iShake iShake
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    June 25, 2012 1:30pm UTC
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    OHHAITHERE♥
    Right, so, GUESS. WHAT.
    I have made A WEBSITE! Its called iShake's Stories and the link to it is belowww. It includes a basic thing about the stories, the characters (Yes. PHOTOS.) and outfits from different chapters! It also gives little hints as to what might happen in the chapter that is being written... Oooh;) So, hopefully you enjoy it and you think its, like, AHMAZING. Bwaah, joking. Its C R A P. Anyways, thanks for reading:)
    LOVE YOU GIRLIES, I love you for reading my story:)
    This is the link to the website;
    www.wittystories-ishake.weebly.com
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  8. iShake iShake
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    June 21, 2012 3:12pm UTC
    sparkingSECRETS;♥
    chapterSEVENTEEN
    If you want a reminder for when the next chapter comes out, fave and/or comment. Even if you randomly fave and don't read this story, you're getting a reminder because I can't keep track with every reader I have. I feel bad for the people with, like, 238743636148 readers (AHEM TheMascaraSeries. Omg I love you.)
    I haven't been writing properly reasontly because..
    1. I've been running back and forth from a freaking hospital to see my dad and
    2. I'm bloomin' well tired. So yeah, leave me alone, I'm not feeling well now either:/
    I have also been busy making my first CSS layouts and making a design for it
    So this time, for a spoiler of Chapter 19 on the next chapter I need 5 faves:D
    "Jacob hurry up, we need to ring 999!" I shouted, watching Jacob trying to swim downwards. His head popped up again, and he shook it. "They're too far down. They look so familiar!" I nodded, then dragged him out. "COME ON!" We were both soaked, because we were both taking turns trying to get the two people out of the lake. Me and Jacob immediatly called the emergancy services after struggling up the hill. He pressed the nine three times in super speed, and panted on the line to the person on the other end. "People... In... Water!" he said breathlessly. I heard a crackly 'how many' and he answered "TWO!" I grabbed the phone off him, as I had somehow regained my breath. "Right, there are two people at the bottom of Highland Lake, and I don't think their breathing! COME NOW!" I screamed, and after the lady assured me they would be at the scene as soon as possible I hung up. I couldn't get the image out of my head...
    When the ambulances arrived along with the police, they rushed down with all of their kit. They took two beds along with them, and carried body bags with them in case the unimaginable happened. One man jumped into the water, and a young lady went with him. They constantly came up for breath, but after about 20 minutes they finally came up with a pair of bodies that looked so much like two people I'd known... I couldn't put my finger on who they were, because every inch of them was soaked and they were unrecognisable. Then I gasped, and realisation hit me. "JAYAH AND BETH! NO!" I sprinted over to where the paramedics were, tears flowing down my face, my speech unintellagable. "MY SISTERS, THOSE ARE MY SISTERS!" Jacob ran over to me, and grabbed me around the waist. "They can't be, they really can't be.." he tried reassuring me, but I already knew he was lying. He knew they were Jayah and Beth; he could recognise them as well. He'd known them all their lives. "I'm not going to be able to convince you they're not, am I?" I didn't say anything, and suddenly let go of Jacob's iron grip. "My babies! THEY HAVE TO BE ALIVE!" I screamed, standing next to their bodies splayed on the ground. I took both of their hands in mine, and kissed them both. "You're alright, I know you are." I whispered into each of their ears, unable to hear any breathing. The paramedics tore them from the ground and layed them onto the beds, then rushed into the ambulances. "LET ME COME, PLEASE!" I ran up with them, and jumped into the ambulance before they left.
    They checked to see if Jayah or Beth had pulse rates, which neither of them had. They constantly pumped their chests, trying to get them to breath again. I was watching it all, crying my eyes out with Jacob trying to reassure me they'd be okay. "Please, God," I pleaded, "save them! Their ten, they have their whole lives ahead of them!" Then, we arrived at Mayfield Hospital, and they rushed the two beds in. They wouldn't let me in to see them, even though they were my sisters, so I screamed at them for not letting me. Instead, I was forced into giving all of our details, and our numbers and addresses so they could contact mum and dad. "Now please," I begged, staring at them using tear-glazed eyes, "let me see my sisters." The paramedic looked at me for a while, holding my longing gaze, and shook his head. "I'm so sorry, but we can't," he replied, looking at me sadly, "having anyone else around them causes a huge risk of infection, causing a smaller risk of survival - for either of them." I nodded, understanding how slim their chances were anyway, and sat down on a grey metal bench and started sobbing. Jacob followed, and wrapped his arms around me whilst wiping my tears away. "They'll be fine, I know it." He kissed my forehead, then gestured for me to lay my head on his shoulder. I continued sobbing, an endless pain coursing through me. Suddenly, a paramedic ran through a set of wide metal doors, and screamed "One of them is awake and breathing!"
    We ran into the bleak room, surrounded by machines and operating equipment. Amazingly, Jayah was the one that was awake - we were told she was the weakest of them both. Her eyes were partially open, and she instantly recognised our faces. I walked over to her, and saw her linked to Beth; she was clasping her hand tight, and didn't look like she was gonna let go. She moved her mouth slightly, but with a fat mask over her mouth we couldn't hear what she was saying. She seemed like she was saying 'Bethany', but we couldn't really tell. Then, she said it again, but it was more understandable; she was saying "I love you Bethany, stay strong." A tear came to my eye, following in the path of the others that still marked my face from before. Jayah tried squeezing Beth's hand, but she suddenly went limp. "We've lost her!" one of the surgeons shouted, and I burst into another wave of tears. They pushed me and Jacob out of the room, and we just stood there, no idea how to react. Jacob hugged me, trying to calm me down, but he was sobbing as well. I never knew those stupid letters could cause so much... Why me?
    Thanks for being so supportive guys, I haven't been able to write for the week for so many reasons. iloveyou..</3

  9. iShake iShake
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    June 15, 2012 12:56pm UTC
    Hey guys.
    So I haven't been writing my story for a little bit now because I'm going through a lot.. I can't be bothered to type it up here, so check the quote I wrote quote I wrote on my main account, MaiiEeeShaSha. I'll post a link at the bottom. Well, because of all of those reason's I kinda can't write, and the story might be delayed for a while until things get back to normal. Thanks for understanding girls, I love you so, so much♥
    iShake (AKA Maisha/MaiiEeeShaSha)♥♥♥
    Link to the quote;http://www.wittyprofiles.com/q/5862269.

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  12. iShake iShake
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    June 5, 2012 11:45am UTC
    sparkingSECRETS;♥
    chapterFOURTEEN.
    Really proud of myself, I've been writing more regularly;)
    Oooh yeah, I'm starting a new thing! If I can get enough faves on this chapter, I'll give you a hint on what's going to happen in the next one on whoever faves' profile;) This time, I want 4 faves;)
    Oh yeah, I haven't been posting recently because my laptop decided that it would go spaz, and would refuse to charge:/ Sorry beauties.
    I knocked on Beth's door, wondering if she'd known about the headline that was written about her. "Bethany?" I said gently, waiting for a reply. "Beth, d'you know you're... Famous?" Beth opened the door a crack, and nodded her head. "Yeah. And I'm not famous for a good reason." A sudden knock on the door signalled something bad was about to happen. A news crew burst in as soon as I opened it a crack, and flew into the main room. "Is Beth Jade here?" I looked around the room, just to make sure Beth was safe and wasn't bombarded by questions. I shook my head so as to tell them to just go away, but they weren't leaving that quickly. They were obviously eager to ask Beth endless questions, many that would puzzle her still young brain. I got out my phone and texted her, letting her know that she should run out through the garden door so that she wasn't killed with questions. She texted back saying 'K.' and I heard her door creak open. "Was that her!" a young newsreader, presumably only 19, asked in excitement. "Probably not, it might be Tiana." Luckily, Tee came down right at that point to cover Beth's footsteps, and let her out of the garden door to safety. She appeared outside the front window, and as the reporters gaped at Tee's pregnant belly I shoo'd her away. They looked at me like I was mad. "Sorry, there was a fly.." I babbled, so that it wasn't obvious that I was trying to hide something. "So, is she in or not...?" another begged, wanting a juicy story. "Nope, sorry. I checked the rooms." Tee said confidently, and by her tone of voice she was a very good liar; one that probably had A LOT of experience. The reporters looked unimpressed, so shot out of the door at lightspeed.
    at lightspeed. "Phew. That was a close one." Tee added, wiping her forehead. "I know, right? Can you imagine the questions they might have asked her..." Tee nodded, and decided to walk to the kitchen and grab a Cornetto from the freezer. "Hey, I'm eating for two alright?" she grinned, patting her inflated stomach. As she closed the freezer door, she gazed at a picture of her holding Jayah when she was a newborn. It was stuck to the door by a personalised magnet that read;
    Tiana;Alyssia;Joseph;Jayah;Bethany:
    mybeauties♥
    A tear rolled down her cheek, and she walked out of the kitchen sobbing.
    Jayah's P.O.V
    The dark room I'd been sitting in for the past 3 days was dusty and extremely claustrophobic. At random intervals, a weird... guy... would come and check that I wasn't doing anything that might give me up. If I screamed? I was dead. If I laughed? I was dead. If I did anything alarming? You guessed it; I was dead. I might as well not be aloud to breath, but I think they'd appreciate that. Wasn't happening though. Suddenly, the door opened and let a fresh burst of light and air in. I savoured the rare occasion, because seeing the light was something I should be glad about. The room was pitch black, and it was pretty creepy. A tall, hooded figure came in dragging a young girl, probably my age, into the room. She was squeling, and trying to punch him. "LET ME GO!" she screamed, and I could tell he was smirking. "Trust me girlie, you don't wanna punch me anymore," he paused to grab her fragile-looking arm, "or you're life is over NOW." That shut her up. By looking at her through the small beams of light, she had a pair of Converses that looked odly familiar.. They looked a lot like a pair that me and Beth had custom made on their website the other day. I shrugged it off, finding it a mere coinsidence. The man pushed her onto the floor beside me, and muttered "I think you might recognise this one, little lady." He walked over to the door, shot us an evil grin, and slammed the door behind him. "Jayah!" said a little voice that I definitely recognised. "How do you know my name..." I said cautiously, in case it wasn't who I thought it was. I really hoped it wasn't her, because I'd never want her to go through this much trouble. "Jayah, I know you know who it is." she said, annoyed. Yep, I definitely knew who it was now. I couldn't believe she'd do this; why would she do this for me? "Jay-Jay, look at me." She put her hood down, and I could clearly see our identical brown hair, that tumbled down in princessy ringlets down to our elbows. "Jay, its Bethany!"
    Surprising, isn't it?

  13. iShake iShake
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    May 26, 2012 8:20am UTC
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    chapterTHIRTEEN.
    Really proud of myself, I've been writing more regularly;)
    Oooh yeah, I'm starting a new thing! If I can get enough faves on this chapter, I'll give you a hint on what's going to happen in the next one on whoever faves' profile;) This time, I want 7 faves;)
    Home wasn't somewhere I wanted to be. Nobody was in a good mood, even Tiana after her dinner with Charlie. As soon as he went home, she was in a bad mood. Beth actually came down after a lot of persuading from Charlie, and amazingly she ate dinner with the family. I had nobody to talk to apart from Lizah and Jamie, because everyone else was in a bad mood. Only my girls would understand what I was really going through; not even Jacob could see what kind of pain I was in. I dialled Jamie's number first, because Lizah would probably still be sleeping. "Yo, 'sup?" she answered, sounding hyper. I could hear Caleb in the background, presumably making breakfast. "Jaaaaaaaay," I trilled, glad to hear her voice, "how comes Caleb's at your house so early?" Caleb laughed, then shouted "I got bored!" and went back to making food. "Jay, I'm so stressed. I'm freaking out about Jayah." Jamie went silent, then went "I'm coming to your house... After Cay makes me breakfast." I giggled, knowing that Jamie would say that. Caleb makes AMAZING food. "Kay babes, thanks. Peace out!" I said, then hung up. I texted Lizah, saying:
    Lizah bubbah, see if you can pursuade Justin to bring you my house♥
    I waited for her reply, but she texted back saying that she was really tired and couldn't be bothered to go anywhere and that she was really sorry. That was purely expected from Lizah, but I could totally understand her. Then, the doorbell went and I was met with the smiling faces of Jamie, Caleb, Justin and Lizah. "Haaaai. I wanted to surprise you." said Lizah, winking. "Oh go away!" I laughed, wheeling her into the main room. "Right, so the police haven't found anything yet. Its really depressing actually." I said, putting my head down. "Oh baby..." Jamie started, coming over to hug me. "They still haven't gotten any evidence that Jayah really has gone missing. For all they know, we could be like those weirdo parents who trapped their son in the basement and said he went off in a hot air balloon to get in the press." They all stared at me, then I had to reassure them that we really weren't. "We're... Er.. Not even in the press." I added, just to prove my point. "Well... I'm not sure that's exactly true." Lizah said, looking unsure of if she should have mentioned it. "LIZAH, we weren't meant to mention it!" "Well, she would've found out anyway!" she said, shooting glances at everyone. "She's right, I would have. And it would've been from someone I hated." I said, glad that someone I trusted told me. Lizah pulled out a newspaper, and on the front in read;
    Young Girl Goes Missing; Identical Twin Sister, 10, Possible Suspect.
    Sorry; short chapter. Wasn't feeling imaginative.

  14. iShake iShake
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    May 22, 2012 1:56pm UTC
    sparkingSECRETS;♥
    chapterTWELVE.
    Really proud of myself, I've been writing more regularly;)
    Oooh yeah, I'm starting a new thing! If I can get enough faves on this chapter, I'll give you a hint on what's going to happen in the next one on whoever faves' profile;) This time, I want 10 faves;)
    I sat in the main room with Mum and Tee, as Dad had to go to work today. Tiana sat rubbing her stomach, which was slowly inflating to an irregular size; well, a size normal for a pregnant person. She stared at the new ring that had been stuck to her finger since last Monday, the day that her boyfriend of 7 years, Charlie, proposed to her. She kept gushing about how perfect he was, and that they'd always be together. I believed her completely, because Charlie treated her like a princess. "Charlie got the baby a little cot yesterday, we're gonna decorate it when we find out the gender of the baby." "Aww, he or she should be a mystery baby." I said, wanting it to be a surprise. "Naaah, we need to buy clothes and stuff in advance, innit?" I walked out of the room to do my hourly check on Beth, who was still sitting in her room blasting One Direction. "Bethany Jade, come out please." I begged. "What, just so I can see my whole family crying? No thanks." she said, obviously annoyed. "Come on, Tee really wants to see you." "Well, why can't she come up herself? She's not in the same state as Lise." I tried opening the door, but it was locked. "For God's sakes Beth, come out." I shouted, getting pssed at her. "You're being really extra." I regretted what I said right then; how was I meant to know what it was like to lose your twin sister? "Oh my God Beth, I am so sorry." Beth opened the door, tears welling up in her eyes. "You're not going through what I'm going through, are you?" she screamed, and slammed the door in my face. Well, I totally deserved that.
    "What day is it Mum?" I asked as I walked downstairs. "Erm... I'm not sure darling," she replied, looking puzzled. "Its Saturday, beauts." Tee said, smiling. "Why you in such a good mood?" I asked, curious at why she had such a big smile on her face. "Just thinking of my Charlie," she beamed, "he's coming round for dinner and to check on our baby Bethany." Mum loved Charlie. She respected him so much because of the way he always took care of Tiana. When our grandad died when she was fifteen, he came to check on her everyday to comfort her. Then, when she broke her leg, he was at the hospital whenever it was visting hours. He wouldn't leave her side, no matter what the nurses said. He replied everytime: "My girlfriend is sitting here in pain, and you really expect me to leave her bedside? Haha, very funny but I don't think so." It was only when the nurses literaly dragged him out of the ward that he softened up and only came when needed.
    The door went, and Tee ran straight to it. "CHARLIE MY BABYYYYY!" she screamed, evidently happy that he was here. "Hey beautiful, how you and the baby doing?" he laughed, holding her hand as they both walked in. He patted her stomach, then kissed it lovingly. I suddenly got a phonecall from Jacob, and he wasn't letting up. I finally picked up, and Jacob's voice sounded eager... Excited. "Ally come to my house, like, now!" I laughed, wondering at why he was so happy. "Please, don't suddenly spoil me like last time." I mentioned, thinking about last time. "Please baby, you know you want to.." he said, sounding like he had a sneaky smile on his face. He started singing my favourite song to lure me to his house; The Only Exception by Paramore. "Oh really?" I said sarcastically, but really my heart was melting at the beauty of his voice. "You're coming now aren't you?" "Eugh, yeah, I guess so." I said, completely driven away by his singing. "YAAAY, leave now." He hung up after that, so I went to the main room to say my goodbyes and got changed into my black jeggings and a thick white jumper, and slipped on my simple black New Look flats. I knocked on Jacob's door five minutes later, and saw him grinning at me as soon as he opened it. "Come, come!" he pressured, grabbing my hand and leading me into his kitchen. His whole family was seated there, smiling at me. He sat me down at the table, and signalled 'one second' as he ran to get something from his bedroom. His whole family were obviously in on it, as they were smiling a bit too much, giving away their part in it. He came back with a big box, which looked like it was filled to the brim with... Paper? "I have a little puzzle I'd like you to do." he said, looking like he was about to burst out in giggles. He looked really nervous at the same time, like he was worried about something bad happening. He the grabbed the box, and emptied it out. "G'waan, I want you to put the pieces together... It'll spell something out." I wandered what the hell he was up to. Was it a joke, or was he being serious? After about half an hour of putting paper together, it read;
    "Alyssia Jade, I love you with all my heart♥" I had no idea how to react, but then decided to just go with my instict. I walked over to him, hugged him, then kissed him.
    Sweet, isn't it?♥

  15. iShake iShake
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    May 21, 2012 12:46pm UTC
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    Alyssia,
    I'm very happy that you decided to go along with what I told you too do; I'm surprised you even bothered to do it seeing as it was your best friend. Well, whilst everyone speculates about how Lizah could have been injured so badly, I have another job for you to do. This time, its aimed towards your sister Jayah. I don't care if you start sulking after you read this name, you have to do it whether you like it or not. I want you to call this number;
    07592019283 and they will sort it all out for you. I'll tell you what to say and who sent you to call them at the bottom of the letter when I sign. All I'm gonna say is, my 'people' are going to 'pick Jayah up after school'. You'll find out what happens when you can't find her.
    Jewel.
    P.S. Mention to the people you called that I sent you there. Got it?

  16. iShake iShake
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    May 19, 2012 8:04am UTC
    sparkingSECRETS;♥
    chapterTEN.
    Really proud of myself, I've been writing more regularly;)
    Oooh yeah, I'm starting a new thing! If I can get enough faves on this chapter, I'll give you a hint on what's going to happen in the next one on whoever faves' profile;) This time, I want 5 faves♥
    I sat in the main room, thinking about what they could be doing to Jayah; a pain that was inflicted by me. Mum was sitting in next to me, along with Tiana and Dad. Tears were spilling down her face, and it looked like they didn't want to stop anytime soon. I could not bear seeing anyone in such a state, especially all of my family. Beth was the worst of us though, seeing as she'd practically lost her best friend. She was locked away in her bedroom, blaring out One Direction and looking at photo's of her and Jayah together, last time I checked.
    The doorbell rang, loud and clear, due to the lack of electronics running in our house (apart from Beth listening to One Direction, which could be excused), and we all sat staring at each other. Tiana wondered if we should get the foor, bcause she was worried people might be freaked out by us crying. I got up to open it anyway, with makeup smeared halfway down my face. As soon as I opened it, I was met with the sympathetic smiles of Jamie, Jacob, Caleb, Justin and Lizah. Wait... Lizah? "Hey baby," she started, "I'm back!" She laughed, sitting in a wheelchair being pushed by Justin. "L-LIZAH?!" I stammered, wondering why the hell she was sitting in front of me.
    "Yeah, I got let out by pretty strict conditions. I bloody well hated that sh*t hole." She giggled slightly, then Justin held out his hand for her to grab. "Anyway we're really sorry about Jayah..." "It's alright, I guess..." I led them in to the main rom, which was met by the shocked faces at Lizah's sudden appearance. "Lizah, what happened to you?!" Tiana asked, completely shocked. We hadn't told her the full story, because we didn't want her to stress to much what with work and uni. "Oh Tee, you don't need the details. Trust me, you don't want to know." Lizah smiled, whilst being wheeled into the main room further. "You're in such a state though!" Tee complained, a tone of worry in her voice. "Eugh Tee, stop worrying. She said so already." I complained, getting annoyed. "Anyway, back to the reason we came..." Jamie started, looking awkward. "Erm yeah, we're so sorry about Jayah." Justin said, looking at Mum. "We'll do anything we can to help, we promise." Caleb added, smiling at Mum and Dad. "Where's Beth?" asked Jacob, looking around. "She's upstairs. Can you not hear the music?" Jacob nodded in realisation. "I'm gonna go check on her." said Jamie. Lizah looked upset, mentioning that she wanted to see her too. "She won't come down babe, we had to slip her breakfast through the crack of her door this morning." said Mum. "Come on Jay, we can go check on her together." We walked up the stairs, and knocked on Beth and Jayah's door. They decorated it together; it was completely covered in One Direction stickers and posters, but the main attraction was a picture of me, Tee, Joe, Jayah and Beth together right in the middle. Beth opened the door slightly, and asked who it was. "Its me and Jamie, Bethy. Open the door please." She opened the door enough for me and Jamie to squeeze through, and all we saw was pictures of her and Jayah sprawled all over the floor; Jayah and Beth arm in arm on the beach in 2002, all of the family in Jamaica, the picture centred on Jayah and Beth seeing as it was their 7th birthday, and a big printed canvas painting of Jayah and Beth hugging each other. Beth planted herself on to her double bed, eating a packet of Oreos. "Bethany, cheer up beautiful," Jamie said, getting hold of Beth's hands, "we're gonna find her as soon as possible." Beth kinda smiled, then went back to her grim state. "Come on, smile and come down. Lizah wants to see you." She finally agreed after a lot of persuading, and walked down the stairs hand-in-hand with me and Jamie.
    "Beth!" shouted Lizah, as she instructed Justin to wheel her over closer to Beth. "Come here gorgeous, its okay." Beth hugged Lizah sweetly, sending Lizah into tears. Justin joined in, then Jacob, then Jamie, and suddenly it became a massive hug with the girls crying their eyes out and the men comforting them. It was about time we had some time to let our true emotions out.
    Sorry about the depressing chapter...♥

  17. iShake iShake
    posted a quote
    May 16, 2012 11:54am UTC
    sparkingSECRETS;♥
    chapterTEN.
    So sorry that I haven't been writing recently.
    Oh yeah, the last chapter says 'Chapter Eight' by mistake; I forgot to change it :3 Sorry, silly mistake by a silly girl♥
    "Mum, you can't be serious." I said, looking at her in disbelief. "Please, just say its a joke." She closed her eyes, and I watched the tears flow freely down her face. "Alyssia, why would I joke about something so serious?" I thought about everything that had happened yesterday; the necklace, the shopping, and that amazing night... Then I thought about the phonecall I made an hour before I called Jacob.
    One Day Earlier
    I dialled the number that was scribbled onto the note, clutching the piece of paper I copied it down on to. "What?" a gruff voice asked, clearly not happy about my call. "Ermm... hey?" I said, not sure about what to say. "What do you want?" he answered; he sounded as if he had just woken up. "Err... Jewel -" "Ah. Jewel." Jewel was the name of the person that sent me the next letter, he wrote at the bottom 'P.S. When you make the phonecall, mention Jewel told you to call.' There was an odd silence for about 20 seconds, and a new voice spoke. "So, what time do you want our person at your house?" I had no idea what he was talking about, but guessed it had something to do with the plan. "Erm.. What time is best for you?" He thought for a moment, then answered. "12.20." "She'll be at school though." "Well then.. 4pm." I nodded, then realised he couldn't actually see me through the phone. "Alright. Bye." I hung up right away, then tried erasing the call away from my mind. I couldn't believe I was doing this to Jayah, my own sister. I mean, she was only ten, and how would Beth feel? I plonked myself down on the bed, then texted Jamie for support.
    Jamie, why me?
    She called me right away. "Ally, what's wrong?" "Hey to you too." I said sarcastically. "I'm being serious Alyssia. What's up with the depressing text?" I had no idea what to say, so decided to pretent that I never even sent a text. "Jamie, what text?" I could tell she was rolling her bright blue eyes. "Ally, don't play games with me. Lizah was really grumpy when I went to see her today, and she's gotten me peed off." Typical Jamie. If any of her bestfriends were annoyed, so was she. "Jay, I'm serious. I never sent you a text. I need to go now. Peace." I hung up the phone right away, to be met with a text from Jamie saying
    Just the retarded Alyssia Jade I've always known;D xoxo
    That was the first time I'd laughed in a long time.
    Sorry about the short chapter guys, been really busy. Thanks, you're all amazing for reading;)♥

  18. iShake iShake
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    May 15, 2012 12:52pm UTC
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    chapterEIGHT.
    So sorry that I haven't been writing recently.
    We woke up the next morning to the sight of a bright blue tent above us. The whole of last night had been perfect, and Jacob was still holding on to me. "Good morning, beautiful." he said, looking at me. "Well hello there, handsome." I answered, smiling. "Wow, last night... Well it couldn't have been more amazing.." I said, then continued, "First the necklace, then the shopping, then the dinner and then this... I'm impressed babe." He laughed, then squeezed me and got up to put his clothes back on. "Stoooop, I like ogling your stomach." I said, watching him as he changed. I got up as well and grabbed the Hollister shirt and New Look shorts that were layed on the floor, along with my underwear. I put them on, then got out of the tent and let the breeze touch me. "Its gorgeous outside today Jacob, come!" He came out of the tent, wearing a baggy pair of jeans and a Ralph Lauren top. "Not as gorgeous as you, Ally." he said, as he came nearer to me. "Oh, shut up you." I remarked, utterly embarrased. "Well, I have to tell the truth..." He grabbed my hand and walked me over to the lake, where he sat me down. We put our feet into the water, and I leaned my head against his perfectly shaped shoulders. Suddenly, I got a phone call...
    "Alyssia, you have to come home NOW." It was the urgent tone of my Mum when she was either panicking or really annoyed. I wasn't sure what it was this time. "Whoa Mum, no hello's or anything? That's harsh." I joked. "No Alyssia, I'm being serious. You have to come home right this second." She hung up then, and left me on the phone to a dialling tone. "What's wrong, your mum sounded really freaked out?" I told him what she said, and he answered "Alright, come on. She didn't sound like she was messing around." We walked back to the tent and packed everything up, and folded the tent itself up and walked up the slanted hill to the car. He started it up, and we were driving right away. After a few minutes, we were back at my house; Mum was standing in front of the door, looking anxious. I ran to her, and she grabbed me and enveloped me in a hug. "Alyssia, I can't believe it.." Tears streamed down her face as she looked at me, and she whipped her head around so as not to upset me. "You won't believe it either.." she continued, and burst into a full blown crying session. I put both my arms around her, and kept her that way for at least 5 minutes. "Mum, what happened?" She remained silent. "Mum? Tell me!" She looked at me, tears stinging her crystal blue eyes, and said: "Jayah's gone missing."
    Sorry about the short chapter guys, been really busy. Thanks, you're all amazing for reading;)♥

  19. iShake iShake
    posted a quote
    May 8, 2012 1:28pm UTC
    sparkingSECRETS;♥
    chapterEIGHT.
    So sorry that I haven't been writing recently.
    Oh, and guys, I'm sorry I got the names mixed up. Jacob is meant to be the name of Alyssia's boyfriend, not Callum, so don't get confused:) I made that mistake in the last chapter as well, so yeah♥
    I hadn't been alone with Jacob for a really long time recently, so I decided to ring him and ask if he wanted to meet up. I dialled his number, and he answered right away. "Hey Ally!" he said gleefully. "Haaii Jacob," I started, and he suddenly said "Meet me at my house, I have a surprise for you." and hung up.
    The walk to Jacob's house wasn't long, only about 10 minutes. He stood at the door, smiling. "Alyssia Jade, when was the last time we had some time alone together?" I laughed, and answered "That's exactly why I called you!" He led me into his house, and we went up the stairs to the bedroom. "Close your eyes." he whispered, and I heard him rummaging through his drawers. "Can I open my eyes now?" I asked, curious. "No, not yet!" he said, a smile in his voice. He closed the drawers, then shuffled over to me. "Okay, open your eyes now beautiful." I opened my eyes, and turned around to face Jacob. In his hands, he held a beautiful, golden necklace. The chain was really thing, and a silver, diamonte pendant hung at the end. I gaped at the amazing piece of jewellery that Jacob held, not knowing how to react. "Its - I - I - OH MY GOD!" I screamed. "Jacob, its.. Beautiful!" He smiled, pleased with himself. "I'm so glad you like it," he said, looking into my eyes, "it took me ages trying to pursuade my mum to finally give it to me." I stared into his emerald green eyes, and because the window was open his brown hair swayed in the wind. "Jacob, I'm completely speechless." He tied the necklace around my neck, and stepped back to see how it looked. "Its perfect." I ran over to Jacob and hugged him. "Jacob, I just don't know what to say. You're just incredible." I leaned closer to him, and kissed him.
    Jacob decided to treat me even more during the day, by taking me on a mad shopping spree and taking me to a fancy dinner by the end of the day. He was spoiling me so much; it was just pure Jacob. People stared at us and our endless amount of shopping bags, as me and Jacob walked from shop to shop hand-in-hand. "People keep staring at us, its really weird." I whispered to him in the changing rooms, and he answered with something that made my heart melt. "They're not staring at us, they're staring at you and your impossible beauty." He stroked my long, cherry red hair, and smiled. "Come on, try this top on." I stared at him. "Jacob, you have spoiled me enough as it is, I have to buy something for you as well don't I!" "No you don't, because I'm in a generous mood today. Now try the top on okay?" he said sweetly. After we'd finished shopping (£200 spent completely on me. I protested, he didn't listen), he took me to Seven Heavens, the fanciest restaurant in the whole of our area. "Jacob, this day really couldn't have been more perfect.", I said after finishing our dinner. "What would make it more perfect?" I thought, and finally answered "Honestly, nothing." He looked at me, waited for the waiter, payed for our dinner then grabbed my hand. "Well, its about to be."
    He quickly went home and dropped off all of the bags, and peeked into them all. He kept two of the bags, which contained swimming costumes. "Mum, I'm taking the car for 'the moment." he called down the stairs. His mum answered clearly "Okay Jakey, have fun! See you later Alyssia." Jacob held my hand delicatly on the way to the car, and drove for about 20 minutes. When we stopped, we were parked on top of a massive hill. "Jacob, where are we?" I asked, confused. "You'll see. Come on!" He ran down the hill, and I followed him. He held another bag that he took out of the boot of the car, and when we got to the bottom of the hill a great surprise met me; a beautiful, crystal blue lake waved in front of me, and the moon shone in its reflection. Jacob grinned, the smile completely overtaking his face. "Jacob, the things you do for me.." I whispered. He got all three of the bags, and emptied them out. The unknown bag contained a towel and a basket, and the basket had a few sandwiches in it. Jacob had also packed a picnic blanket, a proper blanket and a tent, and layed it out on the grass. He help up the towel, and ushered me over. "Come on, get changed." I smiled, and grabbed the bag with my swimsuit in it. I got changed quickly, then held the towel so that he could get changed. He picked me up, gave me a kiss on the cheek, then threw me into the water. "Jacob!" I protested before he threw me in, but he did it anyway. Then he jumped in as well, and we swam around together for a bit. The water was just the perfect temperature, and we stayed in the water for ages. "Wow, you really outdid yourself today Jake." I said at the edge of the lake, watching him swim around. "Did I? I thought it was pretty average." he said, grinning. "Oh shut up and come over here!" He swam over quickly, and asked me if I wanted to come out of the water. I nodded, and he grabbed me by the legs and layed me on to the picnic blanket. "Come here, I'll dry you off." He wrapped the towel around my body gently, and after drying me he dryed himself. "Today has been absolutly perfect," I said to him, completely forgetting what day it was, "and you really did make it even better then I thought it would be." I said this as he put up the tent around me, and layed the blanket over me. He placed our clothes at the end of the tent, and out of the bag where his swimming clothes were sat two pairs of pyjamas. "Here, I'll help you change..." Jacob asked wearily. I smiled, and let him undress me. In the end, we stayed that way, and layed in the blankets hugging and kissing each other.

  20. iShake iShake
    posted a quote
    March 27, 2012 1:06pm UTC
    sparkingSECRETS;♥
    chapterSEVEN.
    So sorry that I haven't been writing recently.
    Oh, and guys, I'm sorry I got the names mixed up. Jacob is meant to be the name of Alyssia's boyfriend, not Callum, so don't get confused:) I made that mistake in the last chapter as well, so yeah♥
    It was Wednesday morning; the day that the second letter would come through the post. A blue envelope came through the golden slot as soon as I got downstairs, and I picked it up, shaking. What would he ask me to do this time? Beth and Jayah sat downstairs, booming out One Direction on their phones. "For God's sake, can you not put that down?" I moaned, but they obviously didn't listen. Mum came down the stairs, dragging Tee down with her. She was visiting for the week, and she looked pretty peed off. "You are going to kill me one day Tiana," she told her, "why did you have to do this at only 20?" Tee looked really happy with herself, and shouted from the bottom of the stairs.
    "GUESS WHAT MY BABIES?" She was pretty obviously in a good mood, whereas Mum was the complete opposite when she must have heard her news. Joe rushed down the stairs carrying a fat bag, and said "What's so important that it woke me up?" Tee walked into the kitchen, eyed up my envelope, ignored it and continued. "Right, I hope you lot are more chuffed then darling Mummy over here," - she shot a quick look over her shoulder at Mum, who was giving her a dirty look, - "buuuuuuut..... I'M PREGNANT!" A smile plastered her face, while Jayah and Beth jumped onto Tee and bombarded her with questions. "How many months?" quizzed Jayah. "Three, so you have a six month wait." Tiana answered, and stayed there while she listened to, and ignored, Joe and me screaming at her how crazy she was. Then the blue envelope caught my eye again, and I rushed up the stairs.
    I read the letter, and stared in horror. "No, no, no, no...." I whispered to myself. He couldn't make me do this. First Lizah, the girl I've known all of my life, and then my sister Jayah? That was going far. Telling me to do something to Jayah is going ver the line; she might be annoying but you can't make me do anything to her, let alone what the letter was asking me. I forced myself down the stairs, making sure not to let the tears spill. Jayah was preparing to leave for school with Beth, getting her bag ready and giving Mum a quick kiss on the cheek. "Mum, why hasn't Alyssia left for school yet?" I decided not to say anything, and went to ask Mum if I could stay off school for the day. "Why hunny?" "Well, its been a week since the accident, and everything is still pretty raw.. Its just that this is the day that Lizah got hurt." Mum understood, and said that I could stay home. I smiled, showing my appreciation, and clambered back up the stairs. The letter lay on my bed, screaming "Hey, lets hurt Jayah next!" A tear came flowing down my cheek, and I decided that I couldn't hold it in for any longer. I let the tears keep coming, and then grabbed the paper and ripped it up. I took the savaged pieces of purple over to the window, opened it, and watched it fly out into the world.

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