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The Wheels of My Life
Chapter 1

  I overlook, city lights illuminating the midnight sky with brightness and enchantment. People wading through the filled streets resembles a school of fish swimming deep along the coral reefs. They hurry along not to get eaten by a shark or in this case hurt by others. They’re colors ever in which way on the sidewalks.
 I glance upward toward the midnight sky filled with the clocks. I can’t help but think that somewhere up there my clock is ticking away. My wheels with the others keeping all mankind alive. It seems weird to think that any moment my clock can stop or a plane can destroy millions at once erasing all human. But aircraft hasn’t been flown since Dr. Ray Jeversen discovered our lives depend on those.
   A car pulls up behind me, and I turn to be greeted by Amy, my future wife-to-be. Her smile stretches wide, and her raspberry smelling hair dyed chocolate sits on her shoulders gently barely moving as she turns. I remember when I first met her at the local bar on 54th street. Oh, was it love at first sight. Her hair then was dyed an auburn, and her shampoo was tropical escape. Her eyes never change the dark, mystical bluish green. 


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The Wheels of My Life Chapter 1 I overlook, city lights illuminating

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shiralala · 1 decade ago
I think I would read it. It's intriguing, and very nice use of descriptive language. One of my friends has written a few stories, but then loses her notebook or interest. Is this set in the future? Is the main character a boy or a girl?
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byewitty* · 1 decade ago
It's set in the future and the main character is a guy.
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shiralala · 1 decade ago
Ummmmmmm, interesting....
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byewitty* · 1 decade ago
Would you read it?I probably should have gave an introduction before hand, but whatever.
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