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First Date
(My touch narrative for my creative writing class...)
 
            Thump, thump, thump.  His cute smile popped through my window.  My stomach turned.  I was hesitant.  He complimented me and pulled me into a friendly hug.  Maybe he was different.
            I remember the time hands forced open my door, a voice rose with anger.  Clenched fists pulled at my hair.  Make-up ran down my face. 
            He smiled and opened my door.  He was nervous.  It was his first night out with the mysterious girl with a broken arm and too many bruises to count.
            His hands were gentle and soft.  They fit perfectly with mine.  I was nervous too, but I had learned very well to hide it.
            The sunset and the temperature dropped.  Goosebumps covered my body.  His hands carefully rubbed my arms.  It sent a shivering chill up my spine.  He wasn’t going to hurt me.
            He walked me to my front door and brushed the hair from my face.  His hands were smooth and gentle.  He smiled down at me.  He ran his finger over an ugly bruise I was obviously trying to hide.  He slowly kissed it lightly and said, “Everything is going to be alright.”
            It was the first time I felt safe, but it wouldn’t last for long. 
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First Date (My touch narrative for my creative writing class...)

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