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Too Good to be True
Chapter 1
Maxx's P.O.V

"Hey Maxx! Come over here for a second." My boyfriend Ryan called me. I smiled and walked over reluctantly.
"Hey, my parents are out of town tonight, and I'm having a party. You should be there."
"Maybe I will." I teased.
"Good. And wear something nice okay?"
"Alright." I agreed as he pulled me in for a kiss. 
"See you later babe." I smiled and walked away. My friend Jared came up to me,
"What was that all about?"
"Nothing. Ryan's having a party tonight, and he wants me to go."
"Maxx, don't go. All he's trying to do is get in your pants. Thats all he ever wants to do with girls."
I rolled my eyes,"Listen Jared, it's fine. I'll be okay."
"I'm just looking out for you."
"Well, you don't need to. I don't need a babysitter, I'm old enough to know better." I scoffed and walked away.
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There was only about an hour left before the party. I took a quick shower and got dressed. I chose a short black dress with cute cheetah print flats. I straigtened my hair completely straight and put a bow in. I looked in the mirror before I left and actually liked what I saw. I smiled at my reflection and walked out the door.
I arrived at the party maybe 15 minutes late. I had to park a pretty good distance away from the house because it was so packed. I walked up to the door and rang the doorbell. Ryan answered the door almost instantly. 
"Hey, I didn't think you were coming." I smiled and he grabbed my waist and kissed my lips. I could smell the alcohol on his breath. He led me inside, his hand never leaving my hip. 
"Hey, I'll be right back, I'm gonna go get us some drinks." He smiled and walked off. From across the room I noticed Stefanie Vaughn just glaring at me. I remember her and Ryan used to have a thing, but they are over, and have been for a while, why did she still hate me? Ryan came back with two plastic cups in hand, "Hey, can we go somewhere, I don't know.. private?"
"I don't know Ryan, I kinda like it right here."
"Please babe? I just wanna be with you. Alone." I nodded and he took my hand leading me upstairs to his room. He close the door behind him and started kissing me. It started out gentle but then he kinda started getting rough. He pushed me on his bed, laying on top of me trying to pull off my dress. 
"Ryan, please stop."
"No, babe. C'mon, It'll be okay. I promise."
"Ryan I said Stop!" I was yelling now but he just ignored me and continued to bit my neck. Finally I pushed him off of me and got off his bed.
"What's wrong? I thought you loved me?" He yelled.
"I do Ryan. But I'm not going to be just another girl you can add to your bang list." I was tearing up now.
"Fine. I was almost done with you anyway. You're a pathetic, worthless sl/ut." He said with no emotion on his face. I started crying and ran out of that house. I dialed Jared's number on my cell.
"Hello?" He was sleeping. Dammit.
"Jared?Hey. Can I stay at your place tonight? Please." I was having a breakdown.
"Yeah, Maxx... Whats wrong? What happened?"
"Nothing. Well, something. I'll tell you when I get there okay?"
"Alright.Bye Maxx"
"Goodbye Jared."

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Maxx and Jared: http://www.polyvore.com/maxx_jared/set?id=61066240
Ryan and Stefanie:http://www.polyvore.com/ryan_stefanie/set?id=61066496#stream_box
Maxx's outfit: http://www.polyvore.com/ryan_stefanie/set?id=61066496#stream_box
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