After they left, Zayn, Niall, Irene,
and I went to the bar and drinked a couple more so now we were all
kinda drunk. Louis was somewhere trying to hook up with someone. A
fast upbeat song came on so we went on the dancefloor and danced
like idiots because we were kinda drunk. When you’re drunk
you do stupid things so I was all up under Zayn dancing sexy and
Zayn had his hands on my waist moving along with me. Irene and
Niall were dancing at first but the next thing I knew, they were in
a corner making out. I got to say, I was dancing like I was a
stripper. I could tell that Zayn was drunk because the way he kept
touching me and all. Zayn ran his hand up my leg while we are both
dancing. I turned around to face him and he pulled my body up
against his. I got butterflies really hard and I felt it even
though I was kinda drunk. I quickly looked up at him and he looked
back at me. He then kissed me. I kissed back not caring about
anything anymore. I wrapped my arms around his neck and he put his
hands on my waist wrapped his arms around it. That soon led to
hardcore kissing. He saw a table nearby and sat me on it. I layed
down and he climbed over top of me, leaned down and started to kiss
me again. He suddenly stopped and my eyes opened. We stared at each
other and I got butterflies really hard making me get nervous. A
tear formed in my eye and he knew what was wrong. I whispered to
him; “make it stop” and my tear fell down my face and
Zayn kissed me to make my pain go away. After we let go, I nodded
my head, letting him know that I was okay. We got up and he
whispering in my ear; “You look sexy and smell good tonight.
I can’t resist your body.” He walked away and I stood
there thinking is he saying this cause he’s drunk or was he
telling the truth. Just then Harry and Liam walked back in. I ran
up to Harry and hugged him. He let go and kissed me. I looked with
the corner of my eye and I see Zayn and Liam looking jealous. After
that, Irene and Niall showed up. We then looked for Louis which
took forever. After a while we found him and we left the club and
walked home. Harry and I walked hand in hand. Irene and Niall were
doing the same. Things soon were getting back to normal. I’m
now thinking to myself; why were Zayn and Liam jealous when I
kissed Harry. I started to wonder if Zayn and Liam liked me
… *sorry if
i haven't posted this in a while. i've been busy. i dont
really think i'm a good writer like a lot of people whos 1D
fanfics i'm reading on here. read, comment, fav. faeedback
maybe?! love you guys!*
smallvictoria1
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1 decade ago
I think this could be a GREAT 1D frantic, you should just try adding a little more personalities in the characters, it's just bit rushed! Still love the sory though! 0reply
smallvictoria1 · 1 decade ago
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I think this could be a GREAT 1D frantic, you should just try adding a little more personalities in the characters, it's just bit rushed! Still love the sory though!