The lake
CHAPTER 1
As I looked across the lake
all I saw was darkness, and I think to myself how my parents can
do this to me? What did I do that made them think lets drop Julia
off with her creepy aunt and psycho cousins for the summer, My
aunt Jess and my cousins were not the typical family they liked
to be different and when I say different I mean DIFFERENT! They
are all in to believing the lake they live on is haunted by this
creature of the deep, but I don’t believe any of that
As
I walk into my aunt’s house I got a weird vibe like
something is watching me. I had I feeling something was going on
so I walk into the dining room and my Aunt and my cousins were
all sitting at the table crying. My aunt runs to me and gives me
a big hug “What’s wrong?” I ask “Lilly
went out swimming and never came back out” said my aunt.
Lilly was my favorite cousin the only normal one now how am I
supposed to make it through the summer without her. I hug my aunt
and start balling my eyes out, “WE MUST FINDE HER I
SHOUTED, IM NOT GOING TO LET HER DIE OUT THERE” I rush out
the door but my aunt stops me “we have looked for hours and
nobody has found her” my aunt cried. “BUT WE MUST
HAVE HOPE” I shouted and ran off to find a boat
3 weeks past but nobody found her, until one day as I was
paddling across the lake and through the fog I saw something
banging across the rocks. I paddled as fast as I could to get
over to the mysterious object. And with my own to eyes I saw my
cousin, dead as a rock. I picked her up and started screaming,
she had bite marks and scrapes across her thin cold body, I was
so set out on figuring out what did this to her that I
didn’t relies that the boat was banging against the rocks
until it was too late and the boat flipped. I grabbed the rocks
and jumped back into the boat. But then it happened, I got that
vibe something was watching me, so I looked around and out of the
corner of my eye I saw this creature, but when it looked at me it
wasn’t the look of anger it was look of fright, I think the
thing was actually scared of me. I turned around it get a better
look at it but It was gone. I paddled back to the house and
carried my cousin inside; I laid her on the floor and ran to get
my Aunt. Everyone came running and screaming; my aunt hugged me
and called 911, I told the cops about everything I saw but they
didn’t believe me. The funeral was held 4 days ladder at
satton church. Everyone was overcome with grief. But for
some reason I had the feeling again, the feeling that some on was
watching me, I looked around the room and there it was, sitting
outside the window, was the creature staring right at
me.
cookielover2000 · 1 decade ago
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this is the first book i have ever started to wright so please be nice!