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*Chapter Fifteen*

“Josh, this is amazing!” I exclaimed, tears of joy pouring from our eyes. “I can’t believe this! I thought I’d be blind forever,” he admitted. Josh lifted himself from the hospital bed where we were sitting and stood up onto the floor. He grabbed my hands, gently pulling me off of the bed, then lifted me and twirled me around, laughing. The doctor must’ve heard our sudden joyful outbursts, because momentarily, the doctor rushed into our room to find out what was happening. The both of us turned to the door where Dr. Finch stood. “Doctor, I don’t know how, but I can see again!” The doctor looked into Josh’s eyes with astonishment. “You’ve regained your vision? I…I can’t believe this. This is wonderful!” The doctor stated, more than satisfied. “Your parents have been sitting in the waiting room for a few minutes; I was coming up here to check if you were ready to see them yet.” Without hesitation, Josh said, “Of course, I can’t wait to finally see them.”
 
About two minutes later, Dr. Finch returned with both of Josh’s parents, who greeted him with big hugs and happy smiles. I stepped out of the room, deciding to give Josh and his parents some alone time to catch up. For the next hour, I sat in the hospital’s food court, drinking hot chocolate and eating a glazed donut, browsing through the pictures on my phone. I hadn’t noticed before that almost all of the pictures on it were of Josh and I, making memories no matter where we went. My favorite picture was of Josh pushing me on the swing at Firestone Park. Almost every day after school this past year, Josh and I would meet up at the park and just hangout and talk. Whether it was a sunny summer day and a rainy morning, you could always find us there. I glanced at the picture once more and smiled before tucking my phone back into my pocket. Finishing up the few last sips of my hot chocolate, I rose from my seat at one of the small square tables and walked over to the trash bin to throw away my coffee cup. What to do now, I wondered. I should probably start heading back to Josh’s room. Before stepping onto the elevator, I caught a glimpse of a very familiar face down the hallway, but thought nothing of it. I pressed the button in the elevator with the number 3 on it, and the elevator swiftly transported me to his floor.
 
When I walked into the room, I was relieved to see that Josh’s parents were no longer in there, and it was only the two of us. “Good, you’re back,” he smiled. “Remember the other night I told you there was something I needed to tell you, but I wanted to see your face when I did?” He asked. My memory flashed back to the other nights conversation, and I nodded my head yes, while a smile stretched across my face. Josh invited me to sit back down next to him on the bed, so I did so. “Brielle,” he started, looking into my eyes with his own. “You’ve always been there fir me. I mean, we’ve been best friends since the beginning. Your eyes sparkle brighter than all of Times Square. And whenever I see you, I just-”
 
He stopped in the middle of his sentence, interrupted by the sound of a click; a door opening. As our heads turned simultaneously towards the doorway, I froze completely. Now standing in the room with us, was the person I thought I’d seen earlier down the one of the halls. A person I thought we’d gotten rid of.
 
That person, was Jennifer Wilson.

 

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Dun dun dunnn! lol, hi guys. Sorry it took a little longer to write tonight, im sick:(  But I Hope you guys like this chapter:) I know, cliffhanger, lol but don't worry, next chapter will be up before you know it. 

I'm so glad more people are starting to read my story:) Your support means the world:')

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