Love? Please..

The story of how I met and fell incredibly, head of heels in love with Alison Miller

Blurb

It was pouring the day Alison Miller walked into our science room at Oakley Beach High. She was accompanied by our school principal, Mr Clarke.
"Class-" he began, "This is Ashley Miller, a new student who has recently moved here from England." 

Her long brown hair was loose down her back, and her hazel eyes seemed full of mystery but glistened as she looked up. Mr Clarke pointed over the the spare seat next to me "Take a seat next to Jake" he said. 

As she passed through the room she showed no emotion the class were staring and whispering, she sat next to me silently and remained quiet for the rest of the lesson. The bell went for lunch, Ms Shelton, our teacher asked me to show her around, I agreed at once. As we were walking out of the science room, into the lonely cooridoor, it was then I saw the cuts on her wrist.

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What do you think? It's my first story, so feedback welcome.