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Reposting My Story I Started Ages Ago

OFF THE RAILS


 

CHAPTER ONE

"I HATE YOU MUM!! Don't you ever speak to me again!" I screamed as i stomped up the stairs in anger. I slammed my bedroom door, dived onto the bed and broke down. It isn't my fault i lost the £70 for my school trip. it was stolen! There's no need to ground me! I'm 16!! I thought furiously to myself  "AHHHH!" i screamed in anger. I needed out this house, grounded or not.  I stormed out my room, and downstairs. I was just opening the door when.."Where do you think you're going young lady?" Of course it was my mum. "Out" I said simply, and slammed the door shut behind me. I didn't know where i was going to go, i just needed out of the house.  Things had got to breaking point in my house, I knew I couldn't stay there right now. I needed some space, possible for a few weeks.

After walking for about ten minutes, i reached the local childrens play park, which contained a climbing frame, battered old swings, a roundabout and a slide. It was unusually deserted. Well, i suppose it is raining. Now being 16 years old, i opted for the swings. As i sat on them, swinging gently, i closed my eyes, and began to think over the days  events.

"Excuse me?" A husky voice said about 15 minutes later. I jumped in surprise and turned round. There was a boy behind me. "Sorry, didn't mean to startle you, i was just wondering, do you need some company?" He said. I realized then that yes, i was lonely. "Um yeah sure, feel free" I answered, gesturing at the nearby swing. "Thanks" he replied. "I could do with some company too." We sat in silence for about half an hour, and then he suddenly asked me "So, what did you do to be here on your own?" "My mum." I said back. "I lost £70 pounds for my school trip and she got really annoyed at me, so i stormed out my house, what about you?" "Em, i got drunk at a party last night and i came home at 6 in the morning. My dad wasn't to pleased. He said he never wants to see me again." He answered dully. "Oh" i exclaimed. "That is way worse than mines!" "Its lucky i have my own place now" he said. "Oh really?"i responded. "That's cool, what age are you?" "I'm 18" He retorted "I'm 16" I replied. "No chance with you then" I laughed. "kidding" "Well I think you're gorgeous" He exclaimed. Wait, what? I thought to myself. I'm anything but gorgeous, i'm average height, with brown wavy hair and I wasn't exactly gifted in the top area. Not exactly what any guy would go for, I mean come on! "No i'm not" i said firmly. "I think you are" He responded. "What is your name?" "Madeline" I said. "But most people call me Maddie." "A beautiful name" he replied looking at me in the eyes. "Mines is Tom".

Ten minutes later, the rain started to really pour down. "Here, lets go somewhere sheltered" Tom said, taking my hand and running to find somewhere undercover. Suddenly, he stopped in mid run, and took both my hands. He looked me in the eyes. He really did have gorgeous hazelnut eyes, and wavy brown hair that flopped perfectly over his face. His white t-shirt was see through and i could see his wonderful body under it. He was gorgeous. "You have amazing eyes. And lips, and body, in fact, your just amazing." He said, looking me up and down. I was soaked by now, but i didn't care. Before i knew it, our lips were touching, and we were kissing in the rain, entwined with each other.


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