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Happy never after...

An original story written by Autumn.

Post #4
(Be sure to read the parts before this part! )



The world slowly fades away around me, and I zone back in to people screaming, yelling, spitting harsh words at me. "Wait, what?" I say, trying to gather my senses. "I'M TIRED OF EXPLAINING IT, I'M NOT REPEATING MYSELF!" she grabs me harshly by the arm and drags me down the hallway. I scream loudly, little girls and boys come into the hallway clutching their stuffed animals tightly dressed in cheap nightgowns and think pajamas, fear trembling in their eyes. "Everyone, go back to bed!" she barks. They all rush into their rooms, leaving the doors open. Beds creak, cries fill the air, my head pounds against what I'm guessing was the wall. I shut my eyes and wince in pain, the world fading into black. She slams open the hallway door and into another wallway we go. I fall to the ground, my head banging against the wall again. I try to grab onto something but the only thing there are the thin walls and concrete floor. I pick myself up again, the women not slowing down. She opens a small door, throws me in, locks it, and with that she's gone. I pound against it for pointless hours. I attempt to spread out only to realize the room wasn't big enough. I attempt to stand up only for a shelf to bang my head. Tears stream down my face as I attempt to breathe, but can't catch enough air to do so. I rest my head against the wall, and lay there long enough to fall asleep.



Author's note;
I'm actually quite proud of this one ;D  I promise this will be a MUCH better story once I get into it. I have some pretty good ideas planned :3  Super excited! You know the deal, if you're read fave/comment to let me know? ;))  Also fave me to be sure you can read the rest if you like it! Comment what you think of it so far? Comment what you think should happen in the future? I'm open for suggestions and will give you credit if I use yours! ;D  
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