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Teenage Love
Chapter 5
(please read note at bottom)

Chad waved goodbye as he pulled out of the Ray's muddy driveway. It was pouring rain which put me in an even worse mood than I was already in. Michael took my hand and led me into the house.
Mr. Ray and even Matt came and greeted me with a warm hug, trying to comfort me, but that just put me into a quiet fit of sobs.
"Can you make it to the shower?" Michael asked
"Yeah," I said
He kissed my forehead and let me go. I took a long, hot shower and let everything go, I thought of my parents death & my brother, and pretty much the rest of my family's death which occured a few years ago when a their plan to California crashed.
When I got out I put on a pair of jean shorts and a cute blue shirt that read Hollister in orange.
When I got out of the bathroom everyone started to talk about the most random things ever, I'm sure it was to try to make me feel normal. I went and took a seat on Michael's lap.
"I'm guessing you probably want to see your sister don't you?" Mr. Ray questioned
I nodded
"Well you can go here, or she can come here. It'd be nice to get to know her & her boyfriend."
I agreed and called her & Darius, giving them directions to the house.
 
 

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