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ONE BY ONE, CH. 2
*1 year, 1 day ago*
Carliee's Point of View


*15 minutes later*
"Hey Cars." Someone called from behind me.
"Hi Emily." I said turning around, knowing it was my best friend from her happy voice.
"Guess what?!" She was practically jumping up and down, her poker straight moving right and left her head.
"You finally got a car?" I joked, pointedly turning around myself as if searching for a new car.
"No silly! I'm pregnant!"
"That's ni-" The words suddenly sank in.
I was so shocked frozen in place. I couldn't utter a word, it was like my lips forgot how to move. How could my innocent, funny and energetics best friend have a baby growing inside her!?
"W-what?" I finally made out with a shaky breath.
"Yup! Aren't you excited for me?" She was beaming, I would have thought she'd be crying, scared to have to take such a big responibilty upon herself. Wasn't she terrified?
I would be.
"Who?"
"Who what?"
"The father.." I asked, still not able to move.
"Uh.. That..-" She got cut off because someone hugged me from behind. 
"Hey baby" Elliot whispered, his breath tickling my neck. I knew it was him.
"H-hi," I blushed.
"did you here the news?" I asked suddenly wondering if Andy, Carly's boyfriend, told him about it. They were really close.
"Which news?" He asked looking adorabley confused.
"Carly is pregnant!" I said a bit too loudly.
I was kind of shocked, why hadn't Carly said anything yet? I glanced at her to see her eyes wide and all of her happiness faded.
"What's wr-" Again, I got cut of my Elliot.
"Wait.. what?!" A turned around to look at his too pale face.
What's going on?
Calry cleared her throat obviously uncomfortabe.
Elliot quikly kissed my check. "I'll see you later." he mumbled and left.
"Well, that was weird.."
"Uh.. I've gotta go too. Andy's waiting for me..." she said quikly and she also walked away quikly.
Were they hiding something from me?

 


Author's Note
This chapter was a bit obvious, giving a hint about what's going to happen a day later.
I like it though.
Hehe, bye!
Cansu


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