This is my enlgish poem about a girl, i posted it on here so i can see what all of you thought.
this is what i'm going to hand to the teacher. I HOPE YOU GUYS LIEK IT (: I NEEED ALL THE FEED BACK!!!

Black was her emotions inside of her
Rainbow was the colour outside.
The dark clouds over whelmed her
The rainbow was not to be seen.

Blue was the colour of the sky she
looked at everyday.
white and blue was the colour of the
unfirom she wore to school.
black was the make-up she wore.

Black is what people saw in her.
red is what came out when se cut

-Emily campbell-