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Torn
Chpt. 21
Louis:
"Torie!" Louis ran to her. She was with Skye and Tasneem in the basement.  Torie turned around. Her eyes in sudden shock. She ran and hugged him. 
Louis began, "Babe, I'm so sorry. I was out of town, visiting my parents-" 
"I don't care where you were. I'm just glad you're fine." Torie said, gripping on Louis' torso. Louis kissed Torie's cheek.
"AAAAAAWWWWW!" Tasneem blurted out.
Louis chuckled. "I love you." 
"I love you too." Torie said. ♥


Niall/Harry:
Niall came running down to the basement. He saw Louis and Torie hugging. He stopped at the bottom of the staircase and yelled, "AWWWWWWWW!"
"You two are so alike!!" Skye said, running up the stairs, punching Niall as she passed him.
Louis and Torie pulled out of the hug, Louis kept his arms around her waist though. 
"Tasneem! Let's go out to eat." Niall said, gesturing for her to come.
"Okay!" Tasneem ran to Niall.
"Alyssa is coming too." Niall said, reaching for Tasneem's hand.
"That's great!" She said, laughing.
They drove to an Italian restaraunt.
"What.. Niall, it's really hard to get reservations at this place!" 
"Alyssa reserved us here. She's here with Harry." Niall said, opening the door for Tasneem. They both sat down with Harry and Alyssa at a table in the far right corner. ♥

Zayn:
 I don't have many ideas for Zayn, so he will be in the next chapter. Zayn is my story, so i'm not upsetting anyone.(:

Liam:
"Paynerrr....." Jill said, creeping into his room. "Liaaaammm!..."
She saw Liam fast asleep on his bed. There was a notebook on his night stand. She picked it up and saw that her name was sketched all over it. A smile grew on her face, spreading from one ear, to another.
Liam had his back against her. He turned around, and slowly opening his eyes.
"Jill?" He said in his sleepy voice. Jill loved his sleepy voice. "Oh no no no no no, you aren't suppose to see that!" Liam hopped out of bed and ran to her. Jill ran out of his room. He chased her. She giggled. HE LOVED IT WHEN GIRLS GIGGLED. ♥ (I think i've said that like 651515626599856 times.) XD

OMG READ THE BOTTOM IT'S IMPORTANT!





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FEEDBACK? IDEAS?

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I'm starting another story when i have 35-40 chapters. I'm going to be putting people who always faved, and commented in the new story. Who i know I'm putting in next FOR SURE:
Jill, Kat, Tasneem, Torie, and Alyssa. If i named you, please comment saying what guy you want tobe assosiated with. PLEASE, don't pick the same guy as this story. :)
I'm planning on not having more than 5 people in the next fanfic. IT'S GONNA BE AWESOME. :'D I'm excited! I already have things planned!! 
BTW, do you guys think i should start doing every chapter like this? That way, i have everyone in it.(;

COMMENT DOWN BELOW. ;D

Thank you & I love you!

xoxo - Skye ♥
 

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12 faves · 6 comments · May 21, 2012 6:01pm

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xsophx22 · 1 decade ago
Oh my gosh I love your stories sooo much!!!
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The_Drama_Girl · 1 decade ago
Can I be Louis' secret crush, or girlfriend? :)
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xoKatxo10 · 1 decade ago
I would love to be Harrys secret crush or girlfrien or Loius secret crush or girlfriend... Thank you for making me a part of this <3 Yayay I"m so excitedd xoxo (:
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WMYB · 1 decade ago
This is great! I CAN'T WAIT FOR YOUR NEXT ONE!!
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toriewashurr · 1 decade ago
I love ittttt, of course! And, YAYYYY! ANOTHER STORY. XD. Can I be with Niall or Harry? (: xx
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MsHoran · 1 decade ago
OMG. Yaay!!! i love youu. :'D & i would like to be with Zayn or Harry. :) xoxo ♥
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