Here's a song I wrote... Any
feedback? :/
Verse
1
The
deadly sound of silence
It runs
through the place
I wonder
where you've gone
Still
counting all the days.
My mind
knows you aren't here
But my
heart is still hoping
You'll come around back to
me.
Pre-Chorus
All
alone, dancing slowly
Never
have I felt so lonely
Chorus
Why did
you have to leave me so incomplete
I wish
you were here to hold me in your arms
Like you
did all these past years
I
can't even think of our last moment
together
But
however many days go by, I will still
remember
Everything.
Verse
2
Do I
ever run through your mind
Can you
think of all the great times
I will
wish on a wishing star
Until I
know where you are
No
matter how many teardrops fall
You will
never show up at my door
Pre-Chorus
Chorus
Bridge
Come
back, come back, come back (x4)
Chorus
Chorus
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singingismylife · 1 decade ago
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i love it