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 Jared rolled the suitcase out of our room. He shot me a  quick smile, and said to his mom, "Yes. We have  everything. I have to go now. Love yah mom." I blew a  kiss at him. "Oh, and Karla loves you too." 
I jogged out to the car, buckling in quickly as Jared  turned the key in the ignition. 
"Ready, love?"
"More than ready! I'm so excited, finally a cabin to ourselves!" 
Jared and I have been dating for over two years now,  and we had finally rented a small cabin by a lake for  a few nights. 
As the hours flew by in the car, Jared and I never got  tired of talking. His fingers gently held mine as we talked  about out furture. 
I finally started to get tired, and I rested my  head on his shoulder. 
"Hey! Don't fall asleep! We'll be there soon, and I don't  want to have to talk to myself."
"Ugh, but will you sing  to me to keep me awake?"
"Oh fine.."  He hummed to get the melody, and then finally his  beautiful voice sang through the car. My favorite song;  Drops of Jupiter, by Train. We turned onto a long road,  it almost look like it wasn't used in years. We saw the  lake to our right, right under a cliff. 
"Look! That's it!" He turned his head towards me, and his  loose brown curls bounced, his beautiful green eyes  starring into my blue ones. 
Suddenly the car bumped, Jared swerved and off the road, we  went flying into the ditch next to the cliff. Jared let go of the  stearing  wheel, wrapping his arms around me as the  car flipped down the hill; metal crunching and glass  breaking. 

I opened my eyes to find myself on a bed of leaves,  starring up at the pinkish blue sky. 
"JARED?! WHERE ARE YOU?!" There was no reply.  I got on my hands and knees, a sharp pain in my side.  Looking down, I saw blood on me everywhere.  And then I saw him. Jared, laying down, his eyes  slightly open. His clothes blood stained, and shards  of glass poking out of his now pale skin. 
"JARED!" 
"Shh baby, please don't cry." He said in a strained voice  full of pain. He reached up and stroked my arm, leaving a rail of blood from his fingers. I sucked in ragged breaths, sobbing. 
"Help will come soon..." But I knew I was lying, there  was no one around us. 
"You need to go get help, you're bleeding." 
"No, I can't leave you..." I took his face in my hands and  whiped away one of his tears. 
"Baby, you need to go get help. You're hurt." I shook my  head fiercly, 
"I'm not leaving you! Someone will help and find us -" 
"I have to go now." Jared whispered. My eyes widened as I realized what he meant. The tears came running faster, and I didn't bother to wipe them.
  "No Jared! YOU CAN'T LEAVE ME! I love you too  much. Please don't go..." Sweat glemed on his face,  tears streaming down both of our cheeks. His voice  was raspy, trying to hide the pain he was in.  "STAY WITH ME!" I screamed, as I ran my fingers  through his tangled curls. 
"I love you Karla. So much." His chest moved up and  down a few more times, and finally stopped. His grip  on my hand loosed, and I let his fingers slip out of mine.  I laid there, and let the pain take over me. For hours. 
Hours. 
And finally, looking at Jared, and said, "I'll see  you soon baby."  I kissed his cold lips, and stroked his  pale face one last time. Standing up, I took my shoes off, and walked  to the edge of the cliff.  "I'll see you soon baby." I whispered again, as I looked at  the water below me. The jagged rocks poked up  through the surface, though you could barley see, the  sky had turned dark.  I looked up at the shining stars as I let my body fall  towards the water.  "I'll see you soon."

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