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Best I ever had
sequel to: the game is over
chapter 35


I started the the engine of  my car, when it began to rain. It began to rain slowly.
It isn't loud. It's actually quiet. Little rain drops began to fall on my window.
I sighed watching them fall.
"I love the rain," I could still rememeber her saying.
It was one of her favourite days. She says, it's peaceful, yet I think of it, it is.
It makes you stop and listen, and look around.
I began to drive, drive fast, yet carefully.
I want to see her face. Will she be scared? I want to see what her reaction will be.
For the last 10 minutes I've been driving, I finally came to a stop.
I stopped in front of a house. The roof, the colour of the clouds.
The house seems to be made out of bricks. Brown ones.
I cut the engine and froze.
I felt my heart begint o beat faster than usual.
I feel blood rush through my vein.
I hesitate when I open the door. What if she's not here?
From what I know she's here, with Ausin.
My stomach then begins to spin. Is this even normal?
Then I begin to feel guilty.
Not guilty for coming here, but for leaving Hannah.
What will happen to her? Will she forgive me?
I began to walk towards the front doors.
The rain still pouring, but getting heavier everytime I take a step. It's even getting louder.
I looked at the house. It's not small, nor big, just perfectly perfect.
I stood in front of the door.
I sighed and rnag the door bell, not once but twice.
They're probably asleep, together maybe even.
I stared through the window, when the light flickered on.
I gulped. That  must be her.



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Best I ever had sequel to: the game is over chapter 35 ♡ I

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LuV4EvER00 · 1 decade ago
Okay. I absolutely LOVE this story! Ansd if i dont always fav it I am reading it...
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societyisprison · 1 decade ago
omg gjsbhgkdkfjs.
can you like, write another chapter, like now.
i want them to kiss in the rain like the notebook, ahhh gfdgskagh. SO GOOD c:
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