lovehopepeace19 · 1 decade ago
Sorry if you dont wanna hear this but i agree with rissa7373. Write in a more grammatical way. Not like dudee and that kind of stuff. But other than that i think that is has a good story to it :D It keeps me wanting to read. But i really like how you do different kind of views. I have always liked books like that :D But keep writing its good :D Cant wait for Chapter 3 :)
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purpler · 1 decade ago
Wow awesome!
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rissa7373 · 1 decade ago
you write the way someone would talk, books don't come out as good when you do that. And you're trying it in a guy's point of view which just adds on. Sorry if you didn't want an honest opinion. =P
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jbiebergirl30 · 1 decade ago
Pleasee continuee(:
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musicislife98 · 1 decade ago
You wrote that? Wow! Keep writing it, I want to know what happens!!! I loved it!
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kayleekrusader · 1 decade ago
CONTINUE YOUR STORY! I LOVE IT!<3
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trixie0504 · 1 decade ago
thanks!!
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ConfessionsOfABrownEyedGirl · 1 decade ago
i really like it (:
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SpiderWomen123 · 1 decade ago
i like it so far, keep going
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