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Chapter 17

"Did you mean it?" he repeated, a mix of emotions in his eyes.
Of course I didn't mean any of those insults I spat at him.
But, I couldn't bring myself forward to admit it.
Why was I so scared?
Because you're falling in love with him.
I couldn't trust anyone, especially a male.
All men reminded me of my father.
I was indelusional, and I feared that if I became too attached to Hunter, he would hurt me.
His toned body was pressed against mine, as his warm hands began to rub circles around my cheekbones gently.
My cheeks became warm, as his thumb touched my skin.
He brushed away a long strand of hair that covered my face, never removing his gaze from mine.
What was he doing?
"If you don't answer, I'm going to have to force it out of you." he warned.
His voice sounded so soothing and calm, but at the same time, so threatening.
My eyes widened, as he inched his head closer to mine, until our foreheads came to contact.
My heart began to pump loudly at the fact that our lips were practically an inch apart.
"Last chance." he whispered, his cool spearminted breath brushing on my face.
I held in my breath, as my eyelids fluttered down.
A second later, I felt Hunter's soft lips agaisnt mine.
He held my waist firmly, gently pushing me against the wall.
The kiss was slow and simple, yet so passionate.
A felt my lips curve into a small smile agaisnt his lips.
This was exactly how I pictured my first kiss to be.
We finally pulled away, as my cheeks turned red.
I dared myself to stare back at Hunter, whose face went pale.
The small smile I had on my face had dropped.
Why were his eyes so blank?
Why did he look so regretful.
I suddenly peeled his hands away from my waist, as I stared at him with confusion.
"I-I'm sorry." he hesitated, backing away from me. "That was a mistake."
The words stabbed me like knifes, as my eyes welled up.
I sucked in my breath, holding the tears back in.
A mistake?
How come my first kiss with him meant everything to me, but nothing to him?
Suddenly, he shook his head, his black hair falling in his eyes.
"I-I didn't mean it like that, though!" he defended.
I gulped, shutting my eyes tightly.
"I think you should go now." I whispered, voice trembling.
A frown replaced Hunter's perfect features.
Even that suited him well.
"Hayden, let me-"
My fists clenched with anger.
Why does everything good that comes to my life disappears?
"Just go!" I snapped, tears finally streaming down my cheeks.
Hunter closed his rosy lips, turning around.
I heard the front door opening and closing.
The sound of Hunter's car driving away was also audible.
Hunter's Point of View
My hands wrapped around the steering wheel with anger.
The music was blaring from my speakers, as my jaw clenched with frustration.
I drove to Joey's house, where he was hosting another infamous party.
It was time to forget all it all.

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hauntingly beautiful Chapter 17 "Did you mean it?"

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baileyreid · 1 decade ago
please write more!!! i have been waiting for days!!!!!!!
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Mariya_Peace · 1 decade ago
I been waiting for ages write morreeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thanks(:
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fluffyfan1 · 1 decade ago
please make another chapter!!! been waiting for DAYS!!! thanks:)
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hannah143 · 1 decade ago
More please!!
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CuteArt · 1 decade ago
i wanna read more!!
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missrose12 · 1 decade ago
PLEASEEE A NEW CHAPTER, been waiting all weekend !!!!! :O
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skittleslover24 · 1 decade ago
Hey wanna make a new chapter??? PLEASE~!!!!!!
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shuvosumonaaritra · 1 decade ago
HEY MORE!!! waiting for 3 days.....where is another chapter??
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savanna_baby · 1 decade ago
Im so hooked! More!!! :)


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ArishmaOwnsYa · 1 decade ago
more! more!
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LoveExists27 · 1 decade ago
Morreeee!!!(:
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lovedrunk73 · 1 decade ago

ahhh!!!!!!!!!!!!! oh gosh chicka you got me hooked on to this story :)
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natataya · 1 decade ago
im dying i want more

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shuvosumonaaritra · 1 decade ago
heyyy i am dying to have another chapter!! plssss give another soon!!
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IamBritishBoy · 1 decade ago
FASTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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reeseybabi · 1 decade ago
Please make them be together!!!! Im gona cry if they dont end up together.
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dakotashine · 1 decade ago
i love this! Hayden is really weird. she pushes away all people that care about her, and blame them for leaving. thats weird
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CaptainJackSparrow · 1 decade ago
MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE
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shuvosumonaaritra · 1 decade ago
MORE!!!
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carolcheer · 1 decade ago
more!!!!!! :O :D

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