Bump in the Night
Bump-bump. Bump-bump. Bump-bump. Heart beating fast. Breath ragged. Time pauses. Fists start flying, legs kicking. 1-2, 1-2. The fighting has a steady beat. The creature bared his teeth at me and hissed, his sour smelling spit flying into my eye. I pulled a splintery, wooden stick out of my back pocket and started jabbing at the creature. He lifted his arm to slap me, big mistake. I pulled back the stake, then thrust my arm forward. stabbing him in the chest, killing him.

Should I continue? Any comments?