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Three Little Devils
Sequel to Hell On Earth
Chapter 17

 

The world was still black. I couldn’t see anything, hear anything, I couldn’t even move. The world had disappeared right before my eyes just like I wanted it to.

 

All of the sudden I popped into a little purple room. There was nothing in the room, and the only thing that was there was a light coming through the window. That’s when it hit me; this is my purple bedroom. I stood in the center of it and just walked around in a circle. It was completely empty. Wasn’t it just filled with all my things before? 

 

That’s when the light shining through the room got stronger and brighter. I couldn’t help but go over to that window. I continued walking until I was about a foot away from the window.

 

As I was about to touch the glass on the window, I popped into a dark and scary room. The ceiling was painted a deep red color, almost like blood, and the walls were black. I stood there and just stared at the room. Like my bedroom, there was nothing in this room, not even a window.

 

All of the sudden Kyle appeared right in front of me. I started to scream and cry; I didn’t want him near me, especially after coming into my bedroom and trying to hurt Adian and Logan.

 

That’s when my legs just started moving. I took off running deeper into the room. Even though this room seemed only as big as the other, it was practically endless. I just kept running until my legs gave out from underneath me and I collapsed onto the ground.

 

I sat there crying in a ball, afraid Kyle would come back to hurt me. That’s when I felt a hand on my shoulder. I quickly looked up and saw Kyle standing there. I tried to move away as fast as I could, but he quickly got down beside me and just hugged me.

 

I was completely scared at first, but then I felt the warmth and love I felt when we were going out. I calmed down and just laid there, with my head on his chest, as he stroked my hair. This was the Kyle I knew; the sweet Kyle that would care for me, the Kyle I loved.

 

He started whispering in my ear. “Don’t worry Hannah. I’ll keep you safe as long as you want me to. Just please don’t leave us on Earth Hannah. Everyone’s going to miss you.”

 

I stared at him confused. I thought this was just a dream. He looked back down at me and saw the look on my face. “Yes Hannah, you almost entered heaven; some doctor’s saved you though. Just promise me you wont try that stunt again, and everything will get better.”

 

I nodded after he kissed my forehead. All of the sudden he disappeared and I saw the bright light again. Only this time, it wasn’t coming towards me, that was the only thing I saw. I decided that the light was too bright so I tried opening my eyes. It only became brighter. I still opened them as far as I could because they felt extremely heavy.

 

The exact moment I opened my eyes, I heard my mom scream. “She’s awake!”

 

 

*Author's Note: Yeahh ive been in a writing mood lately(: and this chapter might have been a little confusing since it was all in her head, but i hope you guys understand what i meant. i tried to make it simple but it didnt really come out that way:/ sorry about that, but i love anyone whos reading and i want feedback! I joined this magazine in school and i was thinking about handing in Hell On Earth and Three Little Devils as submissions! It would be really nice to have feedback though before i do(: thanks!<3

 

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savvy678 · 1 decade ago
this series is great! so interesting =)
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thisisthelife · 1 decade ago
You're stories are soo good! I absolutely love reading them and always get excited when there's a new chapter lol Definitely hand them in! :D
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