easyridinsmooth_ · 1 decade ago
these are pretty good so far ,, i have a suggestion , its great just the way it is, maybee in your next story you could explain some things alottle more, for example how brandon got her number ,, minor details to explain the story alittle better other than that don't worry about the speling,, and if you need an editor xp i'm totally here to do it if you want =)
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joey_luvs_bffs_4eva · 1 decade ago
Shut up seriously these are the best stories and she can spell ok so stop judging her and if u don't like the story then who cares. So find someone else to pick on. And leave my best friend alone......
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Boosyoozzy · 1 decade ago
Ew. stop making these you cant spell and there boring
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