BURIED : Chapter 1

Lissa's point of view: After I visited the graveyard with daddy, I noticed his limp getting worse as we walked to the park. "Dad, why dont you go ahead home and ill meet you there at supper time?" He caught his breath, nodded , and them reached out to signal a taxi. I watched him leave then walked the rest of the way to the park. I had my reasons for sending him away. I was concerned about his limp, but while reading the newspaper this morning id noticed an ad . It said : " Buried! Come down to the nearest graveyard ( we are set up in every single one!) and have the experience of being buried! We will put you in a high tech coffin for 6 hours or less if you wish. The coffin will have plenty of oxygen being pumped in at all times. We will be watching you with a camera at all times, so nothing goes wrong! So come on down to be buried!" It looked interesting. I wasnt scared to be in small spaces, in fact i rather enjoyed it. I felt safe in small spaces. I had decided then to try this "buried" thing and see what it was like. It will be so boring! I thought, arguing with myself. I still wanted to try it. I finnaly made my way across the park to the nearby graveyard. I refused to do this in the same place as my beloved mothers grave, bless her. She was always so wild, and thats what killed her. She was hiking and was bitten by a snake. By the time we got her to the doctors they were not even able to distinguish what kind of snake had bitten her. She looked horrible. That happened 3 years ago. I thought about all this as i was entering the graveyard gates, and a shiver ran through my body. What a perfect time to be thinking about death eh? when im going to be buried (for fun) alive. I handed the guy my cash, and looked down at the 6 foot deep hole that i was soon to be shoved into.

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