StoryReview
Take My Breath Away
Author: SMstories

What the story is about:
The story is about a girl named Charlotte and her ex, Asher. Asher was her boyfriend, and i understand, that he cheated on her at the party. Charlotte is Asher's sister's best friend so i suppose she moved in for a couple days at their house.

This story is some Drama around romance and could sometime give you advice.

My opinion:
For my opinion, i think this story is a good story but not good enough. You putted your own ideas, you also took the ideas of others to make a better story. But, the thing is, in the story, you keep skipping from idea to idea. Theirs some boring chapters but the story is starting to be boring. We all know the Asher's fighting to get back with Charlotte but, in each chapters, it keeps being the same. But, it's good that you putted his brother in it, but, were's her best friend. I'm pretty sure, is it was for real, her best friend would of already seen them in the back yard and would already seen Charlotte with the slutty dress, if that what you call it.

Rating: 6/10, it can be better.

 I think it's for girls and boys because, it can teach boys a lesson and girls also.

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