Breeze
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1 decade ago
Hey! I really like your writing style and how you wrote what Luke was thinking and everything. Do you want me to tell you the negatives? They're pretty minor though.
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surfergirl24
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1 decade ago
amazing!!!!! ur an amazing writer i actually use to write but i havent been inspired lately keep writing girl!
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ktb19
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1 decade ago
oh my god jamie. i love this. and wow, i like how you used alex's last name and my other friends last name in this lol<33333
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rasgirlx018
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1 decade ago
omfg i love it! write more soon!
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_today_tomorrow_tonight_forever_
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1 decade ago
wriite mooree.(-:
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brunettechick7
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1 decade ago
LOVE IT!
more, more!
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goodnight15
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1 decade ago
i looooove this<3233
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donteventhinkaboutit · 1 decade ago
I love this story! ur an amazing writer
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