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By xXxHotPantsxXx
This story is mysterious, thoughtfully-written, and very descriptive. 
It is about a shy, quiet, high-school girl named Isabel who meets a boy named Marcus, who seems to be perfect for her.
The author writes like a professional in the way she describes Isabel's feelings without overdoing it.
So far, she has posted the prologue, which is thrilling and leaves the reader wanting more. It makes the reader desperately want to know what happened to Isabel.
There is also the first and second chapters, which explain what happened before the event in the prologue. At the end of the second chapter, the reader is left at a cliff-hanger and will undoubtedly be wanting more.
Hopefully, the author (xXxHotPantsxXx) will add more to her story soon.
I definitely recommend that you check it out. It is different from most stories on Witty, and I can tell it's going to be great.

Rating: 4 out of 5 stars


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