"Untitled"
By xXxHotPantsxXx
This story is mysterious,
thoughtfully-written, and very descriptive.
It is about a shy, quiet, high-school girl named
Isabel who meets a boy named Marcus, who seems to be
perfect for her.
The author writes like a professional in the way she
describes Isabel's feelings without overdoing it.
So far, she has posted the prologue, which is thrilling and
leaves the reader wanting more. It makes the
reader desperately want to know what happened to
Isabel.
There is also the first and second chapters,
which explain what happened before the event
in the prologue. At the end of the second chapter, the
reader is left at a cliff-hanger and will undoubtedly
be wanting more.
Hopefully, the author (xXxHotPantsxXx) will add more to her
story soon.
I definitely recommend that you check it out. It is
different from most stories on Witty, and I can tell
it's going to be great.
Rating: 4 out of 5 stars
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2 faves · Jun 10, 2011 10:00pm