_luster · 1 decade ago
your a good writer, i can tell. but the story, it just sounds, to rushed and you pay to much attention to how she looks, and blah. i really hate sounding mean, but it's just this story, is too teen - ish. even though i am a teen too. I couldnt read this as a book. but i cans ee you definitly going to be an amazing author, and i congrat you on your many faves and wish for you to succeed.
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love_is_forever · 1 decade ago
love love love this! write more please!(:
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wriiteoutloud_x · 1 decade ago
ahhh, i gotta go. tomorrow! i promise!
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archuleta28 · 1 decade ago
i love it. write more, NOW:)
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