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You Took me by Surprise
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We just sat there in the moment for a while until I finally realized the time. It was 3 and I had dance at 4.
"Oh god, I gotta go, I have dance really soon." I said as I quickly got up.
"Uh alright, are we on for tomorrow still? You know, you showing me around school?" he asked.
"Yea of course," I said with a smile.
"Kay good, well, I'll uh see you tomorrow," Dean replied.
"Sounds like a plan," I started to walk down the steps.
"One more thing Natalie," he grabbed my hand and pulled me in for a kiss. I just looked at him and smiled, then ran down the steps. It was actually happening. Dean and I, I guess together?

I scurried into my house and threw on some tights and a leo. My mom was waiting at the bottom of the stairs when i came down dressed.
"Let's go sweetheart," said my mom.
"I'm ready, I'm ready." I answered. We both got in the car and within a few minutes i was getting out of the car heading into the studio. Today was my two hour long, sunday afternoon, pointe class. Regularly the studio was closed on Sundays, but a couple other girls and I wanted to dance everyday so we got a special request to have one director come in and teach us a two hour class.
We started at the bar with plies then some tendus before putting on our pointe shoes, just to warm up our ankles. Throughout the class i couldn't stop thinking about Dean, and how perfect our kiss was. That was the only thing that was on my mind. Just like I knew would happen, but at this point I didn't care. We put on our pointe shoes after the tendu warm-up. The four of us in the class had already been on pointe for multiple years so we often just goofed around and did turns or leaps across the room. We started off with sotashas across the floor. I got in line behind my friend Katherine, who was first in line. I was barely paying attention to Katherine when i realized it was my turn to go.
Dean Dean Dean! His name kept replaying over and over in my head. I began across the floor as I started to replay the scene of Dean and I out on his porch. All of a sudden I was in the air and i came crashing down the the floor. I didn't know what happened. I lay frozen on the ground with my leg crushed beneath me.

"Natalie! Natalie! Can you hear me? Somebody call 911! Now!" i couldn't move. I could barely even open my eyes. They felt so heavy against my head. Before I knew it a strong man came over to me and carefully placed me on a stretcher and rushed me to the hospital. After I got to the hospital everything faded out and I had no clue what was going on.
"Is she alright?" I finally gained back my sense of hearing and I could handle to open my eyes a smidge.
"I think she will be, she suffered a pretty big fall. Especially in pointe shoes, it could've been much worse," I heard a doctor say. I tilted my head and saw Dean standing there next to the doctor. I couldn't believe he had the nerve to come. It was his fault. He did this too me. I slowly sat up and realized I coudn't feel my leg. At all. I looked over to Dean as he tried to smile at me. The doctor soon left and Dean came up close to my bed.
"What are you doing here?" I asked irritatedly.
"I wanted to make sure you were okay," he replied.
"Okay? I can't feel my leg and you want to know if I'm okay?!" I yelled.
"Yea Im worried,"
"Don't give me that crap! You did this to me! I told you that having you in my life would cause a distraction, and look I was right! I got distracted and I fell! It's all your fault!" I felt like i was screaming at the top of my lungs. I was so angry.
"Natalie calm down, I didn't.." he trailed off.
"Get out!" he stood there in shock, "I said get out!" He quickly left the room. As I watched him leave a teal slowly trickled down my face.
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