nyuukahsays__ · 1 decade ago
wheeen is the next one? D:
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smilelikethesunx3 · 1 decade ago
keeping writing them pleaseeeeeeee!!!!!!!!
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tululubell1554 · 1 decade ago
when r u going to write the next one like arghh lmaoo its amazing whens the next part
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JustBreathe · 1 decade ago
are you going to write more?
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kenzieelynne · 1 decade ago
KEEEEEEP WRITING ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! THIS IS AMAZING<3 I LOVE IT, KEEP WRITING PLEASE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! :)
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ConverseChiiickx3 · 1 decade ago
KEEP WRITING!!!
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musicizlife9200 · 1 decade ago
Omg keep writing this is amazing and I love ittt!
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awsomechick92 · 1 decade ago
ahh i lovedd joee keeep writing omg its sooo gooodd!
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magicgirl3197 · 1 decade ago
omg keep writing please! its realllly good!!!
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hannah_banana24 · 1 decade ago
this story is ...... amazing. i am addicted to it (: you HAVE to keep writing/ this was great seriosly its so intese i love it <3
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XXKatiiKatXX120 · 1 decade ago
When are you gunna write the next onee?
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sTAnDxOuTx · 1 decade ago
okay guys the guys kinda robbed her house but they were already in the house waiting for the right time to take her. this is a true story (well some of it i tweeked it a bit) my sister actually went through this experience. i was making my own story but she told me this one and i thought it was much more interesting, so stop saying its not realistic because it did actually happen.
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jennrawr · 1 decade ago
please keep writing !!!! Yeah, I agree they are confusing anyways, how did the guys get her when she was at joes house?
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JustBreathe · 1 decade ago
keeeep goinnnnng!!!
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peeerrrrttttyyyyyy · 1 decade ago
omg! well that was unexpected! im just a little confused about how men took her and her when she was at joes house?
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Chizzle · 1 decade ago
How can you guys not like Caleb? Joe was a jerk :(
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christinewalthersxx3 · 1 decade ago
what a turn !
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Zebrafreak22 · 1 decade ago
THIS STORY IS SOOO REALISTIC.
"hey, you got ," caleb said lovingly.
"lol, it's okay. let's make out."

:P
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xxiheartyou · 1 decade ago
gahhh, your story's are amazingg, but a tad confusing
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Forever_17 · 1 decade ago
holy !
didn't see
that coming!
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