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Chapter 15
Hannah
I usually loved the beach. It was my favorite part of this town. But right now, little jellyfish scattered the beach, looking like the sand was covered in bubble wrap. It’s pretty gross. So I avoided the beach and walked through the town instead.

There was a tiny park near downtown. It wasn’t big, but it had giant oak trees, a beautiful garden, and one gigantic fountain in the center. I walked down one of the paths that led to the fountain. I sat down and closed my eyes, my hands reaching my stomach instinctively. I was at week 18. According to the Internet, the worst of the symptoms are over for now. I can’t imagine what’s next. I looked down, smiling. Arianna thinks it will be a girl, but I’m convinced it’s a boy. Sitting there peacefully, I came up with names for him in my head.

Suddenly, on the other side of the fountain, a phone rang. “Hello?” I heard the phone’s owner answer. Logan. My stomach churned, and it wasn’t from the baby.

“Not much, at the park,” I heard Logan say. The voice was getting closer. He was standing up now, walking towards where I was sitting. Silently, I scrambled up, trying to run from the fountain. But he had seen me. He stood there, the phone in his hand, his mouth gaping open. “Gotta call you back,” he said to the phone. He snapped it shut. “Hannah,” he whispered.

I took a sharp intake of air. “Please Logan. Not now. I…I can’t.”

He nods. “I’m sorry. But here,” he says. He closes the distance between us and grabbed my hand. I tried to ignore the feeling of touching him again. Then I looked at what he dropped in my hand.

There was a roll of a hundred dollar bills. I looked up shocked. He shrugged. “Got a job. It pays well. Use that for the baby. And anything you’ll need at the hospital. For now, this is all I can do,” he said sheepishly.

I stood there, to shocked to move. He gave me a crooked smile. Then he turned away, his hands in his pockets. Leaving me standing here with a roll of 700 dollars. He was going to make my mother very happy.






Hannah, you need to have your baby already(: Im out of ideas!
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Chapter 15 Hannah I usually loved the beach. It was my favorite

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ximxalwaysxhere4youx · 1 decade ago
Logan. Logan. Logan.

Nuff said xD

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the_bestest_1 · 1 decade ago
Arianna:)
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soccerchick55 · 1 decade ago
i dont know my fave is either hannah or logan. there both goood characters. btw i loveee youur storyy! your an amazing writer!!!
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Allie14 · 1 decade ago
Beautiful. As always. How are you so wonderfully amazing at this? Haha. My faves gotta be Arianna. You should have another chapter with them and then defintley go wih emmalies idea. Skip a few months. Not too many tho(: still love your story wayywayywayy to much(:
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emmalie · 1 decade ago
hello sweetheart. :) love the story. kee goin. well you shud let logan and hannah get together the baby needs his daddy. he even got a job! an let something big happen w. the mom. an ari an ash.... cuute. skip like a few months if ur ready for thhe babyy. but not too many. itll be alot easier to think of things once the babys born..
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