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Logan

I was walking on the beach, trying to clear my head. I was an absolute mess. I don’t think I have had an actual conversation with anyone in five days. Sighing, I made my way to the sand dunes. I was too upset to do anything. My baby was dead.

I approached one of the dunes, seeing that it was taken. This whole damn town was too crowded. Then I realized it was Arianna. Her long black hair spun around her, and she had her eyes shut. Like she was trying to escape too.

I walk over. I needed to talk to someone. I didn’t want to scare her though. Knowing her, she probably knew karate and could take me down.

“I know you’re there Logan,” she said simply.

“Oh. Uh. Hi,” I said uncertainly.

“Do you need something?” she asked.

“Just…needed someone to talk to,”

She opened her eyes. She glared at me for a moment, then her expression softened. “Sit,” she motioned.

We sat there for a while, watching the waves and the fishermen who got out on the water early.

Without thinking, I blurted out, “How was the appointment?”

Arianna winced.

“Sorry. Shouldn’t have done that,”

Arianna sighed. “No. Hannah’s wrong. You deserve to know. Even though I kind of hate you, it’s your baby too.”

“Um…thanks,” I said unsurely.

Ari rolled her eyes. “I’m not going to beat you up. Relax.”

“Not too sure about that…”

She chuckled.

“So what happened?” I asked impatiently.

She took a deep breath. “She’s keeping the baby.”

My heart skipped a beat. Keeping the baby? My baby was going to be alive?

A giant smile stretched across my face. I my eyes filled with tears. I knew this wasn’t something to be happy about. I was too young to be a father. But, my baby was alive.

Arianna’s glare came back. “What are you smirking about? You have no idea how hard your life just got a hell of a lot harder.”

I nodded. “I know. But my baby’s alive.”








I have no idea what to do from here. help?

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xxmermaids104xx · 1 decade ago
I like what emmalie said. that sounds cool! Awesome story it's goooood:)

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Elise_Marie_x3 · 1 decade ago
i think the ash/ari thing would be great exciting news...
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laxgirl26xo · 1 decade ago
i like what allie 14 said cept no absue or drugs but like dont skip months just yet like have logan help her through it and stuff its really good though and whatever you do will be like ahmazing
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emmalie · 1 decade ago
noo, nooo abuse,,, that would make ppl think your copying other people stories... you shud skip a couple months, till right about the time the babys being born, an logan an hannah should try to work things out, he didnt her, so it was both there fault, an ari hould have something big happen in her life, just some thoughts.. :) need anymore help just comment my profile. an if u have any Qs about the whole baby thing, im def here to help, cus wat hannahs going through, thats like my life all over it,,,
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Allie14 · 1 decade ago
Oorrr someone could get caught with drugs? Pills? Comes out of the closet?
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Allie14 · 1 decade ago
I'd love to see hannah and Logan meet! Or have Ari and ash secretly going out? Maybe you should have something like her mom should be cheating or seeing a new guy, maybe he's abusive to her?
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