^ Im working on a story with this so tell me what you think and i dont have a title yet. Also tell me if you think i should add more on here. Please dont leave any hate comments! PLEASE READ I KNOW ITS LONG BUT PLEASE!
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It was a crisp cold but beautiful night. The moon was shining high above me in the dark ocean looking sky. I could see my breath like tiny clouds of fog before me as I walked along the cold hard ground.
I love walking around outside it always gives me the time to think without all the commotion and yelling. I always put my ipod on though because it drones everything else in the world out.
Its so annoying how I can never get some peace and quiet. Sometimes I get the urge to put my fingers in my ear and scream at the top of my lungs " SHUT UP, JUST SHUT UP ALREADY" but of course I never have. If I did then I would get in a real boatload of trouble.
I live in a normal suburban town called Green ridge, in Connecticut. Like other families I have a mother, father, sister, and a brother. My mother’s name is Elizabeth, my dad’s name is Henry, my sister’s name is Dana, and my older brother is Gregory, but he doesn’t live with us anymore. Oh and my name is Montana.
I guess I’ll start with the beginning and why I’m even outside late at night. It all started when my sister wanted to go out with her friends. It was around 9 o’clock and they didn’t want her to go because they didn’t trust her friend who was driving. They got into this whole argument going
"Now Dana you know I trust you but I just don’t trust Arial and her driving, she did just start." my mother calmly said.
" Oh come on mom, she’s had her license for around 2 months" Dana shouted.
" Stop shouting at your mother like that and we said no" Henry ordered.
" You always tell me I can’t do anything, it’s not fair I hate you, I hate both of you!" Dana cried
Off she went hammering up the stairs and slamming her bedroom door behind her.
" Hun maybe we should let her go, I mean she does have a good point, Arial has had her license for 2 months now" Henry stated.
"You even agreed with me and said no, and no means no, she’s just going to have to live with it" Elizabeth replied.
" I don’t want my daughter to hate me Elizabeth, our son already does." Henry answered frowning.
" You know he doesn’t hate you he’s just complicated and she doesn’t hate you either, she’s just mad that she didn’t get her way." Elizabeth whispered.
" Just let her go you guys, Arial probably isn’t going to crash or anything so what’s the problem?" I asked
"Stay out of this Montana, you have no clue on how she drives unless you go sneaking behind my back and go for drives with her" Henry shouted.
"What are you even talking about, she’s not even my friend, she’s Dana’s, and you think I would go behind your back? Wow you really have trust issues dad!" I snapped.
" Excuse me young lady, you do not talk back like that now go to your room this instant." Henry screamed.
Instead of going to my room I just ran out the door. I could hear the yelling between my parents so I turned my ipod on put the headphones in my ears and ran onto a path.
After a couple minutes I turned my run into a walk.
Now I’m walking on a path that leads to a river with an old park listening to "She’s got style" by Never shout never.
Damn it I forgot to charge my ipod. I knew I should have while I was in my room but no I just had to go and read that book that I’ve been dieing to read for the past 5 months.
Oh well I’m just going to try and focus on other things like how my ipod just died. Well I figured it was going to anyway because it was on red.
I tucked my ipod into my pocket and just kept walking ahead. School was almost over thankfully and it was a Friday so I didn’t have it tomorrow.
I hate being in 10th grade and being 15. There’s too much drama and girls crying over boys. I made a promise to myself that I wasn’t going to be like that. Yeah I’ve had boyfriends but I’ve never cried over them luckily.
Yes I’m almost to the river. I can hear the water running. I started picking up my pace and turning my walk into a sprint.
I ran right to the edge of the water and can see the reflection of the moon in the water with the ripples running through it.
Out of no where I hear someone humming. Instantly I turn my head to the old playground and on my favorite swing I can just make out a boy who looked around my age.
The boy got up from the swing and started walking towards me. I wasn’t sure if I should scream and run for it or to stay there.
Something in my body was telling me I should run but I just couldn’t move. Its like my brain was telling me to move but my feet just wouldn’t listen.
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