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I'm Nicole Marie, 17 years old(:
Junior in High School.
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  1. storygirl2014 storygirl2014
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    April 14, 2012 4:44pm UTC
    I want a witty best friend! anybody around the age of 16, comment!<33

  2. storygirl2014 storygirl2014
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    April 14, 2012 1:23pm UTC
    two is better than one
    Chapter 7
    I woke up the next morning wondering where I was, soon remembering that I had spent the night at Kristi's in order to get out of a date with some guy who isn't my boyfriend. Since Kristi and Justin are pretty close, I decided to ask her about the girl on his facebook page.
    "Before we were going to go bowling last night, I saw his profile picture, of another girl kissing him. So I went to his wall, and there were a whole bunch of love posts from the girl in the picture. Who is she?" I asked, trying to act like I didn't care too much.
    "That's his ex-girlfriend. I think. I don't know, they might be talking." she said, not sure of whether they were dating or not.
    "Oh. If he was talking with her, why would he want to take me out?" I asked.
    "Maybe he just wants to be friends with you." she said, trying to find an explanation.
    "Then why would he give me his number?" I asked, growing frustrated.
    "Good question." she said.
    "I don't even know if I like him. I really don't want to lead him on." I said, feeling kind of guilty.
    "How can you not like him? He's sweet, funny, and probably the best looking guy I've ever seen." she said, gushing about how cute he was. He was pretty good-looking.
    "I am so torn. What about Ian?" I asked, feeling bad for thinking aout seeing another person, other than the one I love.
    "Don't take this the wrong way. But if you and Ian are taking a break, do you guys really love each other?" she asked, which made me wonder. I don't think I'm really in love with Ian anymore.
    "You're right. I don't love him anymore. Over the past few weeks, I've fallen out of love with Ian. We shouldn't just take a break. We should just break up. Right?" I asked, feeling little emotion.
    "It's up to you. Go talk to him." she said, urging me to solve my boy problems once and for all.
    "Thanks girl. You're the best!" I said, giving her a hug and running out to my car. I drove to my house and told Ian to meet me there. He showed up, seeming a bit confused.
    "We need to talk. I know we're taking a break, but I don't think we should get ack together. You're a great guy, and you were a good boyfriend. But I'm not in love with you the way I used to be." I said, glad that I got it out.
    "Okay. But we can still be friends, right?" he asked, not wanting to let go of me.
    "Of course." I said, walking towards him and giving him a hug. At that moment, Justin walked in the kitchen.
    "Am I interrupting?" he asked.
    "Do you ever go home?" I asked, annoyed by his presence.
    "That was rude." he said, walking over to the fridge. Ian left shortly afterwards, and I decided it was time to talk to Justin.
    "Did you have fun last night?" he asked, and I wasn't sure where this conversation was going.
    "Yeah." was all I said back.
    "Was it worth ditching me?" he asked, looking kind of upset. I decided to come clean.
    "I have to go.' I said, and walked up to my bedroom. I booted up my laptop and checked my facebook page. I posted my status as "Single & Lovin' It!" to show people that I wasn't upset over my recent break up. Then I saw something that caught my eye. Justin's picture. He changed it to a picture of him and his family from last summer. And all of the posts from that girl on his wall were gone. His status read "welcome to the single life." So he wasn't dating that girl. At least not anymore. I felt like an idiot. I wanted to go to the beach, so i threw on my yellow floral bikini. I put on my white and brown tank top over that with a pair of jean shorts. I zipped my brown gladiator sandals up, and put on some lip gloss. I came to the realization that I did find myself attracted to Justin. But I didn't really want to be in a relationship with anybody right now. I walked downstairs, and he was with Trevor in the living room playing Xbox.
    "I'm going to the beach, wanna come?" I asked, knowing that at least Justin would.
    "Yeah!" they both answered. I waited downstairs while they got changed and called Anna while I was waiting. I decided to invite her to the beach, so I wouldn't feel like a third wheel. Once the boys came back, Anna was at my house and we all started walking to the beach. I probably shoudln't have invited Anna, because she would spend time with Kyle. And that meant I would have to spend time with Justin.
    ~~~~~
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  3. storygirl2014 storygirl2014
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    April 13, 2012 6:42pm UTC
    two is better than one
    Chapter 6
    School dragged for the rest of the day, and all I wanted to do was get out of this place. Everybody has been giving me sympathetic looks in the halls today, and I really don't like it when people try and intervene with my love life. Kyle had left school early with one of his friends, so I didn't have to bring him home. I went to me locker and took my time getting my books. I heard someone walking towards me, and when I closed my locker, I caught sight of Ian. I really didn't want us to go from loving each other to hating each other, so I was going to be civil.
    "Hey." he said, walking up to me.
    "Hi." I replied, sensing the awkwardness of this confrontation.
    "Look, I really don't want to lose you. I just need some time to myself. A few weeks. That's it." he said, and I knew what he was talking about. Being in a relationship with somebody for so long can bore you, but we were in love. And suddenly everything I said to him this morning faded away from my memory. Taking a break didn't seem like a bad idea.
    "I agree." I said, and he now knew that he had a few weeks to do whatever or whoever he wanted. I walked to my car and met up with Justin on the way. I had forgotten that I had to give him a ride home.
    "Justin! I totally forgot! I'm so sorry!" I exclaimed, feeling bad for leaving him alone for about a half an hour.
    "No worries." he said nonchalantly.
    "Are you going to your house or mine?" I asked, half expecting him to say mine. He practically lives there, since his parents are always away on work.
    "Yours." he said, and we got in my car. I put on my seat belt and turned on the radio. Justin decided to start a conversation, and I was glad to have the company.
    "So if you don't mind me asking, what's going on with you and Ian?" he asked, suddenly curious in my life.
    "We're taking a break." I said cooly.
    "Oh. So now he won't get mad if we hang out?" he asked, with a hopeful look in his eyes.
    "I guess not..." I answered, unsure of where this was going.
    "Since your brother isn't going to be home until later, let's chill tonight. You like bowling?" he asked.
    "Yeah." I answered, not wanting to let him down, but not wanting to lead him on either. We pulled into my driveway and I got out of the car as soon as I parked.
    "Let's leave in a half an hour." said Justin.
    "Okay." I answered. I walked up to my room and changed my clothes, deciding what I was wearing right now was not a bowling outfit. I finally decided on something casual. I wore my light wash jean capris and a white hollister crop top. I matched my maroon converse to the bird on the shirt, and threw on my reading glasses because my contacts were hurting. I went online to check my Facebook before I left, and noticed that my relationship status still said "In a Relationship with Ian Sanders." I quickly changed that statud to "single" because Ian and I were on a break, and not dating as of right now. I also went to Justin's wall and saw that his profile picture was of him and some girl kissing him on the cheek. That same girl in the photo had posted a whole bunch of sappy sayings on his wall.Did Justin have a girlfriend? Or was he just talking to this girl. And if he was, why was I going out with him tonight? I shut my laptop and walked over to my bed. I heard a faint knock on the door.
    "Come in." I said, once again feeling confused thanks to Justin.
    "Hey. You ready to go?" asked Justin. I didn't really want to go out with him, not until I knew he wasn't seeing someone, so I made up a lie.
    "I totally forgot I was supposed to hang out with Kristi tonight." I lied straight through my teeth.
    "Oh. Okay, see ya." he said, and walked out of my room. I decided that if I was going to lie, I might as well make it become true. I went over to Kristi's about a half an hour later, and spilled everything to her. Why do boys have to be so confusing?
    ~~~~~~~~
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  4. storygirl2014 storygirl2014
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    April 8, 2012 9:23pm UTC
    two is better than one
    Chapter 5
    "Mark?!" I screamed, shocked to see my brother standing in my classroom. Mark was twenty-three years old, and he was also a member of the military. He went into the army about five years ago, right after he graduated from high school. Being in the army kind of ran in the family, my brother is in it, and my father, and so is my grandfather. I ran up to the front of the class, grabbing my books, and gave my brother a huge hug. He stayed and talked for the teacher for a few more minutes, because he had her when he was a student here. After I left class, Mark and I went to find Kyle and pull him out of class. He was as suprised as I was to see our brother. Mark signed us out of school and we went to lunch together. I had a lot of fun with my two brothers, and having Mark made me realize that my dad was going to be okay when he left. He would come back.
    After my family got back from dinner that night, I went to my bedroom and started working on my homework. I really didn't understand Shakespeare at all, and I don't know why somebody would name their child MacBeth. Halfway through my english homework, there was a knock on the french doors that led to my balcony. I opened the curtain slightly, wondering who it was. I could make out Ian's face by the dim light the moon was giving off. I opened the door and let him in, hoping that he was no longer mad at me, because I hated fighting with him.
    "I saw you talking with Justin today. Anything you want to tell me?" he asked, growing jealous, once again.
    "Yeah. My dad is going to Afghanistan for a year. Justin knew, and he was trying to make me feel better. Wanna think again before you accuse me of doing something I'm not?" I asked, getting annoyed.
    "He's leaving? I'm sorry Livvi. I'm here for you." he said, walking over to give me a hug. I pulled away from him, not ready to forgive him just yet.
    "Are you? Are you really here for me Ian? Because lately, you've been getting really jealous and not acting like yourself." I snapped.
    "Olivia, I really am here for you. And I'm sorry if I'm jealous. It's just that you're beautiful, and I can't help but get jealous when a senior checks you out. You're funny, kind, and a great person. That's what every guy looks for in a girl. You're the whole package, and I don't know what I would do wihtout you." he said, getting soft.
    "Ian, I love you. You know that." I said, gazing into his eyes.
    "And I love you too." he said back, wondering where I was going with this. He probably anticipated a kiss or something, but that's not what I was going to give him.
    "But I don't like the fact that you hav ebeen accusing me of cheating on you. You know I would never do that, and it hurts to think that you believe I would." I finished.
    "So what are you saying?" he asked, not sure what just happened.
    "I'm saying I want to be alone right now." I told him, and he walked out. He looked upset, but I didn't care. He deserved to be upset. You can't treat your girlfriend like that and get away with it. I finished my homework and went to sleep. The next morning, I woke up and chose my outfit. I put on my floral tank top, jean shorts, and orange gladiator sandals. I looked cute and casual, which is exactly what I was going for. I curled my blonde hair, making sure every strand was perfect. Once I was ready to go, I grabbed my homework and my car keys and walked downstairs. My father was leaving today, and my mother didn't want us to miss school again so I had to say my goodbye now. When I got downstairs, I ran over to him and gave him a big hug. I was careful not to cry, because I didn't want to smudge my makeup.
    "I'm gonna miss you Daddy. I love you. Be careful." I said.
    "I'll miss you too sweetie. You be good, okay? I'll see you soon." he said, and walked out the door. I told Kyle I was ready to go, and soon we were on the way to pick up Justin, then go to school. When we got to school, Ian was talking with a bunch of lacrosse guys near his truck, and he saw Justin get out of my car. A disgusted look ran across his face, but it was soon gone when he realized I had to say the hardest goodbye of my life a few minutes ago. I was hoping he would walk over and give me a hug or something, but when I walked by him, he didn't even notive me. His friends whistled, and he didn't tell them to knock it off like he usually does. I heard a small, but important, part of their discussion.
    "What's going on between you too?" asked one of his friends.
    "We're not together anymore." he said, staring straight at me. I never said we broke up. Never. Unless he decided to, but I don't know why he would have. I walked back to where he was standing and politely asked his friends to give us some time. They did, and Ian and I started talking.
    "So we're not together anymore?" I asked, mocking his words.
    "You said you wanted to be alone." he replied.
    "I meant last night! I don't want to break up with you Ian. I just need some time. Okay?" I asked, hoping he would agree.
    'I guess. But if we're on a break, I'm gonna see other girls." he said.
    "We're not on a break! You know what Ian? If you want to see other girls that badly, then do it. I don't care. Because you were right. We're not together anymore." I said, and stormed off. I felt the tears start to fall from my eyes, and I couldn't believe how Ian was acting. He had changed a lot lately, and I didn't like it. Which meant I was going to have to make some changes too.
    ~~~~~~
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  5. storygirl2014 storygirl2014
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    April 6, 2012 7:10pm UTC
    two is better than one
    Chapter 4
    I woke up the next morning still kind of confused from what happened last night. I decided that I wouldn't tell Ian that Justin gave me his number, because it would only cause more problems. I walked over to my wardrobe and started thinking about what to wear. I grabbed my striped skirt and a white tank top, choosing to wear my tan pumps with the outfit. Once I was dressed, I threw on a belt with a bow to define my waist. I grabbed my bag and walked downstairs, where my mother had placed a plate full of food in my spot at the table. I took a bite of my toast and she started talking to me.
    "Olivia, sweetie. Your father and I need to tell you and Kyle something." she said, with a hint of sadness in her voice.
    "Okay..." I said, not sure where this was going. They couldn't be getting divorced, because they seemed so happy with each other.
    "I've been called into duty." said my father, motioning to his camoflauge suitcase, and I immediately knew what he meant.
    "When do you leave?" I asked, trying not to cry. My father was in the military, and whenever he goes over seas, he's gone for at least a year, with no way to contact us.
    "Tomorrow night. I'll be gone for about six months this time, give or take." he said. Six months military time usually meant more than a year.
    "We will be having dinner as a family tonight. Please join us at 7:00 at Carrero's." my mother said, trying to be strong.
    "Yeah, we'll be there." said Kyle. I had plans with Ian, but I could put them off since it was my father's last night here for a while.
    "Of course. But right now we have to get to school. Love you mom, love you dad." I said, giving both of them a hug.
    "Have a good day at school kids. I'm positive that it will be great." said my mother, with a smile. I wonde what she's up to. I grabbed my keys off the counter and walked out to my car. I started it, and Kyle and I drove in silence. I was really upset that my father was leaving, and I didn't really want to talk to anyone right now. We eventually got to the school, and I started making my way to my locker. I entered my combination and it clicked open. I dropped my bag in there and grabbed my stuff for first period. I walked to the classroom, but not before running into Ian.
    "Hey beautiful." he called out to me. I looked at him, and he walked over to me and gave me a hug.
    "Hi." was all I said back.
    "What's wrong?" he asked, sensing that I wasn't in my usual good mood.
    "I don't want to talk about it." I said, because I really didn't. I can't cry in front of the whole school. It would only make me look weak. And I am not weak.
    "Livvi, what's going on?" he asked, determined to get an answer out of me.
    "Really Ian, I have to go. It's nothing you did." I said, and walked away. I turned into my classroom and sat down in my seat, waiting for Kristi to walk in. She did, and she gave me a bright smile. I have to fake being happy for this class, I guess. Luckily we didn't have much time to talk before class. Justin walked in ten minutes late again, and took his seat next to me.
    "Hey. How are you holding up?" he asked, and I figured Kyle had told him my dad was leaving tomorrow.
    "Okay." I said, turning my attention to the teacher and the notes on the board. Class dragged on, but finally the bell rang. I walked to my locker, and retrieved my stuff for my next class. Ian walked up next to me and just stood there.
    "Hey." he said, his arms crossed.
    "Hi. Something came up tonight, and we can't hang out. Can we change the plans to this weekend instead?" I asked.
    "Why do you keep ditching me Olivia?" he asked, growing annoyed with me.
    "What do you mean?" I asked.
    "This morning, you didn't want to talk to me at all. And now you're bailing on me tonight. Is there something I should know about? Or someone?" he asked. He can't honestly think I'm cheating on him. Lately, he's been getting on my nerves. He has no reason to be jealous, and he doesn't understand that.
    "I'm just going through a tough time right now Ian. And no, there isn't somebody else. I can't believe you would even think that." I scoffed, turning my back to him and walking to class. I saw Justin in the hall, and he must have seen me too, because he left his group of friends and came over to walk with me.
    "Hey." he said, putting his hands in his pockets.
    "Why does everybody have to be so paranoid?" I asked, not thinking before I spoke.
    "Boyfriend problems?" he guessed.
    "Kind of. I didn't tell him my dad's going away tomorrow, becuase then he would want to talk about it, and I don't want to. And I was supposed to hang out with him tonight, but my mom made reservations for my family for dinner, and he thinks I'm cheating on him. Ugh. Boys these days." I said, saying what I really needed to. I can't believe I just told Justin that.
    "Don't tell anyone." I told him.
    "No problem." he said, and continued walking me to class. When I got to my classroom, I turned to thank him for talking with me. I walked into the classroom, and about 20 minutes into class, there was a knock on the door. My teacher went to open the door, and she hugged the guy who was standing in the doorway. It must have been one of her former students, but when he walked in the class, I got a better look at him.

  6. storygirl2014 storygirl2014
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    April 5, 2012 10:25pm UTC
    You
    Only
    Live
    Once
    that's the motto

  7. storygirl2014 storygirl2014
    posted a quote
    April 5, 2012 9:58pm UTC
    two is better than one
    Chapter 3
    As the last bell of the day rang, I pulled out my iPhone and tapped a message to Kyle, reminding him that I would be a few minutes late. I went to my locker and dropped off my binders and books. I went down to the gymnasium afterwards, looking for the girls' soccer coach. I was the captain of the varsity soccer team at my high school, and I needed to talk with the coach before we started practices. She was in her office, and I spoke to her about who would be on the team and when we would have practice. After about ten minutes, I walked out of her office and saw Ian waiting outside the boys' locker room. Ian was on the football, the starting line backer for varsity. He wasn't captain, only because there were a lot of good seniors, my brother included. Ian was a pretty popular guy, but some of the seniors were more well-liked, including Justin. When he saw me, he smiled and walked towards me.
    "Hey cutie." He greeted me with a kiss, making me smile. We have dated for about 8 months, and I still get butterflies when I'm with him. I grabbed his hand and we walked with our fingers intertwined to my car. When we got there, Justin and Kyle were waiting, locked out of the car. I grabbed the keys out of my gold prada purse and clicked the unlock button. I opened the trunk and threw my bag in there and so did Justin, Kyle, and Ian. I climbed into the driver's seat, with Ian in the passenger seat and Kyle and Justin sitting in the back. I turned on the radio and "Call Me Maybe" blasted through the speakers. I loved this song, so I decided to sing along. Ian turned off the radio shortly after I began to sing.
    "Thank you!" Justin and Kyle screamed, glad that my singing was over.
    "Hey! I'm not that bad!" I said, pulling into my driveway. Kyle got out of the car to get his stuff, while Justin took his time.
    "Thanks for the ride Liv." he said, flashing me one of his bright white smiles, which made me smile.
    "Anytime." I said. I turned back to Ian, and reached for his hand. He pulled away though, which was weird.
    "Is everything okay?" I asked, growing concerned.
    "Liv? I thought that was my nickname for you. Why does he cal you that?" he asked, getting jealous.
    "He's called me that for years. It's nothing to get worked up over." I said, getting annoyed by the fact that he was upset because some guy didn't call me by my full name.
    "And then the way he smiled at you? You smiled back at him, with a certain look in your eyes." he said, not giving this conversation up.
    "Ian, calm down. I do NOT like Justin. Okay? I like you. I love you." I said, staring deeply into his eyes, hoping he would drop the subject. Justin was my brother's best friend, and it would just be weird if we dated. Sure, he was adorable, but I was in love with Ian.
    "I love you, too." he said, breaking a smile. I gave him a quick peck on the lips, then went to the trunk of my car to retrieve my bag. When I opened the trunk, there was a lined piece of paper, and I was sure it wasn't there when I put my bag in here. Before Ian could see it, I threw it in my purse and would read it later. For the remainder of the day, Ian and I did homework and watched The Notebook, one of my favorite movies. After his sister came to pick him up, I grabbed the note out of my bag and read it.
    "555-6834. Call me maybe?" I didn't recognize the number, but I figured it had to be either Kyle's, Ian's, or Justin's. I reached for my phone, and looked at both Ian and Kyle's contacts. Not their numbers. Which meant it was Justin's. I walked to the living room, where they were playing Xbox. Justin noticed I was alone, and he told Kyle he had to go to the bathroom. Once he got to the kitchen and sat down at the table, I started talking.
    "Why did you give me your number?" I asked, with irritation in my voice. It was getting old, having guys chase you, even though you have a boyfriend.
    "So you could call me?" he said, making it sound more like a question than an answer.
    "I have a boyfriend, Justin. A boyfriend that I love. And I don't need my brother's best friend messing that up. Okay?" I asked, with anger in my voice. I rose from the table, but he caught my hand before I was able to storm off.
    "Liv, I know you and Ian are an item, and I wouldn't want to mess that up. But we can be friends, right?" he asked, with a look of hope in his eyes. I couldn't say no to those stunning green eyes.
    "Sure. But don't try anything." I warned him, and walked off to my bedroom. Today was a weird day, and little did I know that this was going to be a weird year.
    ~~~~~~~
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  8. storygirl2014 storygirl2014
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    April 4, 2012 7:46pm UTC
    two is better than one
    This story is Olivia, the popular girl who has it all, falling for someone she shouldn't be. Especially because she has a boyfriend, a perfect one. Throughout her junior year she will make mistakes, fall in and out of love, and live her life, just like the rest of us. I think it's going to be good, so you should all read it!(: The characters are up on my profile, check it outtttt!

  9. storygirl2014 storygirl2014
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    April 3, 2012 8:03pm UTC
    two is better than one
    Chapter 2
    "Olivia! You look so cute!" squealed one of my close friends Kristi as I walked into the school.
    "Hey girl! Love your top," I said, admiring the cute Dolce&Gabbbana shirt she was wearing today.
    "What class do you have first period?" she asked, probably hoping we had the same first period class.
    "History," I answered, and her face lit up.
    "Me too!" she announced, totally psyched to be in my class. We have been best friends for a long time, practically forever. Since high school started, we kind of drifted away, and I think she was glad that we had more classes together this year so we could become close again. Don't get me wrong, I love this girl, but after spending 12 years of your life with her, she can get on your nerves easily.
    "I gotta go to my locker, meet you at class?"
    "Sure," she answered. I walked to locker 482, which I would be using a lot this year. I dropped my backpack in the locker, grabbing my notebook and purple pen, and made my way to class. I got sidetracked though, because on my way, the cutest guy walked in through the front doors. His brown bangs brushed across his forehead, and I could see his deep brown eyes staring straight at me, a smile on his face. He walked over to where I was standing and wrapped his arms around me.
    "Hey baby. I missed you," he said, his eyes looking into mine.
    "Yeah? That's good, cause I missed you too," I responded, and brought my lips to his.
    "You look cute today Livvi," he said, while leading me down the hallway, hand in hand.
    "You don't look too bad yourself," I said with a laugh. He turned and looked at me, while taking my necklace in his hands.
    "I really did miss you," he said, giving me a loving look.
    "I know. And I really missed you too. But I have to go now, otherwise I'll have a detention on the first day of school. How will I explain that to my parents?" I asked, giving him one last kiss. In case you didn't pick up on it, this guy was my boyfriend, Ian. He had gone to Rhode Island for the last few weeks of summer, which meant we spent a few weeks on the opposite side of the country. I walked into history, suprised to see that Krisi wasn't there yet. I walked to the back of the room, because only geeks sit in the front. Kristi walked in about two minutes later, just missing the late bell. She came and sat next to me, leaving one seat open next to me.
    "It seems we're missing someone," said the teacher, looking at the attendance sheet.
    "Sorry I'm late." Justin walked in the classroom, looking for a seat. He saw the only one next to me and sat down.
    "Hey," he said.
    "Hi. Tell Kyle I have to stay after for like 15 minutes today. I can still give you guys a ride though." I told him.
    "No problem," he answered. I walked up to the front of the class and grabbed a textbook that I would be using for the year. I walked back to my seat, and spaced out while the teacher described the course for the year. I was relieved when the bell rang, only to realize I had to sit through six more periods of lectures. Great. At least I had a fun afternoon with Ian to look forward to. Another one of my friends, Anna, was in my next class. I hadn't seen much of her this summer, so we caught up while the teacher was talking.
    "So you and Ian are still together?" she asked.
    "Yeah, of course. Aren't we a great couple?" I asked back, awaiting her response.
    "Only the most adorable couple ever!" she answered.
    "What about you and Max?" I asked, not knowing how their relationship went over the summer.
    "It was just a summer fling, you know?" she asked, trying to get me to relate to her.
    "Yeah, I'm sorry it didn't work out for you," I said, giving her my sympathy, knowing it would make her feel like someone had her back through all this.
    "I have my eye on a new guy. But he's not new. Just new to me. You know Kyle? He's a senior," she said. Was she kidding? I hope so.
    "Kyle who?" I asked, trying to play dumb so she would answer me.
    "I don't know, but he has blonde hair, and these piercing green eyes. He's stunning," she said. Was this girl seriously trying to go after my brother? This wasn't going to work.
    "Kyle Rivera?" I asked, hoping she said no. I can't believe I've been friends with this girl for, like, three years and she still didn't know Kyle was my brother. I didn't know people could be so dumb.
    "Yeah! Do you know him?" she asked. I kind of felt bad for the girl, because she was so clueless. But we were friends, and friends don't date their friends brothers. It goes against girl code!
    "Anna, is this a joke? He's my brother," I replied, waiting for the punch line.
    "Oh..This is awkward," she said, looking away from me.
    "Olivia, I really like him. Just find out if he likes me too? Please?" she begged. She seemed desperate, so I decided I would at least tell her I would talk to Kyle.
    "Fine. I'll talk to him. But that's gross, you liking my brother. And i don't want you to date him," I told her, and focused my concentration back on the teacher. I would rather listen to the teacher talk than to my friend talk about hoe much she liked my brother. Ew.
    ~~~~~~
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  10. storygirl2014 storygirl2014
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    April 1, 2012 8:23pm UTC
    two is better than one
    Chapter 1
    "Beep! Beep! Beep!" I slammed my hand against my alarm clock, eager to get more sleep. I knew I had to wake up and start my morning routine if I wanted to get to school on time. And I didn't want to be late for the first day. I rolled out of bed and jumped in the shower. Afterwards, I blow dried my hair and started to curl it. Once I finished my hair, it was time to apply my make-up. When I was done with my eyeliner, mascara, foundation, and eyeshadow, I walked over to my closet, carefully picking out a cute outfit for the first day of school. Being the popular girl, I have to make a great first impression. I decided on a floral dress with my favorite pink heels. I made my way to my jewelry box and chose the heart pendant that my boyfriend gave to me as a gift for my last birthday. I threw on a silver bracelet to match the necklace, and I was ready to go.
    "Olivia!" my mother called. I was going to be late for school, and I knew it.
    "Coming!" I hollered back, and ran down the stairs as fast as my shoes would allow me. When I got downstairs, my mother had her camera out and was ready to take a picture of my older brother and I before our first day of school. I was going into my junior year, but everybody treated me like a senior. My brother was also pretty well liked, and he was starting his senior year. After my mother snapped a few pictures, I grabbed my new bookbag and threw it over my shoulder. I gave my mother and father a hug goodbye, and grabbed the keys to my 2012 Camaro and walked to my car. I turned the stereo on, and out blasted Fun's "We Are Young." This was the perfect song to start my junior year to. Since my brother's car was in the shop getting fixed, I had to give him a ride to school.
    "Don't forget, we have to pick up Justin." said my brother, Kyle.
    "I know, I know. Which driveway is his?" I asked, forgetting whether it was the second or third driveway on the right.
    "Second." Kyle told me. I turned into his driveway and saw him waiting for us.
    "Hey Kyle. Hey Liv." he said, greeting my brother and me. He always called me Liv, but I didn't mind. If I told him that my name was Olivia, he would just get confused. I pulled out of his driveway and was on my way to the school. I pulled into the front parking lot and claimed my spot for the year. I popped the trunk and grabbed my bookbag, locked the car, and headed through the doors of San Francisco High School, ready to start a new year.
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  11. storygirl2014 storygirl2014
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    April 1, 2012 5:57pm UTC
    Love Needs Chemistry
    Chapter 27
    I read that text message over and over again before I actually fell asleep. I really didn't know what to do. It was times like this I wish I had a sister to give me advice. Since I was really close with my brothers, I talked to them about this stuff. Luckily they had woken up from their power naps, because when I walked downstairs, they were all in the kitchen eating take-out.
    "Hey guys." I said, grabbing a fork and starting to dig in.
    "Hey lil sis, what's up?" asked my oldest brother, Josh.
    "Not much. Look, I need your advice guys." I said, warning them that it involved a guy.
    "Is it about Jake? I heard what he did to you. I just don't understand why." said Josh.
    "Yeah. Anybody who messes with my little sister is gonna get messed up by me." stated my other brother Ethan.
    "Okay guys, after you say this, you're gonna think I'm crazy." I warned them.
    "Go for it." said my third brother, Trevor.
    "I think I still love this guy. And I know he hurt me, but he said he didn't mean to. And the weird thing is, I believe him. What should I do?" I asked them.
    "Well, if you really love him, and you forgive him, go after him. When he was over here the other night, he looked like he was completely in love with you. I don't know why he would have done anything to jeopardize that." said Trevor. I was glad he supported me.
    "Yeah, I agree with Trevor. But if this guy breaks your heart again, you let the three of us take care of it, got it?" said Josh. I felt confident after talking with my brothers, and I went back to my room to get some sleep. In the morning at school, I was going to talk to Jake. And I don't know if I'm going to take him back, but I'm definately going to let him know how I feel about him.
    I woke up the next morning and threw on a pair of blue skinny jeans and a sweater. I quickly laced up my blue converse, curled my hair, and ran out of the house to Danny's car. I wonder how he was going to react to the whole confess my feelings to Jake plan.
    "Hey." I said, buckling my seatbelt.
    "Hey. How are you doing today?" he asked, thinking I was sitll upset by the Homecoming event.
    "I'm actually great. I have something I need to do today. And I don't know if you're going to like it." I told him. He gave me a confused look, so I explained myself.
    "Look, I don't know why, but I still love Jake. And I need to make sure that he knows that. He apologized, and I think he actually meant it. He told me he loved me, and I know he's not lying." I said.
    "Yeah, he's not." said Danny. Wait, what?
    "Danny, what are you talking about?" I asked, feeling my heart start to beat faster.
    "He talked to me yesterday in school. Said he was really upset and never meant to hurt you. He asked me to talk to you, and that's what I was going to do on the way to school today. But I guess I don't have to." he said. He didn't seem that upset that I was going to talk to Jake. I got out of the car once we were in the parking lot and made my way to the main entrance. On the way, I saw Jake getting out of his truck. I made my way over to that truck I used to ride in every day.
    "Hi." I said once I approached him.
    "Brooke. Hi. How are you?" he asked, seeming relieved that I was talking to him.
    "I'm pretty good. Jake, I have to ask you something."
    "Anything." he said.
    "Did you really ever love me?" I asked, hoping he said yes.
    "Brooke, I still do love you." he answered. My heart started to beat louder and faster, and I was pretty sure that everyone in a 5 mile radius could hear it.
    "But I understand if your feeling for me have changed." he said, his eyes looking sad.
    "That's the thing Jake. They haven't. I don't know why, but I still find myself totally and completely in love with you. And I can't just shake the feeling that we aren't meant to be together. Because we are, and we both know it." I said. I saw him leaning in towards me, and I didn't stop him.
    "Just kiss me already." I said, and a second later I felt sparks rushing through my body. This guy was the guy that I was in love with. Not only did we have the class chemistry together, but we actually had real chemistry together also.
    ~~~~~
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  12. storygirl2014 storygirl2014
    posted a quote
    April 1, 2012 5:02pm UTC
    the way you
    light up my world
    like nobody else

  13. storygirl2014 storygirl2014
    posted a quote
    April 1, 2012 11:13am UTC
    Girl: Hi. I miss you. I really think we should get back together.
    Boy: Hey. I miss you too. And yeah, I agree with you.
    Girl: Look at the calendar
    Boy: ...?
    Girl: APRIL FOOLS JERK!

  14. storygirl2014 storygirl2014
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    April 1, 2012 12:11am UTC
    Love Needs Chemistry
    Chapter 26
    At the end of the day, I walked to my locker to grab my homework and swim bag. Practice was cancelled, so I was going to get a ride home with Danny. Who probably hated me for verbally attacking his girlfriend today. Oh well. While I was at my locker, I heard footsteps come up behind me. I turned around and came face to face with Luke.
    "Luke, what do you want?" I asked, annoyed by his presence.
    "Just being friendly." he said.
    "Yeah, well the bet's over, so you don't have to be friendly anymore." I told him, with anger in my voice. I slammed my locker shut and started to walk off towards the parking lot. I knew Luke was following me, and I really didn't want to be around him right now, so I decided to take care of this problem.
    "Luke, can you please just leave me alone? I didn't do anything to you, so why should you be bothering me?" I asked. He didn't answer, and I decided that was my cue to leave. I walked off in silence, thankful for the peace that surrounded me. I needed some peace after everything that happened to me today. When I saw Danny leaning against his car, he didn't look very pleased. I felt the need to explain and defend myself, and that's what I did.
    "Look Danny, before you blame me for everything, let me just explain." I said.
    "No." was all he said. He wrapped his arms around me and surrounded me in a tight embrace. When I looked back up at him, I asked him if everything was okay.
    "I broke up with her. You're right. I can do much better." he told me.
    "I'm happy for you. To be honest, she was bringing you down." I admitted. I hopped in his car and he drove me to my house. I got out of the car, and noticed my father's car in the driveway.
    "That's weird..." I said. I told Danny I would talk to him later and I walked into the house to the sound of my parents and Stephanie talking. That was a pleasant suprise. When I walked into the room, they turned and greeted me.
    "Brooke sweetie, Stephanie is here to take you to get your bridesmaid's dress fitted." said my mother, seeming okay with the idea.
    "You don't mind mom?" I asked.
    "Of course not. You two go and have some fun." she said, and gave me a hug goodbye. My father left before us, and Stephanie and I drove off to the bridal store. Since she was wearing a white dress with a pale pink ribbon, she wanted all of the bridesmaid's dresses to be pale pink. I found a cute dress that Stephanie adored. It was a short, tight pale pink dress with a pearl waistband. I let Stephanie choose the shoes, and she chose a pair of delicate white heels with a beautiful flower design on the back of them. I paired that with a diamond bracelet and thought maybe I could wear my pearls with it. Once I had the outfit all picked out, we paid and she drove me back to my house.
    "Thanks for everything tonight. I had a great time. I'm excited for the wedding on Saturday." I said truthfully.
    I walked into my house to the sound of my brothers snoring on the couch while watching a Paul Rudd movie. I had forgotten it was family movie night, but it doesn't look like any of them really missed me. I walked up to my bed for some much needed sleep, when I suddenly got an alert from my phone. I didn't set an alarm, so it must have been a text message. I looked at the screen and it read one new text message from Jake.
    Jake: I really messed up our relationship, and I know that. But Brooke, I love you. I need to be with you. And I know that you probably can't stand me right now, and that's okay. But I need you in my life. So in time if we could talk, let me know.
    Gosh, this boy was really playing with my heart. Being the fool that I am, I was going to let him.
    ~~~~~~
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  15. storygirl2014 storygirl2014
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    March 31, 2012 5:06pm UTC
    Peeta: I got a feelin'
    Katniss: Oh no.
    Peeta: That's tonight's gonna be my last night.
    Katniss: Peeta, stop.
    Peeta: That tonight's gonna be my last night.
    Peeta: That tonight's gonna be my last last night.
    Katniss: Don't say that.
    Peeta: Tonight's the night.
    Peeta: I won't give up.
    Peeta: I got my knife.
    Peeta: Let's cut them..up!
    Katniss: Peeta, please stop.

  16. storygirl2014 storygirl2014
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    March 30, 2012 10:51pm UTC
    Love Needs Chemistry
    Chapter 25
    I felt so confused for the rest of the night. Part of me was hurt for being used by Jake, but part of my wanted to forgive him because I loved him. How is it possible to love the guy who broke your heart? My head hurt from thinking so much, so I decided to go to bed. Tomorrow I'm going to have to put on a brave face and act like I don't care about what happened at Homecoming, even though I really did.
    I woke up the next morning with a pounding headache. I jumped in the shower, thinking it would help. Once I got out, I walked to my closet and chose my outfit for the day. I decided on a pair of regular skinny jeans, a striped tank top, and my light blue converse. Once I straightened my hair and grabbed my books, it was time to go to school. Luckily, Danny picked me up so I didn't have to walk to school in the rain. I got into his car, and he asked how I was holding up. I lied, and told him I was fine, but he didn't believe me, and I didn't expect him to.
    "Brooke, you're gonna get through this. Just don't let people know it's bothering you." he told me. Good advice. The hard part was going to be following it.
    "Okay." I said, and got out of the car because we were at the school. I walked to the front doors fast, because I didn't want my straight hair to get messed up by the rain. When I walked inside, I heard people whispering, and I knew it was about me. So I ignored them, and walked to my locker. I stood there for a few minutes, when I felt the presence of someone behind my locker door. I closed my locker, and standing there was Jake. Oh boy.
    "Hey." he said.
    "Jake, what do you want? In case you forgot, I was just a bet. One of the girls you borrow and return." I said, suddenly feeling angry, even though Jake was trying to be nice.
    "I just wanted to make sure you knew that I was sorry. Honestly." he said, looking sincere.
    "Okay. If you'll excuse me, I have to get to class." I said, walking away from him. I couldn't take it. I walked into history and took out my notebook. I started copying notes, and the teacher began to give a lecture. I found myself spacing out during it though, thinking about Jake. Why couldn't I get him off my mind? Class ended, and I collected my books and walked to my next class. The same process was repeated, with Jake on my mind. This happened in every class until lunch. I found Emma, and we decided to sit inside today, since it was rainy out. We talked for a while about tv shows and new music, when suddenly I felt a tap on my shoulder. I turned around, only to come face to face with my one enemy. Carli Lawrence.
    "Hey queen." she said, with a smirk on her face.
    "What do you want Carli?" I asked, not wanting to get into a fight with her right now.
    "Just wanted to say I'm sorry for the way things went down on Saturday. I would hate to be treated like a piece of trash. Although I guess you're used to it." she said, giggling after like she thought she was hilarious.
    "Are you done now?" I asked.
    "Actually, no. You shouldn't have won Homecoming queen. A dorky geek should never win it. And especially if the dorky geek is you." she said. I was shocked.
    "Leave her alone." said a voice. Jake.
    "Jake, I don't need anybody to fight my battles for me, especially not you." I said, getting angry now. I turned to Carli and decided it was time that I tore down once and for all.
    "Carli Lawrence, you are such an evil, manipulative little jerk. You make fun of other, only to make yourself feel good. It's actually kind of sad, how insecure you are. Except nobody feels bad for you, because you give everyone a reason to hate you." I said, raising my voice.
    "Really? Because I'm pretty sure your best friend is in love with me." she said.
    "Yeah, well he's the only one who is." I replied. She looked upset right now, and I really didn't care.
    "You know what? I've been wanting to say this to you for a really long time. You're a bully Carli. You push people around to get your way. You make fun of other people's insecurities only to hide your own. And lastly, you're just completely rude. And if you haven't picked up on it yet, not many people here like you. When you're out of this place, nobody will remember you in a good way. Only as the jerk who made me feel bad about myself, or the girl who brought me down. I'm through putting up with you Carli. I'm done with it." I said, and stood my ground. She looked like she was about to explode, and she stormed off, followed by her two "friends." I was done being treated like dirt in this school. It was time I took a stand for myself. When I heard everyone clapping, I got confused, but then they realized they were clapping for me. I said what everyone else was afraid to. And it felt good telling Carli off.
    ~~~~~~
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  17. storygirl2014 storygirl2014
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    March 30, 2012 4:20pm UTC
    Love Needs Chemistry
    hey readers(:
    so I know I said I was going to end the story in a few chapters, but I don't want to rush it. so I'm gonna make it longer than I expected. thanks for all your faves & support<33

  18. storygirl2014 storygirl2014
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    March 28, 2012 4:34pm UTC
    Love Needs Chemistry
    Chapter 24
    I spent the rest of my night crying in my bedroom. I don't know why I fell for Jake Smith's act. Danny was right, he would never go for a girl like me. Nobody would. But if I was just a bet, why did he ask me to be his girlfriend? Probably to make me seem even more naive. I can't believe it. I finally went to sleep, after hours of crying. I woke up Sunday morning to a huge carton of ice cream and a pile of movies. I didn't remember those being there when I went to sleep. I turned around, and sitting in the plush chair next to my bed was Emma.
    "Hey girl. How are you holding up?" she asked, seeming genuinely concerned.
    "I can't believe he would do something like that to me. Actually. I can. He's just a dumb jock, why would he ever want to be with me?" I asked, tears forming in my eyes again.
    "Honey, any guy would be lucky to have you." Emma said, giving me a hug. I really needed some girl time, and I was glad she brought all of my favorite movies.
    "Why me though? I've never done anything to him. And you know the worst part? I think I loved him." I confided in her.
    "If it makes you feel any better, I never liked him anyways." she said, trying to cheer me up. We spent the day watching She's the Man, Sydney White, and What a Girl Wants.
    "How come Amanda Bynes always ends up with the perfect guy?" I asked, envying her love life.
    "You'll find him one day Brooke. Who knows, you may have even met your perfect guy already." she told me.
    "Hey, I gotta go, my mom's expecting me home for dinner. Wanna come?" she asked, probably feeling bad for leaving me here alone.
    "No thanks. I have some homework I have to finish up." I lied. I just didn't feel like going out tonight. I got up and went downstairs to make myself dinner, when the doorbell rang. I expected it to be one of my brothers, who probably forgot their keys. But when I opened it, Danny was standing there.
    "Hey." he said, walking in and giving me a big hug.
    "It's gonna be okay. Everything's gonna be okay." he whispered in my ear, trying to comfort me. We went in the kitchen, and he made me mac and cheese, my favorite comfort food. A few minutes later, the doorbell rang again. I figured it wasn't one of my brothers, but I didn't know who it was. I walked to the door, and pulled it open. When I did, I was face to face with Jake Smith. The boy who broke my heart.
    "Before you slam the door in my face, let me explain." he said. Should I let him explain?
    Suddenly Danny came in between us, and told Jake he needed to leave.
    "Danny, it's okay." I said.
    "It's okay? This guy breaks your heart, and it's okay? I don't think so. Nobody hurts my best friend and gets away with it." he threatened.
    "Danny. Please." I pleaded. Danny backed away, and I told him that it would be best if he left.
    "Alright. But call me if you need anything, okay?" he asked.
    "Bye Danny." I said, shutting the door. I went into the living room and sat on the couch. The same couch that Jake and I kissed on two nights ago. Had things really changed so quickly? We sat in silence for a few minutes, then I gathered up the courage to talk.
    "Why? Why did you do it?" I asked, ready to hear the answer.
    "Because when I first met you, I thought you would be the easiest person to make fall in love with me, and to make Homecoming queen. But after I met you and got to know you, I actually started falling for you. The dating thing wasn't a part of the whole bet. You have to believe that. I really do like you Brooke. In fact, I think I may love you." he said.
    "Then why go and break my heart? Do you know what it feels like to be used? Of course not, because everyone likes you. You're Mr. Popular, everyone thinks you're great. Life isn't like that for all of us, you know. You can't just go around using people that care about you." I told him, with tears in my eyes threatening to fall.
    "I realized that last night when I saw you cry. I can't stand to see you cry. And knowing that I was the reason for those tears is killing me. I really want you to know how sincerely sorry I am. I know you won't want to take me back, but that doesn't matter. I just want you to know that I did truly care about you, and that I am very, very sorry." he said. I was honestly suprised. Jake Smith never apologized. Especially to losers like me. I felt myself starting to forgive him, and I don't know why. Maybe because I was in love with this boy.
    "I'll see you around." he said, and walked out of my house.
    "Yeah." I mumbled to myself, feeling confused as ever about my feelings. Jake used me, but I felt myself forgiving him easily. But why? Because I knew that I was absolutely 100 percent in love with him. In love with the guy who broke my heart, but still has all the pieces.
    ~~~~~~~~~~
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  19. storygirl2014 storygirl2014
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    March 27, 2012 9:21pm UTC
    Love Needs Chemistry
    Chapter 23
    It was 3 o'clock on Saturday afternoon, and Danny and I were off to watch the Homecoming football game. I really hoped our team won, otherwise the dance wouldn't be as fun. We got to the field and climbed the bleachers, just in time to watch the starting players run onto the field. I cheered for the team, even though I hated football. Which was odd, because my boyfriend was the captain of the team. Oh well. It was a boring beginning, but towards the end of the third quarter, things started to get interesting. Our team had been down the entire game, but we came within two points at the beginning of the fourth quarter. Eventually, we had tied the game and it was down to the last minute and twenty four seconds. I was getting anxious, and I really hoped we won. Luke had the ball and was running toward the end zone, when he tossed it to Jake, who ran with it and scored a touchdown! We won! It was actually exciting to watch towards the second half. I saw Sam in the stands, so Danny and I went to talk to her.
    "Hey Sam! Your brother's a star!" I said.
    "Hey girl! Yeah, you're lucky he's all yours!" she said back to me,
    "This is my best friend Danny, Danny this is Jake's sister Sam." I said, introducing the two of them.
    "Nice to meet you." they both said at the same time. We laughed about it, even though it wasn't really funny. I think we were all just excited that we won the game. Danny went off to congratulate Carli, and I went to go find Jake.
    "Jake!" I yelled once I spotted him in the crowd of rowdy football players.
    "Brooke! Hey!" he called, making his way over to me.
    "Congratulations. Who would've thought my boyfriend would be the football hero?" I asked, leaning in for a kiss.
    "Hey, I gotta go change and go home and get ready for tonight. Who knows, maybe by the end of the night, you'll be Homecoming queen? he said with a wink and walked off.
    I went home and got ready for the dance. My brother drove me over to Jake's for 6:30, and I got out of the car and walked to his front door. He opened it, and stared at me breathtakingly.
    "You look beautiful Brooke." he told me.
    "Thanks. You look very handsome yourself." I told him. We walked to his back patio and his sister came out with her camera and took some pictures. Before I knew it, we were on our way to homecoming. When Jake and I walked in, all eyes were on us. A slow song started to play, and we walked down the stairs to the dance floor and started to slow dance. It felt good to be in his arms. The night went by quickly, and soon they were crowning Homecoming king and queen.
    "Good evening fellow students. I hope you have all had a good time tonight. Not we are going to crown the king and queen that you all voted for. You homecoming king of 2012 is...."
    Jake looked like he was shaking. I guess he really wanted to win this.
    "Jake Smith!" said the announcer. Jake pumped his fist and walked down the aisle all high and mighty, as if her were a real king, slapping peoples hands on the way down.
    "And you 2012 Homecoming queen is..." I honestly didn't know who to expect to win.
    "Brooke Williams!" Wow. Didn't expect that. I walked up to except my crown, feeling kind of weird. Why did people vote for me? Something didn't seem right. The announcer put the crown on my head, and I'm not sure why, but Luke walked up to the stage.
    "Wow Jake. I don't know how you did it, but you make Brooke and Homecoming queen. You win." he said. Jake won? What did he win?
    "Jake, what is he talking about?" I asked him, not wanting to know the answer.
    "Nothing Brooke." he said, trying to silence Luke with his eyes. Luke turned to me and looked fake sympathetic.
    "You didn't know? Jake used you. I made a bet with him, that he couldn't make you a homecoming queen. But he did. In case you were wondering, the whole boyfriend/girlfriend thing wasn't part of the bet." said Luke. I can't believe I fell in love with a complete jerk. Jake seemed as though he actually liked me.
    "Jake. Is that true?" I asked, with tears in my eyes.
    "Part of it, but--"
    "So that's what I am to you. A bet? Good to know where I stand." I ran off the stage and into the parking lot, where I called my brother to come pick me up. This was supposed to be the best night of my life, not the worst.
    ~~~~~~~~~~
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  20. storygirl2014 storygirl2014
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    March 27, 2012 7:20pm UTC
    Love Needs Chemistry
    Chapter 22
    "Ashlee, do you like this dress?" It was the Friday before Homecoming, and I figured I might need a dress for tomorrow. So my sister-in-law and I were dress shopping at the mall.
    "Eh, not your style." she said. I put the dress back and started looking through a different rack. I was looking for something cute, but unique. Something that would make me stand out. I mean, the fact that Jake Smith was my date already made me stand out, but I still needed to look cute. Ashlee and I have been shopping for the past two hours, and found nothing yet. Not to mention we still had to get shoes, jewelry, and make-up. When I was searching for a dress, a familiar looking girl walked into the store. I couldn't quite remember her, but I knew that I had met her before. She walked over me, and I tried to remember her name, but nothing came to mind.
    "Hey! Brooke, right? You're Jake's tudor." she said. That's who she is. Sam. Jake's sister.
    "Hi! How are you?" I asked, trying to be polite.
    'I'm great! You looking for a Homecoming dress?" she asked, and I nodded.
    "Who's the lucky guy?" she asked. Jake didn't tell her we were going together? That's weird.
    "Actually, your brother. He asked me about a week ago, when he asked me to be his girlfriend." I told her.
    "Girlfriend? He didn't even tell me!" she exclaimed.
    "Really?" I asked.
    "Well, he doesn't really tell me anything, so I'm not suprised. But I'm glad you two are together. You're good for him. I like you. The first time I met you, I knew you and Jake were gonna end up together." she told me.
    Was it that obvious?
    "Well, I'm gonna let you get back to shopping. Will I be seeing you tomorrow for pictures?"
    "Maybe, I haven't talked to Jake about that yet. I'll see you soon!" I said.
    "Bye!" said Sam.
    I was honestly suprised that Jake didn't tell his family he had a girlfriend. Maybe he doesn't get along well with his family. Or maybe he doesn't want them to know about me. Whatever, it's probably nothing.
    "Brooke."
    I turned around, and Ashlee was holding a beautiful red dress. I immidiately loved it and went to try it on. It fit perfectly, and when I walked out of the dressing room, Ashlee screamed in excitement.
    "Brooke, it looks so so so so SO good on you!" she squealed.
    "Thanks! When everybody asks me where I got my dress, I'll tell them that my sister-in-law picked it out." I told her, knowing it would make her happy.
    "Yay! Let's go look for shoes and jewelry!" she said excitedly.
    I found a pair of black strappy heels and paired that with a black glitter clutch purse. Ashlee picked out my jewelry, which was a heart locket and a silver and black bracelet. I was really happy with my outfit, and I couldn't wait to wear it tomorrow night. I paid for my stuff and Ashlee drove back to my house.
    "Thanks for your help tonight Ash!" I told her.
    "Anytime sweetie. I can't wait to go dress shopping for the wedding! Haha!" she said.
    I shut the car door and walked up to my house. I opened the front door and went upstairs to my bedroom, exhausted after an entire night filled with shopping. I tried to sleep, but I was too excited for tomorrow. Why? Because I was going to Homecoming with a great guy. A guy who I am completely in love with. Jake Smith.
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    hey guys! below is brooke's homecoming outfit!
    http://www.polyvore.com/cgi/set?id=46142156

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