SarahLynex33
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1 decade ago
tell me when you write the next chapter (: reply
tommygun
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1 decade ago
I really like it! The description is very pretty, the scenery in depth, and the simple phrases of dialogue. How you describe the objects is really nice, and you don't need to put brand names in there, it'll be a great story anyways. I've been writing for years and I think this will be good. Keep working on it cause it rocks(: reply
neoncolorsxx
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1 decade ago
It's reallly good! reply
dreambig01
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1 decade ago
been there, done that. now its like- dont trust ANYONE. reply
LexyMcintyre4Ever
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1 decade ago
love it <3 Write more please :) reply
xxalixjaayxx
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1 decade ago
REALLY GOOD ! KEEP WRITING ! ♥ reply
gtills12
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1 decade ago
This is really good! I'd read itt.. reply
tracylivesunderyourbed · 1 decade ago
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BringMeTheEric · 1 decade ago
booo one direction is terrible
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gouhm · 1 decade ago
They Suck!
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abkamel* · 1 decade ago
Happy Birthday =)
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crystalwaterxx · 1 decade ago
happy birthdayy:D!♥
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Katherine * · 1 decade ago
Happy Birthday!!!!!
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BelieberChicxxx · 1 decade ago
happy birthdayy!!
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Lozzyy · 1 decade ago
I was the 14th! :) Happy Birthday! xox
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xrisaki4ever · 1 decade ago
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fredandgeorgeforever · 1 decade ago
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!
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omgitsmaria · 1 decade ago
Happy Birthday, Beautiful!(:
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firsttimeflying · 1 decade ago
Yah!
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SarahLynex33 · 1 decade ago
tell me when you write the next chapter (:
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tommygun · 1 decade ago
I really like it! The description is very pretty, the scenery in depth, and the simple phrases of dialogue. How you describe the objects is really nice, and you don't need to put brand names in there, it'll be a great story anyways. I've been writing for years and I think this will be good. Keep working on it cause it rocks(:
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neoncolorsxx · 1 decade ago
It's reallly good!
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dreambig01 · 1 decade ago
been there, done that. now its like- dont trust ANYONE.
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LexyMcintyre4Ever · 1 decade ago
love it <3 Write more please :)
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xxalixjaayxx · 1 decade ago
REALLY GOOD ! KEEP WRITING ! ♥
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gtills12 · 1 decade ago
This is really good! I'd read itt..
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