littledreamer · 1 decade ago
this was one of the best stories i read.
i honestly cried my eyes out.
it was amazing ...keep on writing please?
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justin_bieber_xo · 1 decade ago
i really did like this story! one tip i do have is at all the intense parts, expand it and add details to make it more suspencful. to know if you did it correctly ask someone to read it, and when they are done ask them " did it make sense?" and " Did you feel like it was happenening to you,? like did you tense up when you read that part or something" if they answer yes to those questiong, you've hit the jackpott. haha good luck! please dont take that advice the wrong way! i love the story!
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itss_caaaitliin · 1 decade ago
i love this [:
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xchelsssso · 1 decade ago
I think that all your stories are really good, including this one and I want to read more and more :)
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blondebee5 · 1 decade ago
awesome! i love it :D
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kimxlolzx39 · 1 decade ago
omg me too..ahh i just almost cried. GOOD STORY.
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paperheartx · 1 decade ago
i read the whole thing too, & it was completely & utterly amazing !
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sportschickx30 · 1 decade ago
oh my god

ilovethis .
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zachysgrls911 · 1 decade ago
i read the whole thing...thats an amazin story...is this a true story?? write me back!!
xoxox carissa
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zachysgrls911 · 1 decade ago
omg...im readin every story u rote in order n they all made me sad.....idk why she got mad though bc hayley got rejected....but anyways..this one put me over the top n as i right this...im bawling..i wish my ex could read this...maybe he would...take me back..to know how i feel.
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blondebee5 · 1 decade ago
this story was truly amazing and touching! keep writing more stories :)
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itss_caaaitliin · 1 decade ago
omg this is so good ! i loved it ! i hope you write more stories like this !
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zachysgrls911 · 1 decade ago
ohkay now i didnt quite finish the story, but before i do...i read the first few lines..funny thing, me and my boyfriend, were datin 10 months straight too...the day of our ten months anniversery he dumped me..coincidence much? haha
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hearttbreakerrx3 · 1 decade ago
this is really good.
you have a lot of talent(:
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zachysgrls911 · 1 decade ago
i adore emo stories like this...because its how i feel...i dont cut but sumtimes i want to....idk....i miss my ex boyfriend....thats like wow thats truely amazing story..imma read the rests n comment AND fav the ones i likee(:
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xoitsmeemeexo · 1 decade ago
love it [=
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blondebee5 · 1 decade ago
greatt! keep on writting! :D
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itss_caaaitliin · 1 decade ago
ahhmazig as usual [:
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Fresh · 1 decade ago
Keep em coming.
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paperheartx · 1 decade ago
awhhh ! i feel so bad for her she has reallly bad luck ! put up moree please (;
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