OmgItsKay888
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1 decade ago
you said these could be ideas for the writing collab... well i like change and new me the most(: they're all great though!(: reply
XONeverLetMeGoXO
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1 decade ago
she died her hair I forgot to mention that (sorry im new to writing :P) and I'll work on the errors :) but thnx for the feedback :D...Sorry I just replied I didnt see ur comment before :) reply
XONeverLetMeGoXO
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1 decade ago
Oops sorry I meant 2 years later Lol reply
PaperPanda
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1 decade ago
In the last chapter, it said there was a flashback three years ago, when Aria was 16.
But since it was 3 years ago, wouldn't she be 19 now? So what type of school would it be?
The story is confusing, and you didn't reply to my last feedback comment...
(I'm not trying to be mean) reply
PaperPanda
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1 decade ago
Your story is pretty good so far. c:
Only that I thought her hair was brown? (Well that's what it said in the last chapter?)
You just need to proofread for little errors here and there. c: (Like periods, apostrophes, capitals, spelling, and grammar.)
Anyways, good job so far though! C: reply
forever_and_ever
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1 decade ago
New me? or back for now :) reply
CutieForever1
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1 decade ago
Welll i like the last 2. There AWESOME story ideas but for some reason -Change- & -New me?- really catch my eye(:
Hope i helped a little. reply
XONeverLetMeGoXO · 1 decade ago
NMF
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OmgItsKay888 · 1 decade ago
you said these could be ideas for the writing collab... well i like change and new me the most(: they're all great though!(:
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XONeverLetMeGoXO · 1 decade ago
she died her hair I forgot to mention that (sorry im new to writing :P) and I'll work on the errors :) but thnx for the feedback :D...Sorry I just replied I didnt see ur comment before :)
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XONeverLetMeGoXO · 1 decade ago
Oops sorry I meant 2 years later Lol
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PaperPanda · 1 decade ago
In the last chapter, it said there was a flashback three years ago, when Aria was 16.
But since it was 3 years ago, wouldn't she be 19 now? So what type of school would it be?
The story is confusing, and you didn't reply to my last feedback comment...
(I'm not trying to be mean)
reply
PaperPanda · 1 decade ago
Your story is pretty good so far. c:
Only that I thought her hair was brown? (Well that's what it said in the last chapter?)
You just need to proofread for little errors here and there. c: (Like periods, apostrophes, capitals, spelling, and grammar.)
Anyways, good job so far though! C:
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forever_and_ever · 1 decade ago
New me? or back for now :)
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CutieForever1 · 1 decade ago
Welll i like the last 2. There AWESOME story ideas but for some reason -Change- & -New me?- really catch my eye(:
Hope i helped a little.
reply