Silencewhisper
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1 decade ago
i can hear you typing COME ONNNNNNN reply
Silencewhisper
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1 decade ago
but heres the thing, I DIDNT SAVE hehehe, now stop looking at my computer screen GOSH! reply
Silencewhisper
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1 decade ago
its still their!!! yes i know i spelled that wrong reply
Silencewhisper
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1 decade ago
you should just try to come up with a a good conflict and try to edit in paragraphs to make more sense but i think you have a good story so far reply
Silencewhisper · 1 decade ago
how do i help?
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Silencewhisper · 1 decade ago
i can hear you typing COME ONNNNNNN
reply
Silencewhisper · 1 decade ago
but heres the thing, I DIDNT SAVE hehehe, now stop looking at my computer screen GOSH!
reply
Silencewhisper · 1 decade ago
its still their!!! yes i know i spelled that wrong
reply
Silencewhisper · 1 decade ago
you should just try to come up with a a good conflict and try to edit in paragraphs to make more sense but i think you have a good story so far
reply