SickOfTheHate · 1 decade ago on quote 4630701
Alaina or Macy
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SickOfTheHate · 1 decade ago on quote 4427890
idk why my whole comment didnt go through then.. but its realy good the only criticism is i have is watch your tences you said werent instead of arent etc etc... lol i only picked it up cause mums a writer :P ... uhm im kinda new to story writing to if youve got a spare moment take a look ? if not thats cool... anyways its really good...

KEEP WRITING
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SickOfTheHate · 1 decade ago on quote 4427890
haha :) its realy realy good <3 the only kind of criticism i have is watch your tences... you said werent instead of arent etc etc ... lol my mums a writer thats the only reason i picked up on it <3 but its realy good... lol

uhm im sort of a newby to writing to anychance you could have a look at one of my storys ?

KEEP WRITING!
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SickOfTheHate · 1 decade ago on quote 4399509
her quotes ar elaright, but ive seen better she gets heeps of faves cause shes well known ...
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